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Posted: 12 years ago
opsss...!!!! Luks lyk m res krke bhool gyi thi...:p bt nt to worry two diff. Cmnts for single update is nt bad atall...;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey.., yar i m really so so so sorry for the late comment i was dam busy with my college works and abt the update wt can i say u r a great writter yar love u
felt sad for vicky and after reading this part i came to 1 strong conclusion that kriya's mom will nt be against our kriyaansh
loved bittu's condition to clear the mu
and the way he was pulling rey's leg was awsome and thank u thanku sooo much that u didnt stop sending pm to me 4m nw on i will try to comment regularly..:):):)
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Posted: 12 years ago

will update soon...😊
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Originally posted by: keetha...

Hey.., yar i m really so so so sorry for the late comment i was dam busy with my college works and abt the update wt can i say u r a great writter yar love u
felt sad for vicky and after reading this part i came to 1 strong conclusion that kriya's mom will nt be against our kriyaansh
loved bittu's condition to clear the mu
and the way he was pulling rey's leg was awsome and thank u thanku sooo much that u didnt stop sending pm to me 4m nw on i will try to comment regularly..:):):)


hey keetha...
thanks dear...
you know i have got few regular readers of my works and until i get comments or atleast likes from all of them, i dont feel like updating the next part...and those comments are always worth waiting for..
ur comments are one of them...
i feel happy reading them and waiting for them..
thanks dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey girls..i am back with a update..i know i am late again as usual..but i cant help it...i am busy these days...though i always keep IF window open most of the times but i hardly get time to sit and type..ok enough of my bakwas i will update now..hope you guys will like it...

Precap :

rey : arre..ruko..teek hai..will not talk to her till evening 8 oclock...but tu karega ka kya??

bittu : very simple hai..i mean aap kal jaan jaoge...waise aapki gf ki naam kya hai??

rey :(smiles) kushi...

bittu : hmm..kushi di...okay then deal..and haan aapko aage aise mere bahot si help ki jarurat padne wali hai so bhool kar bhi mere condition todne ki try mat karna aap...gn(saying this he leaves)

rey: huh...sahi bhai hai kriya ke lie...

vicky :hmm(in sad tone)

rey :(to vicky) i am sorry dude..mere waje se aaj tumhare sis aise behave ki tumhare saath...

vicky : dats okay...kal sab teek hojayega...i am sure...chal gn

rey felt bad for vicky.


Part 14:

next day morning all gathered in the canteen except kriya...she is always a late latheef..now everyone got to know about bittu gonna clear kriyas misunderstanding today..all are excited to see his plan...bittu was serving the other table when rey pulls him by his arm

rey : bittu dhek kuch ghadbad na hojaye..baat aur nahi bighadni chahie...pehle se bhadki hui hai wo..

bittu: bayya relax..chill maro..main hoon na(in MHN SRK style)

rey : but tu karne kya wala hai ye tho bata

bittu: very simple hai..jab seedhi ungali se ghee na nikale tho ungali tedi karni padti hai...got it..

rey :what? ghee ..ungali ..what??

bittu : okay..huh...jab seedhi tarah se koi hammari baat na sune tho dusre tareeke se unhe baat sunne pe majboor kia jata hai..now got it..

rey: u mean ...u are making her to listen to you forcefully?? no way dude..dont force her for anything..plzz

bittu: arghhh...bayya...plz shut up now...i have my own ways...waise bhi i dont force any one for anything...it doesn't suit me u know(with full attitude)

rey: okaayyy..tho kaise batayega tu usse?

bittu : unhe kaun batayega? ha...marna hai kya batane ja ke...

rey: tho?

bittu: bayya plz..other customers are waiting...trust me i will solve your problem...that too very easily...aap bas unke sath aaj baat mat karo ..atleast evening tak...i am not telling it to irritate you or just to enjoy the scene but trust me rey bayya di needs to be punished this time...unhone aapko hi nahi vicky bayya ko bhi hurt kia hai...pehli baar..wo bhi without any mistake..aap tho ghar bhi gaye the na kal unke..she behaved rudely with you...i never expected that from her..she is not like that..i dont know why she is behaving like this since yesterday...atleast ek mauka tho dena tha na aapko apki baat bata ne ka...huh..leave it..aap AGS ho so one word mein aap work related issues ka jawab de sakte ho unhe but not more than that samje..its my warning(saying this he leaves from there)

all are very eager to know what would be bittu's plan...at that time kriya enters canteen in a slow motion...she was looking very dull...every one felt bad for her because she never enters college like this...always running jumping or with her skate shoes...

kriya : hey guys..good morning...

all (except rey) :good morning...

sharon: kriya kya hua..??you looking upset..

kriya :(looks at rey who looks away when she looks at him) ha nothing...raat ko so nahi payi...no proper sleep that's why feeling exhausted...

neha: par kyun nahi so payi??any prob??

kriya : aa...not really..chodo na..bittu 1 strong tea for me plz(shouts at bittu who was in canteen kitchen)

bittu after couple of minutes comes with everyone's order..he serves every one then at last serving vegetable cheese sandwich to rey,

bittu : rey bayya your favorite veg cheese sandwich...i know aapke kushi di ki tarah tho nai bana hoga but taste accha hi hoga i am sure...waise bayya ek baat samaj mein nahi aarahi hai muje kal se...if she is di like to you, then why do you call her gf??


kriya immediately looks at rey...all hiding their smiles looks at kriya...rey for a moment looks at kriya but just not to ruin bittu's plan he looks back at bittu who was expecting answer from rey standing all innocently as if he really doesn't know anything...

