ARSHI FF: ~PAWN cr~(BFTW3)#4 Ch10 Pg120 20/02 EXT - Page 34

Awesome update.it's an epitome of perfection.

Really appy I am speechless my eyes are still moist.
I can feel her pain,poor gal.she was happy when she saw her husband.even though she is in pain she is happy.

even when he is entering her beastly manner also she is silent.may be she is thinking it is her right to give herself to hon. so innocent she is.she gone through lot of pain in this process but still she needed him to console her.show her some care and sooth her with some sweet words...
But sigh... He is being judgemental,cruel,beast with her.he crushed her brutally.


thanks to akash at last he dare to tell about the fact how their family members treating kushi. Atleast little bit relived he will handle his family now.hope after arnav's warning his family will not dare to hurt kushi anymore .

I really hope he will soon realise her innocent

Thnx for the epic update..s




Really my heart goes out for princess.

Originally posted by: karsvinu

i dont like him...bloody riazada...he raped that poor innocent soul...he better recover soon from this MU...my blood is boiling after his update...😡

Originally posted by: Shaaz.gul

awsome dear bt only one thing is bothering me will this ff of urs get haapy ending or it will as bitter as reality plz do tell appy

Originally posted by: srahs

Loved it

Arnav is a jerk beast i am sure he is not human.
Whatx the difference here between rapist nd husband.

Just this much rapist force himself on unwilling girl .
Here arnav impose himself on not ready girl

I felt bad for poor girl.
Poor girl slept with so much pain. She was already not feeling well.

Its guf he get to knw wat they did.
Is that girl payal whom Akash loved.

Continue soon plzz
Cnt wait for next part

eee...:) :D update !!!!


the starting was perfect ...!!!!! just so perfect ...it was like a ray of hope ...

but but ...the message by mrs. GG !!!!! ruined the moment ...

and i was like ..."what the ...???? " when i read that she finally lost it to her husband ...:(

but she was still so happy...my heart cried out for the poor girl ...who was finding warmth and love even in this !!!!!

i wished arnav would have seen her in pain and realise what had he done to the poor soul !!!! i thnk u'll show that ...may be !!! please :(


again i was surprised to see his relationship with akash ...he is a good brother and it always amazes how infront of his family arnav always supports khushi !!!!


brilliant update !!!!!!! lovely!!!!

Awesome update!!very well written!!
Poor Khushi!! Life is really unfair with her

Originally posted by: Appy_Indy

please google the word that you have mentioned...the update doesnot describe or even hint that word at all...arnav didnot force her at all... so please dont use that word in this fanfic.

Hi why the hell ur using rape
Is arnav forced her
Or try to misbehaved wid her
They are husband wife
she was little unconformtable but later she was happy that she had given the full rights as a wife sooo plzzz stop using rape word
This word is not made for this ff plzxxx

nice update. Poor Kyushi feeling bad about her.hope he will understand her and give her the love and respect she deserves. Please update soon.

Originally posted by: KIARSHI

sooo this khushi is not similar to my ONS2 khushi ha?

ONS2 khushi was mentally very stable who faced the toughest circumstances of life

sooo this khushi,will she break down when she comes to know the reality?😕