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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#371

OK so another entrant for Khushi ... who is this Shakti ??

Glad to see Khushi able to keep a strong hold on herself before Arnav.

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#372

This is far more interesting than I thought...😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#373

😃 ...

Arnavs so desperately trying to catch Khushi's interest ... 😆

but Khushi doesn't seem likely to get affected by him in a hurry ...

Aman and Shakthi ... both seem to have a soft spot for Khushi ...

liking the story Zara ...

Edited by Kishmish - 12 years ago

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

hey i am glad you dont feel pressurised to write long chapters coz your work is good just as it is...keep updating this FF regularly :)

khushi has guessed that he is upto something...hmmm...good 😊

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ARSHI_FAN11

@ARSHI_FAN11

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

Ok Zara am finally here and started reading hierarchy (you know na I am a slow start 😳)

I will not start the comparison with anything but I have to congratulate you for your versatility 👏 👏👏👏👏

This is amazing work !!! I love this Arnav - he has been through a lot and it sure would have left a mark on his personality in general - glimpse of which we already saw... Obviously I didn't like his judgmental side but I loved this Payal - God she is something 👏👏👏 Akash beware!!!!!

Aman-Arnav dynamic are interesting to watch - really... but then bet and Arnav trying to get close to Khushi for that reason (though I know at the back of my mind that it will lead to something more meaningful and pure) I can't seem to let go that restlessness that its starting as a bet... I know thats how you have drafted it and thats exactly how I want to read it - they way you have envisioned this story 😃

You mentioned about Khushi's brother... when do we get to see more of him??? And whats with Ajay Malhotra and Shakti???? Did I miss out something???

I have one request though, only if thats possible for you... can we have more frequent updates pls??? Only if its possible 😉

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#376

New characters coming is making me confuse. Why was Shakti getting made when Arnav was staring at Khushi?
I am scared about the bet. I think it will hurt Khushi really bed. :/

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saarah96

@saarah96

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

this story is really interestiing
and brillant update
why was shakthi cold with shashi?
arnav need to realise that he shouldnt be doing all this
he will eventually regret it