FAN FICTION...Angad's confession to Kripa - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
man what did the newspaper say? 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
come on guys your really good at this please continue !(i would but i've got no imagination whatsoever lol !)
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
ha plzzz go on......this is the best.........so go on.......i'm open heared..........so gooo........thnx
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

Continued…you guys are all great writers

Angad looks at the newspaper and sees that Kripa is put in a bad light and called her a cheap woman and bad named her family a lot and it also says that Kripa was trying to trap Angad to gain fame and wealth

ANgad hurries to the train station in his sporty car.

Kripa is about to step onto the train when she drops her purse and all her belongings fall out. She tells her parents to carry on, she will join them as soon as she gathers her things up.

Angad reaches the train station and sees Kripa hurriedly trying to gather her stuff.

Kripa is about to go on the train when Angad pulls her and holds her hand firmly.

Kripa: leave me, chodo mujhe

Anagd: nahiin

Saying this Angad pulls her with him, on the other hand the train is moving fast and Kripa's parents look on helplessly.

Angad pushes Kripa into his car and speeds off with he.

Kripa tries to get out of the car

But Angad doesn't let her

Kripa: Angad, tum mujhe kaha lejaare ho, ab meri train bhi miss hogayi hai, Kripa says angrily

Tum akhir jaathe kya ho, mere pyar ka mazaak banake rakdiya hai tumne, mera vishvas throdiya hai, mere aur mere maa baap ki izzaat ki neelami kardi tumne

Akhir maine tumhara kya bigaara hai, ki tum mujhe barbaad karne par tule ho?

Angad looks at her silently and doesn't know how to prove his innocence in front of Kripa

Kripa rattles on more, but Angad still doesn't say a word

Angad drives on for more than an hour and finally stops in front of a nice looking house.

Angad gets out of the car and Kripa does the same

Kripa fumes in rage: yeh kaha leaaye ho mujhe, yeh zaroor tumhari koi nayee chaal hogi

Anagd puts his hand on Kripa's shoulder but she brushes him off, don't you dare touch me, Mr Anagd Khanna and she turns away from him

Anagd: tum hamesha essa kyu karthi ho, job hi galath hotha hai, tum mujhe hi kyu zimedaar teraathi ho, har baar tumhe mujhme galthi nazar aathi hai, maine toh usse reporter ko kaha tha ki who apology letter likhe aur ussne agree bhi kiya tha par bathanahi who achanak apne baath se mukar kaise gaya, mai tumhare bina ek pal keliye bhi nahi jeesakta, tumse meri khushi aur gham ki shuruwath hothi hai, tum mere jeevan ka makssad ho,m aina ho tum meri, tho fir mai tumhare saath vishvas gaath kaise karsaktha hoon?

Please believe, I din't do this

Anagd pleads in front of Kripa and is about to go, when Kripa holds him back, Anagad, looks at her and he unable to resist any longer he hugs her and Kripa puts her hands around him as well and they hug tightly.

Anagad: chalo mai tumhe apna ghar dikhata hoon

Kripa: tumhara ghar??

Anagd: haan, zyada thar, yaha parties hothi rethi hai, isiliye yaha par koi atha jaatha nahi hai

While Kripa looks around the house.

Anagd watches her carefully and smiles, he thinks to himself: you're too good Angad

I thought of continuing the story, from where it was left off, I don't if only certain members are allowed to post messages, but if I wasn't supposed to post anything, please forgive me, I am new here hope you like the story.

Love

Sonia (Forgive and Forget)

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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
good job but i have one question when u said at the end that angad smile and says to himself that u are too good angad....is that means angad is faking all this i mean he created a story to make kripa believe on him and then says u are too good angad...i am cunfused...i wanna continue the story but need to be clear on this i dont wanna make angad a negative so plzz tell me
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
hey guys i have posted also a part of this story in between but i guess someone deleted it cuzz i cant find it anywere .........i am sad now....
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
niyati sweety, don't be sad. i hope u can write more stories. i will be looking forward to read em. just cheer up😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#58

sorry if you got confused Niyati, i just thought of adding a twist

now it is upto the next writer to ddecide whether to make Angad negative or positive

positive: 😛has a surprise for Kripa- candle light dinner etc

negatice:😕 Angad is attracted to Kripa but doesn't want to believe he is in love with her, so he is basically playing her, but unconsciously in love with her

(Like the original storyline of kyph)

Love 😡

Sonia

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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
hopefully his not negative......i love they way he is......omg.......i cant wait for may 18,2005 episode......so some1 update when they can..........and continue with this story
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60

thanx lot. good story. plz continue.

~sweta~

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