An ArHi SS:Secrets #1 (Thread 2 link Pg 1)

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Zehra

@senorzorro12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

I like the characters Simple delicate Khushi and a Man who is in love with her already
just as i thought
i m in love with it
chap 1 was like a calm sea.. EXCELLENT 😳
andthanks for the PM 😊

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Love love love your long and brilliant update! 👏 I do get a sense that Arnav loves Khushi! However, I'm not sure how Khushi feels! I would love to read more of Khushi's pov! I thought she was very sensible in taking her time to decide about Arshi's proposal! OMG and they had a pre-nuptial too! So Khushi is not in their room! This is such a cliff hanger! Could she be by the poolside?!

Please don't tell me she ditched ASR! 😭 Is Khushi up to something? I'm very nervous and feeling restless! Dying to read the next chapter! Please update soon!!

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LIKEDMG

@LIKEDMG

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

Juhi...its awesome...next part plz...whr is she?

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Awesome start

love the jet speed by which the story is moving ahead

I am sure this one would be a smashing hit

Thx for the PM

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Everything happened so quick and at the end...bang,,where the hell is Khushi..??

With their pre nuptial agreement and all ..I'm feeling a little weird/anxious...

Brilliant!

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

Wow, as you mentioned in your note the marriage happened real quick.

Now suddenly everything has become so mysterious.😲

So i guess Khushi is the one with all "Secrets".

Then you threw the "prenup" Bomb as well!!

And with this cliffhanger ending i am just sitting biting my nails furiously ! 😕😆

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Praba

@prabbs

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Yet again unpredictable update..loved it,the simplicity of it.

Now have to wait for the next chapter... For the mystery to unfold .

You like leaving us at the edge of our seats...

Thanks for the PM Juhi.

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riafna

@riafna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Reswa..

Arshi's marriage in second chapter??? New trend it will be..
They got married.. She was looking for love in his eyes???
Give us Khushi's pov too..
Where was Khushi missing disappearing from Buaji's house? Where and why? Even sometimes he was dissapointed she was not there...
Khushi disappeared in first night?. How?
Superb update. Thanks for pm

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

my initial reaction was
THEY GOT MARRIED!!!! YEAH YAHA CHAL KIA RAHA HAI?
my 2nd reaction was
ARNAV LOOKS PRETTY CLEAN, IS KHUSHI TRYING TO CON HIM?
my 3rd reaction
i cant wait i just cant, i dont knw why but i feel my poor chotu arnav is going to suffer. i hope he does not suffer emotionally or his trust does not get broken