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serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

Wonderful writing...but isn't the story moving too fast?

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NISHI

@nishi22

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

Jus read chap 1..pretty long..thanx for it..awesum update...plz continue soon..waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting waiting..:-)

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aditi07

@aditi07

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Intense... u rightly described it!!
such a different & engrossing story.. very intriguing!!
what khushi arnav have..dont know what to name it.. but Strong & intense.. indescribable & passionate!!
plzz continue soon... 😊

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gurukhush

@gurukhush

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

The beginnings are absolutely fantastic😃😃 Maybe the point where Chapter 1 ended left most of us, I am sure we all agree, DEPRIVED!!!😳 You sure have a huge sense of timing and the right shot😃 Kudos to you for such a fantastic start..👏👏 But please, I beg of you, Keep the story simple.. many sub-plots and sub-sub plots tend to confuse the main plot..though that may tend to add lure, maybe a little intrigue to the story overall😳😉😳 CONfusion galore if that were to happen😳😳 But congrats WELL BEGUN IS HALF DONE👏👏😉 Please keep updating regularly if not too quickly...THANX.

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deeptha93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#265

amazing update! am loving the intensity in the story!!

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Just letting you know Im waiting and also stalking.

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Deepti

@deepti1906

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Posted: 12 years ago

#267

couldn't comment earlier... but it was an awesome update...👏👍🏼 I had a huge smile on my face while reading this...😃😃 Am so in love with this Arnav...❤️❤️ and such a long update...😊 so much happened in one single update and i loved every bit of it...❤️❤️❤️

Do update soon...😊😊

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khushboo

@khushboo1234

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

this is wonderful ss...loved it...and i like this arnav???plz pm me whenever u update the next part...

and the chapter 1 was pretty much long😃...plz make ur other updates long too..😉...waiting for ur pm///

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ARSHI_FAN11

@ARSHI_FAN11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#269

I have become a fan of your work after reading a few of them - all thanks to the collab FF where I first read your work and soon started looking for more 👏👏👏👏 Simply Amazing!!!

While reading this one I could actually feel the intense gaze of Arnav on Khushi and I was totally smitten by this Arnav (all over again 🤣 ) I just want to read this story exactly the way its in your head without it being influenced by any other's wishes or fantasies (well I normally like to read a writer's mind, what can I say 😊 )

First chapter and that too so long !!!! And update everyday ?!?!?! Kwel 🥳 I am really good at stalking so will surely not miss any update 😉