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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: drunkiiebabe

sis ur one amazing women i guess we got some connection going on cuz today the weather is horrible with a snow storm n u updates muah big bear hug to you interesting title ground level poor arnav is stuck a ground level n khushi aint letting him moving exactly😉
khushi helping nk in his training i adore their friendship it so cute like i said i love the different shades of characters n how the realtionships changes it just so fun to read n it makes it interesting arnav eyes are on khushi n khushi knows it khushi confused on why he smiling she thought the opposite n he doing exactly the opposite n aman man he up their i just love him n arnav staring at khushi i wonder in this whole bet thing he gonna fall for her but poor thing khushi aint letting him tough battle between them😆

hmm ajay n shakti looks like ajay n shashi were friends but something happens i wonder if they are rivals n shakti is ajay number 1 player LOL and here i thought everyone had looked at the character sketch on my blog as i have said before.😆

khushi call aman cheshire sometimes hehe haha arnav attractive to her already he losing focus i think t the bet is gonna go out the window in a couples of days he begining to fall for her hmm why did shakti got mad when he notice arnav looking at khushi does he likes her?? want to know more about these two haha
It's written on the blog's character sketch who shakthi is. 😆

khushi already knows he upto something man this girl is tough arnav is gonna have a hard time gettting her aorund cant wait to read more
yep
awesome update
loved it
love you sis muah


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ARSHI_FAN11

Ok Zara am finally here and started reading hierarchy (you know na I am a slow start 😳) LOL finally😆

I will not start the comparison with anything but I have to congratulate you for your versatility 👏 👏
This is amazing work !!! I love this Arnav - he has been through a lot and it sure would have left a mark on his personality in general - glimpse of which we already saw... Obviously I didn't like his judgmental side but I loved this Payal - God she is something 👏👏👏 Akash beware!!!!! it'll will be interesting as the story goes on about payal and akash.

Aman-Arnav dynamic are interesting to watch - really... but then bet and Arnav trying to get close to Khushi for that reason (though I know at the back of my mind that it will lead to something more meaningful and pure) I can't seem to let go that restlessness that its starting as a bet... I know thats how you have drafted it and thats exactly how I want to read it - they way you have envisioned this story 😃 we shall see😉

You mentioned about Khushi's brother... when do we get to see more of him??? And whats with Ajay Malhotra and Shakti???? Did I miss out something??? LOL and here i thought everyone had looked at the character sketch on my blog as i have said before. It's written on the blog who shakthi is. 😆

I have one request though, only if thats possible for you... can we have more frequent updates pls??? Only if its possible 😉 will try.


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama

That was sweet Zara,😛

Really liked how Arnav is trying hard to get Khushi like him.
But the problem will be Aman! really?😉
I am sure he is going to be the singing canary!🤢 😡
It'll give Khushi reason to pounce on him and then its back to square one for him!
Like this NK and Khushi bond! of course.
Both have the tenacity to persist.😃
Wonder what'll happen next!
Will Aman be licked in the practice spar and Arnav makes his entry???😕
Now the Malhothra connection is interesting!
Wonder where this is leading to? LOL and here i thought everyone had looked at the character sketch on my blog as i have said before. It's written on the blog who shakthi is. 😆

Anyway waiting for your next update!
Any one. The choice is yours!😉 😆


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Nichuss

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so kushi..helps nk in his training...
kushi conscious f someone watching her...n found it
none othr than arnie...😃 yep arnav is a stalker😆

kushi confused seeing arnie smiling at her ,,ha ha ha 😆

shakti too much attittude...
but i liked the way he provoked aman...😉 (amanji...
gussaa math karo...u r favi...) shakthi is my fav character😉

oye ye my arnie...fallen for kushi...😳
kushi not giving any +ve signal 4 arn...he he he😆
hw dare u kushi..? hw can u dbt my arnie..?😡 lol suspiciousness

arnie so smartly replied...the dbtful que f kushi 👏
so arnie had a 2nd thght...😳
arnie sad on seeing kushi's hand... a little guilt being played

kushi so smart...👏...

arnie had to work hard...

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zaara...dear...u r xam over...? nope. I told you yaar. got my exam next week and another 2 week after that. then i got my final 5 in may. pray for me sis.

not at all getting time to scrap u all...m sorry for tat..😕

hope ur exams all wr gud n ok...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Really nice update, Zara!
Thank you so much for the PM!!!

P.S.: More later..sorry 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update zee

Arnav will start to like Khushi and then they'll be a thing and that's when Aman will come in and talk about the bet and ArHi separate right?

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Posted: 12 years ago
O gosh...Arnav has trapped himself in that stupid bet...awesome update!!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
yeah didnt look at the blog guilty sorry but i did change my comment after looking at the blog but i think u reply before seeing my change comment it is didnt change much but the part about shakti after i found out who he is here it is n added a little
khushi helping nk in his training i adore their friendship it so cute like i said i love the different shades of characters n how the realtionships changes it just so fun to read n it makes it interesting arnav eyes are on khushi n khushi knows it khushi confused on why he smiling she thought the opposite n he doing exactly the opposite haha it only being like a day at the ring n both akash n arnav r gone haha n aman man he up their i just love him n arnav staring at khushi i wonder in this whole bet thing he gonna fall for her but poor thing khushi aint letting him hmm ajay n shakti looks like ajay n shashi were friends but something happens hmmm khushi call aman cheshire sometimes hehe haha arnav attractive to her already he losing focus i think the bet is gonna go out the window in a couples of days he begining to fall for her so shakti is shashi son that why he got mad seeing arnav looking at khushi brotherly love n here i thought he is in love sorry *holding me ears* so why is shakti not playing in shashi club when he is his son that nuts is their something missing like he the best boxer but no in his daddy club n aman representing shashi is their someting or am i looking way into to it i want to know more haha khushi already knows he upto something man this girl is tough arnav is gonna have a hard time gettting her aorund cant wait to read more
sorry guilty about not looking at the blog *holding my ears with a pouty face* i think your exams r still going all the best
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it...awesome. Khushi is v shrewd. I like her. Mr. Raizada it's gonna b difficult for u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm. I really liked that khushi is not stupid enough to fall for a guy just cuz he is staring at her. Smart girl.

As always, I like the way u build ur characters. It's different in all the stories and its always a surprise to read them :)

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