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Posted: 12 years ago

Poor rima vctim bangayy..whos ds man

Aysha ne aysa kya kia hoga pastme …kisi missn reltd hay kya

Realyy bcm anxs 2 know da past

Arjun s very snsbl hr ….lv da way he supprtd aysha

Bt specly like da part whr riya unrstnd arjun , dat he jst gv hr supprt nthng els😊😃

Precap par ke ready thi ke koi to big misundrstng wla trck hoga bt thnk gd

Nahi hua….riya s chrctr is awsm as al ws …ek taraf aysha ka itna care kar rahi hay n un dono ko sath dekh kar khud ko khud hi samjha leti hay…lv hr👏

I know its nt a ariya one yet dr thorasa hi sahi ariya dedona plzzz

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Posted: 12 years ago
tina :


who's this perverted guy that killed Reema to take revenge from aisha ? and what kind of betrayal is he talking about ? whatever be the case, he will definitely have to repent his deeds once ETF gets hold of him. loved the way in which arjun offered support to aisha ..but ETF team failing to gather much info about the murderer means that he's no ordinary guy. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one...
Reema became the victim of revenge...
Revenge nd revenge..
Aisha betrayed whom??
Good going...
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
loved how arjun supported aisha
glad to knw tht riya didn't misunderstood thm
intersting precap
thanx 4 pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big thanks for everyone who have liked and commented on my update😊
I know many want it to be a bit on Ariya also, but i dont promise anything.
It will mainly be on the case, but i'd try to incorporate few scenes of Ariya, though they wont be romantic
and also a big thanks for appreciating the case, and encouraging me to write more.
And now let's not bore anyone anymore, and here's chapter 5-Part A.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 5 Part A

"Arjun and Riya, you both go and see what you can get from the post-mortem results, and Riya when are Aisha's friends coming?" Rathore asked.

"They should be here in a few minutes," Riya said.

"Ok, then we'll interrogate them and then everyone can disperse," Rathore said.

Within a few minutes wait, they had reached and were taken in the interrogation room. Rathore and his team went to question them.

"Sir, iss ladki ka naam Julie hein, woh aur Reema ek ki class mein the, and yeh Arshad hein, Julie's boyfriend," Riya said to everyone. Julie and Arshad looked very nervous at all the people eyeing them with anger. They didnt understand why everyone was looking with disgust also at them.

"Just how could you leave a girl alone after midnight to go back home?" Arjun barked at them.

"You irresponsible people! You are the first people responsible for her death! It's a shame that you even call yourselves friends!" Rathore shouted at them. His hands itched to beat them, but he knew he couldn't beat them.

Both got scared at Rathore's and Arjun's tone. Julie even started to cry out of fear, and Arshad was trying to comfort her all the while looking with scared eyes at the team.

In another situation, Riya would have felt sympathy for these two, since it wasn't easy to deal with Arjun and Rathore's anger but right now even she wanted to beat them for their stupidity and recklessness.

"We didnt bring you here to cry, so please stop this drama and answer us," Rathore said very irritated.

Julie was still crying and was no longer even in a position to answer out of fear, so Arshad replied, "It's not what you think! We didnt leave Reema, but she insisted that she was going to be fine. Actually Julie had to catch the last bus to her place, had we gone to drop Reema, she would have missed her bus, hence Reema insisted that she'll be fine and could go on her own."

"She insisted, and you as a man let her go alone? After midnight, you left her alone?" Arjun said not believing that man's impudence to utter such nonsense.

"She said she'll be fine," Arshad persisted slightly.

"WELL LET ME TELL YOU THAT SHE ISNT FINE, INFACT SHE'S DEAD BECAUSE OF YOUR IRRESPONSIBILITY!" Rathore shouted at the top of his voice.

Everyone were shocked for a few seconds seeing Rathore in such a state, even Shree and Chotu and Riya felt scared on seeing Rathore's new avatar.

"But you were her friend nah, how could you let her go alone?" Riya asked with tears looking at Julie. "You are both a stigma on friendship!"

"Unfortunately we can't arrest you under any charges, but if we get even one lead hinting that both of you are implicated in this, then i promise you both are going to wish that you had really missed that last bus!" Rathore said scathingly.

"So tell us what happened that night as from the disco," Arjun said coldly.

Since Julie was still sobbing, Arshad had to summarize what happened as from the time these three met and separated. Nothing sounded even remotely suspicious to the ETF team. They had met after the class for some fun, and after dancing for a long time, they had left that disco to return back.

"And anything suspicious?" Rathore persisted.

"Well nothing, we three remained close for almost the whole time. Except maybe that guy," Arshad started shooting a look at Julie.

"Which guy?" Arjun probed.

"Well there was a guy, he was constantly looking at Reema since he entered the disco. He even took a seat next to ours. Well except looking at her, he didnt do anything, he didnt come to introduce himself neither asked her for a dance. Afterwards when leaving we didnt see him. Thats all," Arshad said.

"And why did you think he's involved?" Arjun asked.

"Well only because he was looking at her for a long time, his eyes never left her at all while he was in that disco," Arshad said, "we even teased Reema about her secret admirer!"

After a few more questions, they allowed that couple to go, but not before again having blasted them about their thoughtlessness.

"Shree first go and check that disco, and bring all video footages you can get. Nowadays all discos have a CCTV installed for safety reasons. Maybe we can find a little more about that admirer or if anyone else was also after her!" Arjun said.

After this everyone separated to do their works. Chotu had to find and bring any man who had a police records related to anything with that park, while Arjun and Riya went to know about the post-mortem results. While Rathore would go to Reema's workplace and afterwards to her campus to know more about her, her friends and enemies if any. They all left Aisha alone in the office.

Aisha was still sitting on that sofa gathering all her courage to deal with the present. She was just remembering everything about Reema when suddenly her mobile beeped. She had just received a MMS. She opened the MMS and when she saw what was in it, the mobile slowly fell from her hand. She looked in a horrified way at her mobile, feeling scared to see that message again.

Arjun and Riya were the first one to return, and so they went to have a look at Aisha. When they reached her office, they were shocked seeing Aisha in a paralysed state looking at horror at her mobile. Riya rushed to her side, asking her what had happened.

While Arjun guessed that something was wrong, and it must be related to her mobile. He went to pick up the mobile, and read what was written. His face also changed colours slightly at the message, and he looked at Aisha's face.

"God, i'd kill that guy when i get him!" he said to himself.

so how was it?

PM later 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago


superb update...

loved it...

loved how raute rathore scolded reema's friends... how could they just leave her that too at night...

whats in the mms?

cant wait for next part...

continue soon...

yayyy me first... :D ;)
Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Again Suspense huh??? awesome part... the way Rathore nd Arjun talked na na shouted at them surely dey wuld hv been dead den nd dere... wat's n dat MMS dat caused such a reaction frm Aisha nd Arjun??? sumthn surely related to Reema's death... update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
niceee!!!

dnt tell me dat mms contains how he killed reema!!!

update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Di grt update..
wow arjun rathod shouting..
mujhe mms me dar lgta h di..
loved d update..

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