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reshkn

@reshkn

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

first...

a big hug for the long update..i have been looking forward to an update..but this quick..this must be my lucky day..😉

a very adorable arnav...who wouldnt fall for his charm...how he rambles to spend some time with her...😳

the garden scene was just WOW...*aww*

loved the way u described their moments together...truly magical😊

i liked the sensation part where she could feel him already...the genre is definitely intense..i can sense it already...😊😊

an instant attraction and an instant decision following...real quick..we are in for more suprises arent we ??😉

Nani and Anjali know their chotte very well...so they wantd to knw more about her😉

finally,

I m hooked...😊😊

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

wow wow u r back. Long prologue, waitng 4 update.

U updated alrdy. Yipee. So many in one update. Khushi noticed arnav. In sheesh mahal, marriage proposal. Supr fast.

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Sanjana

@sweet_sanju

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

r

Nice update
Khushi also noticed Arnav
Arnav just don't want to loose her
Marriage proposal for Khushi
Update soon
Excited to read next part
Thanks for d pm

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Wow chap 1 already... I never read about Arnav like this...a completly smitten Arnav Singh Raizada...intensity is already here..in their look,walk,talk even in the air surrounding them...decission is taking rapidly here...and can smell problems are on the way...and i never mind if u make me to shed tears soo much...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

hot damn!!! I can see the beginnings of the intensity already!!!

I am just sitting back and enjoying where you take this story! I wonder is khushi has someone else in her life already! I don't know why I have this feeling...

Loved chapter 1!!

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

WOW!
Such an intriguing update! :)

Can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Aww I loved everything Arnav did just to get her to come to Sheesh Mahal... their interactions and feelings were captured perfectly by your writing skills. And jalebis play out their importance too.

So NK has been introduced and Arnav seems amicable to him... Wow the first chapter and Arnav want to marry her...