ARHI FF~Hierarchy~Th#1 - Page 8

Still screaming after reading that…. Took me ages to take out time to read it and now that I have it. I want to read it again and again and again and again and again and again and again.

Where do I start, all your character's look so thought out. It looks like you have been planning this story for a while. I'm in love with everyone already even Aman. I'm just waiting for Shakti, I'm dying to meet.

Love that your inspiration has been Muhammad Ali. I have done quite a few bit of work on him over the years. I truly admire him from what he did in his career, his fight for equality, his transformation in religion or his presence at the 2012 games this year, everything about him is just "I'm speechless". Sorry! Of track.

I agree that you said it's a straight forward story, but the concept you have on sport. It's truly unique a topic that needed to be discussed long back. I couldn't think of a better writer to project the true issues in sports. The ones I hate! when I watch sports. And if you have been wanting to write this for a long time you have picked the perfect timing. This year has had many up and down in sports the Olympic brought out a lot of these issues that I hope you will discuss: cheating, family life, self-battle and even media battle. Mention some of them and I'll be over the moon. One question I have to ask

Why boxing? I'm sure you have been asked this question many times but I still want to know y boxing?

Now to the main characters:
First OMG you Arnav can speak… his got a big mouth😲. Love the fact that his come from a deprived background, his overcome so much to be where he is.it just make the story so much more realistic. And I've seen youth clubs that open for them the mentors they have to help them out of the messes there in. And he had that mentor yay! It's weird how people assume kids from backgrounds like that will be bad my hearts went out to him. And your story has just began, how my heart is going to react over time. But I just hate how he thinks women can't play sports Khushi it's up to you to change his opinion now.

Khushi is amazing!!!! in this nothing like your old Khushis. This one is much more modern, but still her bubble self. I love her! The independent girl she is, with so much confidence and mischief. How she's going to fight for women. Can't wait to see what she does to Arnav and how their love grows.

another essay for you to read!!!!😳

Originally posted by: babyhumz

Still screaming after reading that'. Took me ages to take out time to read it and now that I have it. I want to read it again and again and again and again and again and again and again. Aww thanks sis. Glad you enjoyed it

Where do I start, all your character's look so thought out. It looks like you have been planning this story for a while. I'm in love with everyone already even Aman. I'm just waiting for Shakti, I'm dying to meet. Yep VWT, Hierarchy and SWE are all thought out FF's of mine😳. Weeks of planning and drafting the plot. Ahhh Shakti isa key character in this ff for me too😉

Love that your inspiration has been Muhammad Ali. I have done quite a few bit of work on him over the years. I truly admire him from what he did in his career, his fight for equality, his transformation in religion or his presence at the 2012 games this year, everything about him is just "I'm speechless". Sorry! Of track. LOL thanks

I agree that you said it's a straight forward story, but the concept you have on sport. It's truly unique a topic that needed to be discussed long back. I couldn't think of a better writer to project the true issues in sports. The ones I hate! when I watch sports. And if you have been wanting to write this for a long time you have picked the perfect timing. This year has had many up and down in sports the Olympic brought out a lot of these issues that I hope you will discuss: cheating, family life, self-battle and even media battle. Mention some of them and I'll be over the moon. I noticed that. It wasn't as if I was waiting for this specific moment. I always thought of starting Hierarchy when VWT finishes. Coincidently the time is now. Funny isn't it... And another funny thing is how my story actually does relate to a few of the topics and problems you mentioned. Thinking about it now i'm surprised with my self😆

One question I have to ask

Why boxing? I'm sure you have been asked this question many times but I still want to know y boxing? Honestly I thought of the idea for this plot waaay early last year while I was watching interviews of Muhammad Ali and his fights. It really inspired me to write something along these lines and even merge a little Arhi magic into it😆

Now to the main characters:
First OMG you Arnav can speak' his got a big mouth😲. Love the fact that his come from a deprived background, his overcome so much to be where he is.it just make the story so much more realistic. And I've seen youth clubs that open for them the mentors they have to help them out of the messes there in. And he had that mentor yay! It's weird how people assume kids from backgrounds like that will be bad my hearts went out to him. And your story has just began, how my heart is going to react over time. But I just hate how he thinks women can't play sports Khushi it's up to you to change his opinion now. You'll definately enjoy the next part then. I can guarantee you'll have a smile on your face at the end.

Khushi is amazing!!!! in this nothing like your old Khushis. This one is much more modern, but still her bubble self. I love her! The independent girl she is, with so much confidence and mischief. How she's going to fight for women. Can't wait to see what she does to Arnav and how their love grows. you'll have to wait and see.

another essay for you to read!!!!😳 Thanks so much! I have been waiting to reply like this for a long time😆

Originally posted by: -Zara-

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