BE INTEHAAN PART 8 updated pg 7 - Page 4

...very very sorry guyss for this very actually very..very sorry for this very late post... but ya its on... BE INTEHAAN PART-7... :)...!!!

(Swayam at his store after sharon left sat thinking holding that dupatta )

SWAYAM TALKING TO HIMSELF'''.

Ab ye duptta mujhe aur bhi zayada apna aur pyara lag rha hai '.pheli bar koi ladki mujhe itna affect karr rahi hai , uske iss effect ko neutrlise kaise karoon ??yeh officer to '.one and only hai 'iske jaisa na koi h aur na koi hoga''.gosh she is driving me crazy!!!!.swayam you are slipping hold yourself'.

(mean while tara comes and informs him that he has a meeting the next day with the models)

(swayam at home in his thoughts)

Aaj aisa laga ki sharon collection dekh ke bhout impress hui hai''''''.thank god use sab acha laga ''..and I really hope ki use final dress bhi pasand aye '''..vo alag hai bhout alag ''kuch different feel hota hai uske sath''''pata nahin kyun I feel '''cumon swayam vo sirf ek showstopper hai'''baki models ki tarah'''..no no baki sab '..no vo ek air force officer hai''''(laughs )rampwalk nahi marchpast ati h '''main bhi na pata hi nahi tha ki ke fighter plane chalane wali bandi ko ''.high heels phena kar ramp walk karwaunga'''..ek chese ki kami nahi hai usme'..FULL ON ATTITUDE'..ek dam perfect for a model''''par aaj aisa laga ki haan usme bhi' usme bhi emotions hai..'dupatta haye. Keher dhaa rahi thi..'wife ko dena 'special'..typical mom wali baatien kar rahi thi'..ok zada ho gaya '..good night swayam shekhawat 'sweet dreams''na sharon dream???????????

NEXT DAY IN THE MORNING ''''.

SWAYAM: hey aaj sham ko ek choti si meeting hai''tum ana please vo kuch mere models '.contracters ''.management team ''..bus kuch final discussions karne hain''.

Sharon : vo aaj ek important meeting h''''don't worry I promise main wind up karke zaroor aungi'..

Swayam : main wait karunga ''.

Sharon : zayada wait nahi karvungi'..

SHARON WITH REY IN MEETING HAVING A TALK ABOUT THE MISSION

REY :kuch technical faults ki wajh se delay ho raha h '.need to do something ''''.jitna late honge '''..problems hongi'..dates ka koi idea nahi ''..ek phone call'''.and next order''..main chahta hoon ki humari taraf se poori preparations honi chaiye ''''.trial lene se help hogi ''.. team ki corporation zaroori h ''what do you think sharon '''

(sharon in her thoughts tensed about the clash in the dates''..not wants to compromise in any way with the work or swayam)

Rey : sharon !!!!!!!!!!listen '''what has happened''.tumhara dhyan khaan hai ''..

Sharon (back to her senses): sorry sir '''..i'll be carefull

Main manage kar lungi afterall SHARON RAI PRAKASH hoon ''''.i should leave swayam wait kar raha hoga

SHARON AT SWAYAM RESIDENCE '..SURROUNDED BY MANY UNKNOWN FACES ''WAITING FOR HIM TO COME SOON ,SITTING IN THE CONFERENCE ROOM

1^st model : hey''.. ..to tum ho sharon raiprakash '..really sabki aisi kismat khana ''bina kuch kare hi swayam ke fashion show ka part hona'''.mind it asan nahi hota hai

Sharon feels uncomfortable and passes a fake smile '''.longing to see swayam

2^nd model : swayam pata nahi khaan hai ? yeh ladka to itna wait karvata hai hum sabko

3^rd model : oh uss smart dude ko ready hone me time lagta hai'''tabhi to vo sexy lage ga

4^th model :sexy toh vo humesha lagta hai '..bas ek bar date karne ka muaka mil jaye

SHARON IN HER MIND

(annoyed) how dare they ?ye sab Swayam ke liye aise kasie bol sakte hain they are sick!!!!!!!and this damn fashion world

(meanwhile swayam enters gives the models a side hug ,making sharon jealous .he introduces her to everyone and they all have a discussion about the fashion show)

After the meeting was over , everybody except our romeo and Juliet out in the lawn

Swayam : thank you

Sharon : thank you''kyun?

Swayam : un sab ko tolerate karene ke liye

Sharon : matlab

Swayam: matlab ye ''ki mai janta tha ki tum ander comfortable nahi thi ''lekin tumne phir bhi coprate kiya

Sharon : (smiles) (unknowingly what's saying)TUMHARE LIYE

Swayam : hun''??????

Sharon : I mean tumhare(stressing) show ke liye

(after 2-3 days swayam calls up sharon)

Swayam and sharon on phone

Swayam : come and meet me in the fashionaria vo kuch batna h (excited tone)

Sharon : give me half an hour

Swayam : vaise kya kar rahi thi '''..

Sharon : kuch khass nahi abhi office se aayi hoon ,aur tum???

Swayam : TUMHE YAAD'''''..

