Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

I just read this update once again. Yet i feel incapable of listing down all the things that i liked. As for your announcement, I've read many first kisses of Arnav and Khushi. But only this one made me sigh 😊

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#672

that was one blazing hot kiss

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Ohh it was a beautiful kiss and update. Loved it 😊

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#674

This was such a beautiful piece! I found this to be a very classy piece.

Khushi has surely matured sensibly, in a way that I had not expected from her this quickly. I am absolutely in love with her. I can picture how her eyes go wide when she is learning some new, or how her mouth makes that 'O' shaped when she sees something embarrassing, but behind all these goofy faces, lies a girl who has just started to welcome life with open hands. This opportunity meant a lot for her, in personal and professional level, and she did not leave a leaf unturned.

The pen that she gifted was very thoughtful, especially to present it to her boss. And Arnav's first word was 'Kushi'... I dropped dead right there!

The kiss was so perfect, so beautiful. I will reminisce about this one with love and affection, with a fondness I know will root itself into the soles of my feet long after the pages have turned.

To Arnav that was possibly one of the most intense but poignant moments he had shared with a woman.

Could I say any more to that?

But I am still wondering if the prologue will come into the picture soon... Either way, I hope Khushi will not look back, not yet, not with her heart on the place.

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quicksand

@quicksand

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#675

the update was simply mind-blowing 👍🏼 .Their kiss was the most passionate one😳.Awesome!!!
update really soon eagerly waiting

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#676

wow...wonderful update

loved it

You have penned the character and their feelings so well

Hats off to you

Thx for the PM

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Loved it. Somehow I kept thinking about Bridget Jones when I read this maybe becauseof the cold night and the streets decorated for christmas. finally they give in to their inner feelings and accept that they there is something going on. Their first kiss was magical. Oh to forget yourself in the heat of the moment and just enjoying this instant, the emotions they are experiencing now! Hope they don't wake up regretting this.

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#678

You made their FIRST KISS, PERFECT dear... I am speechless... Loved the whole update... Thank you for the PM

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Bushra

@cmileyfreaky

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#679

HOLY SHIT that was romantic! oooh update soon!

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#680

NB wow, it was so amazingly written... the passion and moment of the first kiss was captivated so perfectly...
sure their relationship has taken one step ahead..
waiting for more action now?? 😉

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