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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#651

Loved it...
Cant wait for the next chapter..

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

I loved the scene, the closeness that Arnav and Khushi feel for each other...the Christmassy feel helps too :)

And that 1st kiss - just explosive!! It's been a long time coming.

But I feel worried about how it goes completely wrong after they have their passionate encounter - because of the prologue.

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Did I like it? I loved it..it was perfect

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meshas

@meshas

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

sorry for the late reply just managed to read your update 15 n 16.
chapter 15...imagined Khushi in the evening dress and was transported into another world and clapptons song ...you are wonderfull tonight... was a great choice, imagined Arnav n Khushi dancing to this song😉

And I just loved that Khushi initiaded the kiss and Arnav folllowd her lead,loved the way you described Khushi's 1st kiss and just one regret it ended and here I'am waiting eagerly for the next update and I'am not so sure if eventually Khushi will accompany Arnav to Paris?

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saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

That was a super duper awesome update! I loved it so much that I actually read it TWICE :D It was just so...perfect :) Everything about it just seemed right :) and the KISS just blew my mind away ;) I am looking forward to see if they continue this kiss to something else and something tells me it will :p I am not sure though, lets see :)

Literally dying to read the next update :) Cant wait :D

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#656

The kiss was so romatic... and the dance was awesome. Loved how Khushi noticed that Arnav never carries pen and decided to gift him one. That was sweet. Arnav is such a sweetheart, the way he accepted the gift. it worries me to think back to how this FF started. I hope I dont hate Arnav and his reaction when he finds out abt Khushi's pregnancy. I can't wait for that part of the story to unfold but till then I am loving how their relationship is growing. I so don't want Arnav to leave Khushi n go to Paris... May be he will take her with him now that they are mingling well! :P Waiting for more... please cont soon

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

awesome...super brilliant update, beautifully written...love dit

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

loved the update...
eagerly waiting for the next chapter...do update soon...

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star303

@star303

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#659

Wow!!! what an update!!. Khushi notices every little thing about arnav like the fact that he does not carry a pen. It was indeed a very thoughtful gift. And what does Arnav do with that pen, he writes her name!! awww. The way you described him looking at her while she was dancing remainded me of jaadu hai nasha hai from diwali. The dance and the song were beautiful. They have both acknowledged the attraction and the kiss was a natural progression to that acknowledgement.

The kiss was magical, beautiful and so full of passion.

Now i am thinking how will i survive till the next update...

I did not like the update i loved it.