Sharon : hun'..matlab??????

Swayam :arre baba ''.itna bada contract h meri life ka iss fashion show ki preparations underwater diving ki tarah hai aur tum meri LIFE JACKET ho ''.tumhari vajah se yeh possible hua hai'..thank you

Sharon : THANKS TAB BOLNA JAB SHOW KHATAM HO JAYE'''''..

(swayam and sharon in the fashionaria , sharon amazed to see fashionaria decorated )

Swayam : (clapping loudly) we got the date fixed!!!!!!!!!!!!

(swayam orders tara to bring the cake and the same moment sharon's phone rings)

Sharon :AVM raiprakash reporting sir!!!

Rey : sharon dates are finalized!!!

Swayam : hey the grand event is on (on the phone too rey tells the date) 7^th march(swayam's birthday ,not known to sharon)!!!!!!!!!!!

Sharon 's heart skips a beat : no no no ''''..?????????????

Precap :

Swayam : may I ????????

Sharon : hmmm''..

Sharon closes her eyes as she feels swayam close to her'''..

Swayam: I hope main tumhe hurt nahi kar raha hoon'..

Sharon (in her mind) par shayad main tumhe hurt karoon swayam''..

Kya sharon choice karegi '''.ya phir''''.sharon raiprakash compromise nahi karti '''.par kya vo swayam ka dil todegi ya '..apna dil'''''''''..

BY. PARINDA...!!! AAGE STORY BOHOT TEMPTING HAI... DO CONTINUE READING...!!! 😛😉😛😉

Lovd d update..
Swayam nd sharon thinking abt each other..
Omg nyc twist...
Sharon in 'dharmsankat' waiting for nxt part

It was amazing update
swayam thinking abt her nd his mom dupatta on her
then swaron meet in meeting bt before this sharon getting irritated cuz models blabering abt swayam
nd she jealous abt this fact
finally prob hit her by date clashing with each other
love it

Awesome update
Lol swayam toh is like full on fida over sharon.
Oops date clashed.Hope sharon won't break swayam's heart.
Update it soon..:)

Abi be story tempting hai re, beautiful hai yaar, mast

swaron thinking abt each other wow cute..
sharon lost in her self thinking abt swayam n not istening to rey..
sharon feeling sick wen d gals talk abt swayam n feel jealous wen swayam hugs them...
oh oh twist in d story...
wat ll sharon do choose job r swayam..
waiting for next part

Awesome update darlings ek dum jhakaas date clashwd hope koi problem na ho 😛

Nice to see a soft sharon for a change 😳 .

looks like swayam has fallen for sharon..😳
sharon tensed abt clash of d dates as she doesnt want to compramise with swayam's work but it happens.. i hope she manages..

BE INTEHAAN PART-8...!!! (ALL NEW)

Rey: sharon are you listening …….and what no?????

Sharon: ya…ya..ya rey…………I mean yes sir ……

Rey: meet me as soon as possible…..

Sharon : yes sir

Swayam: I am sorry ….vo tum phone pe thi………

Sharon: haan vo office se call tha……

Swayam : main chahta hoon ki hum celebrate Karen ………..afterall grand event ke liye dates finalize ho gayi hain

(sharon constantly observes swayam's happiness………with a long silence………and a tear drops from her eyes………….and swayam notices it)

Swayam: heyyy…….heyy u'r crying….stop crying…plz dun cry…. nahi to mere hath se million dollars nikal jayenge…

Sharon : million dollars!!!!!!kya bol rahe ho?????

Swayam: haan na million dollars …….main tumhare tears collect nahi kar pa raha isliye….sharon tumhare I mean The Sharon Raiprakash ke ye tears…. Uff… mera itna loss…

Sharon: (Sharon hits him on his shoulder) Umm… Swayam… dun do that ..!!!

This gesture of swayam brought a smile on sharon's face

Swayam: kya hua ???

Sharon: kuch nahi ……….its just that I am very happy(in mind)…ya phir tensed… (towards Swayam) Chalo now le'me go…

Swayam (gives a side hug) tum roya matt karo yarr…aur vaise bhi meri show stopper ki eyes puff ho gyi toh (in a drama style) haye mai kisi ko mooh dikhane layak nahi rahunga…

Sharon: Log galat nahi kehte… Mr. Flirty… ho tum cool dude…

Swayam: Thank you… Your hyness…

Sharon at her home

Kyun ye choice ………….kyun god ……mere saath hi kyun………..pehli bar apne kaam ko leke itni tensed hoon…………fashion show ke liye tensed hona chaiye………….plane to udaya hua h ……par rampwalk nahi ki kabhi………pledge liya h ……apne duty se peche nahi hatt sakti…..hatna bhi nahi chahti……..par swayam use bhi toh hurt nahi kar sakti………..kyun ……aaj tak main SHARON RAIPRAKASH kabhi confuse nahi hui………par us SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT ne confuse to kya pagal kar diya h mujhe……kyun use kuch bhi nahi bata paa rahi mai……main bhool jati hoon ki main………..uff!!!! yeh strange feeling …..kyun?????????

