ARHI FF:Strings Of Illusion-T1(PROLOGUE/CHP 1- 5) - Page 27

Okay so thapa was just somebody who works!!

But. I have this imagination that is running in he fell n he saw the name plate of the mill hmm so is there something opposite to the place he was in? As in the opposite building! :p I know am thinking too much! Like u said I'll just wait for the first chapter!

Okay now characters since khushis dad is divorced that second wife could be a possible threat and even more her grannys adopted daughter n her family to top it she has a son! So these are the possible negative ppl! I don't seeing them itself gimmes a negative feel!

Raizadhas almost all the elderly are no more! Sad man! Aunty seems strict social worker n all! :p

But now clean slate I'm just gonna read the first chap without any picture in the background.

Cheers

cast luks good. now i kinda have an impression about how the characters are gonna b. looking forward 2 see if it matches with what u hvae in ur mind

Nice introduction of family...eagerly awaiting ur updates...

awesum is d only word...

loved the style for introducing the cast! family tree! very nice:)

nice one dear... specially the family tree is a gr8 help

keep writing

So exciting that U are coming back with another masterpiece. Love ur style of writing and can't wait for you to bring this story to life. Please p.m. me the Blog link when U r ready.

Interesting...PM the next update :D

Really god prologue can't wait for FF to start... I am hooked... Start updating soon...