rey : (smiles) itZ just i address her as gf...just to irritate her...uske life mein koi nahi hai na mere mom dad aur mere siva...aur i always told her that one day i will call her di...but aisa kabhi hua nahi aaj tak...i am just waiting for that special moment..(he was honest...not acting for kriya or as per bittu's plan)

bittu:(understood his emotion)hmm...so aap uske life mein..sorry sorry.."unke" i mean kushi di ke life mein koi aur special person ke aane ka wait kar rahe hai??

rey :(smiles) smart boy...but hoga nahi wo itni asaani se...but i dont stop trying...thats why i sent her to my parents place a month back...mujse door..taki di ko thoda waqt mile apne lie..apne life ke bare mein sochne ke lie...new friends banane ke lie..yahan rehti mere sath tho wo kabhi nahi hota...she treats me as her own child and be busy in my world..

bittu:(felt proud of rey..infact all felt proud of him) muje ek bar milado bayya unse...pata nahi kyun but i want to meet her...chalo abb main chalta hoon...kaam bahot hai...(leaves from there)

now all looks at kriya who was staring at rey with guilt...rey felt bad so he immediately clears his throat to distract everyone from staring at her...all starts to have their breakfast silently...not looking at each other..because they dont know how kriya will react now...she never behaved like this before..she always forgives everyone easily...but since previous day she was upset with vicky and rey..she avoided them..which is really not her way to deal with issues...after a minute,

kriya : that means(looking at rey then at vicky) kal jo ..you said his(pointing at rey but still looking at vicky) gf...wo uski di...i mean...(she couldn't form her question..she herself was shocked and ashamed of her behavior since previous day)

vicky just nods his head silently without saying anything..he was not angry with her right now..he was feeling bad for her...he exactly knew how guilty she must be feeling at that moment...and why didn't she slept last night...

kriya:(closes her eyes for a moment taking deep breath) rey...i...i...am really(could not complete her sentence when she looks into his eyes...his eyes were moist...not crying but last days frustration was way too much for him to bear...he never was in such condition in his life before...)

kriya : rey plz...i dont know why i behaved like that...i am not feeling bad for behaving rudely with you seriously but (rey stands up from his chair immediately.. he feels hurt by kriya's words...he felt more hurt now than last night when she told him to leave from her room)

rey leaves from there within a sec..

kriya : but feeling bad for your di...?..?huh (all(except kriya) stood up when rey left the place...they understood his pain...but what kriya said once he left made them feel bad for kriya too..)

it took few secs to kriya to understand rey's hurt and he has already left the place...till then she was still looking at the place where rey was sitting few moments back..she immediately stands up and starts running to find rey..bittu comes to the gang

bittu : dekha she didnt even say sorry to vicky bayya...i mean unhe sirf rey bayya ki padi hai abb..how can she do this? unhone bayya ko tho granted leliya...huh...

kriya with the same speed at which she went running came back to the canteen infront of the gang...

kriya :(panting badly because of running..putting her hands on her hips)huh...vicky(holding her ears)...i...i really dont know how could i do this to you...i mean aaj tak...aaj tak...i never...(pause for few secs) i am sorry...i am an idiot...jo aise dumb ki tarah behave kar rahi thi kal se...(putting her one hand on her hip and other on her forehead)huh...how can i be so rude to you..to..YOU...i mean out of all people in my life, i ignored YOU...i am sorry vicky...i never thought i will behave like this to you one day...i was not intended to...i am sorry..main...i am...i really am a bad sister...(shaking her head) i dont deserve you vicky...i dont...

vicky hugs her immediately without giving her time to say further...he had tears in his eyes...what he went through last night, only he himself and neha knows..even she had tears in her eyes...all smiles at vicky and kriya...but kriya didnt cry...this time...atleast this time they were hoping to see some tears in her eyes but no...she didn't have any...they would be more happy if she had tears in her eyes...


rey who was watching all this standing at canteen entrance, smiles..felt happy for vicky...because only swayam rey and neha know why vicky is so much attached to kriya...swayam wipes his tears slowly...




done...done...soon i will give the next part also..because continuation is must at this point of the story..hope you guys will like this update...





Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
loved kriya and vicky bond

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssuuummm update
I really luved it alooot
Vicky and kria scene was awsum
Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me plzzz
Thanx for the update :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally kriya ne vicky ko mana liya...ab rey ko kaisa manega????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah-Han dis time pm se pehli he padh li..chalo apko kam mehnat karni pade ge

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

Ye toh har bar kehti now more

SPLENDID

marvelous

awestruck

mind blowing

flawless

n what not

LOVED KRICKY'S BOND

N DA WAY REY WAS TELLING BITTU NOT TO FORCE HER N ALL

N KRIA KNOWING THE TRUTH

NOW VICKY'S REASON TO BE DIS CLOSE TO KRIA??

CONTINUE SOON..CAN'T WAIT DIS TIME :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: zona_malik

Ah-Han dis time pm se pehli he padh li..chalo apko kam mehnat karni pade ge

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

Ye toh har bar kehti now more

SPLENDID

marvelous

awestruck

mind blowing

flawless

n what not

LOVED KRICKY'S BOND

N DA WAY REY WAS TELLING BITTU NOT TO FORCE HER N ALL

N KRIA KNOWING THE TRUTH

NOW VICKY'S REASON TO BE DIS CLOSE TO KRIA??

CONTINUE SOON..CAN'T WAIT DIS TIME :)


thank you dear..
yes vicky has a reason to be so much attached to kriya...
except swarey and neha no one knows about that...
in future you will come to know..
this story is long way to go...so many things are there to unfold..
shivams truth vickys past rey;s kushi di part is also there..lil bit but very cute role is there..i am sure everyone will love it..
many more twists are there...lets see how much i will be able to cover..

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