Sneha : diii………..kyun karne se kuch nahi ho ga…….main bataun apko kya hua h………

Sharon:kya????????

Sneha: vo hota h na filmon me PYARRR!!!!!!!!!!

Sharon: why not……….apne to pyar me P.hd ki h na………..idiot!!!!

Sneha: fine main to idiot hoon par………aap bhi uske pyar me idiot hote jaa rhe ho…………dekh lena jab vo dur hoga na tab pata chalega(n leaves)

Sharon : nahi………..dur hi to nahi hoona chahti use… m silly..!!1

(MISSION WAS MOST PROBABLY TO GET FINISHED BY AFTERNOON……..AND THE FASHION SHOW IN THE EVENING,SHARON PLANS TO INFORM THIS TO SWAYAM THAT SHE WILL MAKE UP TO HIM JUST BEFORE ONE HOUR OF FASHION SHOW SO THAT HE MAKES ARRANGEMENTS AND DECIDEDS NOT TO INFORM REY AS HE IS ALREADY TENSED,SHE TEXTS HIM TO CONVEY THIS MESSAGE TO SWAYAM AS SHE WOULD NOT BE ABLE TO FACE HIM….HOPES HE UNDERSTANDS…)

Sharon: Dear… no… phir kya likhun??? Dear hi chalega..

Dear Swayam

Actually tumhe toh pata hi hai na ki iss fashion showand glamour worl se pehle…it was Air Force for me.. n ab fashion show wali date ko hi I've got a misiion, a mission for my country… N u dun worry mai fashion show ke ek ghante pehle hi pahunch jaungi… I'll make up for you…I'll not let u down….

Sharon

As soon as this msg reaches Swayam, incidentally… his phone falls down…!!!

Swayam: Oh shitt…!!! Tara… tara….

Tara: Yess sir…

Swayam: Tara… mera phone girr gaya hai.. n now its not working… show aa raha hai…plz ise… get it repaired… n till then get a new phone… n be quick…

(On the other hand it showed on Sharon's phone "Message delivered"…)

Sharon: Finally thank God… I've done it… msg deliver ho gaya hai n abb takk toh usne padh bhi liya hoga… I guess uska call aane wala hai… (n then only her phone rings, n it was Swayam…)

Oh… God… itna jaldi reaction…. Gosh…ab kya karoon??? Vo mujhse puchega… Sharon u can do it… Pick up the call….

Sharon: Hullo… Vo Swayam-Swayam mai tumhe khud batane wali thi…

Swayam: Hi… kya batane vali thi…infact batane toh tumhe mai wala tha… that tumhe fashionaria aana hai…. Abhi aa jao…

Sharon: Parr Swayam…!!!

Swayam: Come….!!!(disconnects the call)

Sharon: Isne aise call kyun cut krr dia… something's wrong gonna be happening…!!! (TAKES A DEEP BREATH) Le'me go n check…

(Sharon reaches the Fashionaria…)

Swayam: Oh… u'r here.. cahlo abb jaldi se ye dress try krr lo…

Sharon: Tumne mujhe issliye bulaya…aur koi or baat nahi thi…

Swayam: Nahi… jaldi go n have a trial…!!!

Sharon(in her mind): Swayam kuch react kyun nahi krr raha…ya use fark nahi padta…vo mujhe comfortable feel krwana chahta hai…!!!

(Sharon goes inside the trial-room)

Sharon: Tara…tara…

Swayam: Haan kya hua???? Tara nahi hai yahan… infact aur koi bhi nahi hai… U dun feel shy…!!!

Sharon: You idiot m not feeling shy… I need help…

Swayam: Lekin hua kya???

Sharon: Vo…vo… meri dress ka… I mean tumhari dress ka…

Swayam: Sharon ye kya meri dress ka, tumhari dress ka.. lagaya hua hai… Hua kya??? May I come in???

Sharon: (after a thought) Hmm…
(Swayam gets inside that small sa trial room… where Sharon was standing with her ahnd at her back…)

Swayam: Ab batao kya hua???

Sharon(hesitatingly): Vo ye "dori" ….iss dress ki…

Swayam : may I ????????

Sharon : hmmm……..

Sharon closes her eyes as she feels swayam close to her………..

Swayam: I hope main tumhe hurt nahi kar raha hoon…..

Sharon (in her mind) par shayad main tumhe hurt karoon swayam……..

(N aur majnu ties that "dori"…!!!)

Swayam: Ab mai bahar jaata hoon…tum aa jao..!!

(Sharon looks herself in the mirror n was self-obsessed )

Sharon(to herself): (smiles) Aj Sharon Raiprakash I mean AVM Raiprakash hass rahin hai… Not bad Mr. Shekhawat… (n then she comes out where Swayam was checking the blower for the show…n as soon as the 'diva' enters the room…Swayam turns around and glanced her foe the longest moment he could…!!!)(Then the all-time HH-LL)

Guyysss so this was Be Intehaan Part-8... Hope u like it... n Part 9 is just on its way...

PARINDA(PARUL+ VRINDA) :)😛😛😛