Chasing Dreams Thd2- CHP18 PG129 Thd 3 link pg 148

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#641

That was a very thoughtful gift and the fact that he first used it to write her name makes it even more amazing.

Khushi realizes that he too has feelings for her. How easily they came together shows the comfort they both share.

Oh the kiss was fab!

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MentalExotica

@MentalExotica

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#642

So this is how you were planning on killing me?

WHAT THE!!

BEAUTIFUL AND HOW!!!!!!!!!!

This feels like a dream and I am the one chasing it.

I can't pick what I liked more in this chapter.. The DANCE or the KISS just what??

HAY MEIN MARJAWAAN! 😳

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#643

awesome update, loved their first romantic kiss.

want to know how their love will blossom?

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#644

RES for chapter 16😊

Edit:

That was one of the best first kisses I've ever read, I can't believe you had doubts about it!

I also loved the build up with the gift, the dance, and the walk, everything was just so perfect!

And you made her initiate the kiss, thank you for that!

Everything leading up to this moment has been penned beautifully and realistically.

This is turning into one of my favorite ArHi FFs!

Edited by EXPELLIARMUS - 12 years ago

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#645

Great chapter!! Loved the ball and her gift of a pen. Thoughtful yet practical. You described the kiss and their emotions really well. Great job 👏

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#646

PASSIONATE wd be a understatement!!! Mind blowing !!

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nazca

@nazca

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#647

Elvis Prestly!!! Jail house rock singer. Naach Basanthi !!!!! Excellent passion scene writer. Passionate kiss must make forget all boundaries here they forget the main boundary thier age difference.

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#648

awesum amazing beatiful update loveddd it whole update was treat to read like they never want there kiss to end like i never want this update to end plzz update nxt prt soonish