ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#4 Ch10 Pg120 20/02 EXT

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

Loved it

Arnav is a jerk beast i am sure he is not human.
Whatx the difference here between rapist nd husband.

Just this much rapist force himself on unwilling girl .
Here arnav impose himself on not ready girl

I felt bad for poor girl.
Poor girl slept with so much pain. She was already not feeling well.

Its guf he get to knw wat they did.
Is that girl payal whom Akash loved.

Continue soon plzz
Cnt wait for next part

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-Anu13-

@-Anu13-

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Arnav is such a ruthless and worst character in this ff.. Initially he was so caring but that GG message has to ruin everything ..my doubt is did arnav not felt for a single moment that Khushi was a virgin? why does he still have a doubt that thinking he is her initial ones ? confused with this point now

nice update ..Poor khushi my blood boiled when i read her pain ..she is suffering from fever still he behaved like a beast no he is a male who**

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jisa

@jisa

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

that was awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
arnav didn realized that khushi was virgin!!!!!!!!
i hoped that to happen...!!!
really feeling sorry for khushi...
w8ng for next!!!!!!!

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Ohhh god wat an update!! painful... Khushi s state is so dam painful... n wat hurts me more is tht i have heard it from many when they got married n their first nights... n few are as dreadful as this... a woman has so so many dreams abt it... she surrnders her soul n d beast cud just reach her body... n when he does tht... d disrespect to her surrenderl just shatters her soul forever! it brought me so many memories of such incidents back...I must say being unmarried yet somewer it scares me too but i know for a fact tht i wil never let anyone just walk thru me... i want to see tht in Khushi...i know she is just too young n innocent here...but pain wil teach her...i wanna see how u take this Appy...

n this was total justice... how u characterized Arnav... Yes his mechanic attitude is rightly justified... this woman is atleast makin him aware he is somewhere human... tht subtle concern was soothin to see between al tht pain...but God it was really really painful!

n i got reminded of how different it was in ONS2...wel thats y i love u... just love ur versitality n clarity in characterisation👏

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SAM

@kkyajo

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#315

amazingly written... feeling so much pain for khushi...hope arnav realise and see khushi's innocence and give her his love n care

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MastiMuskaan

@MastiMuskaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

hey appy...

i am muskaan..

i have sent a pm to you..for your help..

please see it when you re free.

i will wait for your reply...

Thanks😊

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snehashetty34

@snehashetty34

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#317

Arnav took her innocence her virginity without her consent and he is unaware of it and top of that he still thinks she is more evil than her mother.. unbelievable..
how can he not recognize he is her first seriously this man has gone blind to the things other than himself.. i hate him more than gazal gupta..
as always amazing update..