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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Awesome update yaar...
Thanks for the PM
Cant wait for your next update..
Dont forget to PM alsoo in your next update,...

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Kiekeboe

@Kiekeboe

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

what a great update... the friendship just started...

I really liked how Virat and Maanvi just talked like they were best friends.

I really like this story, very well written, can not wait to read more!

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sania

@Krazzy4u786

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Awesome update!!
Loved it!!
Finally virat & manvi are friends!!
Manvi and beeji's convo was sweet!!
Waiting eagerly to read the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

amazing update dear
i really feel bad 4 manvi, when she is expecting her mother's call 4 asking her how is she...but she is wrong, her mother calls her 4 lecture how to live and all stuff... u portray her emotions very beautifully
liked it so much
thanx 4 d pm dear
waiting 4 ur next part... update soon

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Geminimanna

@Geminimanna

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Hi,
It's an awesome story.I read all the three parts in one go and the experience was out of this world. I know you are a good writer but that good I wasn't expecting. Your story has many shades and all of them are beautiful. Manvi and Virat are so original in each and every way. I can see a bond being developed between them and also the renewal of childhood friendship." Villu and Langool" my God. I was laughing like a mad person while reading Virat's reaction. Mind blowing yaar as always. I am glad that I am among your one of readers. Keep it up and Thank You Very Very Much for the PM.

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princesshelen

@princesshelen

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Amazing update
So at last virman are friends...
Luved the entire convo
It was superb
Who was virat talking on phone with??
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

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Dik

@Dik..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Nice update...
Loved the convo between virat n manvi...
Especially the ' R n L' wali...
Langool.. 😉

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sreshta90

@sreshta90

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awwee so sweet update.. i loved it... haha that thota part was awsome wen virat using her lines ..

Edited by sreshta90 - 12 years ago

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js1234

@js1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Amazing this is absolutely beautiful. I am amazed the ideas that you come with and also hwo thorough you are with your background, Your consitency is spot on. Love all of your work so far, Loved M's new avatar in this and cant wait to see how you are going to develop it.

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MadhuChowdary

@MadhuChowdary

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

hey anu...daily updates ha...good for us...as usual awesome update...manvi is actually sweet...but she is trying hard to be tough...i found that one cute and interesting..virat was talking to someone...some twist is there ha...lol...i m very much eager u see...update next part soon...thanks for the pm and take care anu...