BE INTEHAAN PART 8 updated pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Lucky me... I'm First one to comment...
Loved ur post...😃😃😃
Parul n Vrinda both of ur efforts r clearly visible through ur writings..
Plz keep writing and ha mujhe update karna nahi bhulna...😉😉
Lots of love...😆😆
Prepare well for ur xams..👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Take care.. Bye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Wow waiting for this update ..
Awsm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awesome update
Precap is interesting
Waiting for next part
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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...Its realy amazng update...

waitng 4 nxt part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update :-) please pm me when you continue

Nikki <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow part 5 was amazing one dear .preacp looks exciting please update it dear ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i like your story very much.pl pm me when you update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayyyaaay you updated... girls tum thoda bada update do na plzzz. it is superbb. Aw abi se the sparks aana shuru omg cant wait for the next update plz plz jaldi karo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey parinda!!
Bahut badiya update tha!!!
Loved the way swaron affect each other nd well written.
Precap bahut interesting hai!
Thanks for the PM nd helping me find this one. do update soosoon)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20

Guysss' sorry for so late updates'.we(PARINDA) really apologize but we have our class 11th xams and revisions n all going on'So quite difficult for us to update regularly'rather we have one more OS moving in Parts'.(Tanha OS: Ex-Reel Se Real Life)' But we really assure u all that "Be Intehaan" will be completed by its tenth part' Actually we hope so'!!! And please maaf karr do hume kyunki ye late updates ka sil-sila shayad kuch din aur chalta rahe'. We really love all ur comments' n u'r comments are seriously driving us crazyyy''!!!!!! 😊

BE INTEHAAN Part -6

Swayam : you mean tum nahi batana chahti ki '.finally tum maan kaisi gayi'

Sharon: Tum kaam ki baton ke alava sab krte ho'!!!

Swayam: fine nahi puchunga''

Sharon : thank you so much''

Swayam : Tumhe pata hai kya????

Sharon : kya????

Swayam: U'r UNPREDICTABLE'.

Sharon : (smiles)

Swayam :Tumhe Air Force office mein dekh karr laga ki jaise'

Sharon : ki jaise kya???

Swayam : Ek tum hi ho meri sabse badi showstopper aur tumhi mujhe sabse jyada takleef pahunchaogi'!!! Mind it'!!!

Sharon: Toh pahunchayi toh'

Swayam: Naah'.I think '. (innocently'.senti Swayam)Tum mera saath toh nahi chodogi na'

Sharon: (doesn't noe wht was happening, puts her hand on his and nods her head in a "no"')

(And when Swayam was about to leave, she calls her name..)

Sharon: Swayam'

Swayam: (in no moment turns) hun'

Sharon: Tum vo Swayam nahi ho jise mai first tym mili thi'

Swayam: (smiles inocently)

(and then the hawa hawa '..look look)

Swayam : hey kal '"fashionaria" me milte hain''.

Sharon : (in no moment) Yess!!! (sharon in her mind 'pata nahi kyu iske samne apne aap ko loose krne lagti hoon'.Sharon focuss'.)

Swayam : K' I'll give u a call'!!!

(sharon leaves)

(sharon at home)

Sharon (talking to herself):Swayam'!!! Naah' itna bura bhi nahi hai'actually bilkul bura nahi hai'

Sneha : Toh aap hi hate krte ho uss cool dude ko'

Sharon : Main Hate use as an individual nahi krti , balki iss glamour world ko krti hoon'!!! Aur ab toh mai bhi iska hissa hoon'!!!

Sneha : Matlab aap use hate nahi krte' toh kya like krte ho..

Sharon : shut up sneha!!!Good night'!!!

(Sharon in her thoughts) Hate n like'Sneha is crazy' vaise aj jab vo meri measurements le raha tha, I was like loosing myself'use mana hi nahi krr paa rahi kisi bhi baat ke liye'!!!

(swayam in his thoughts)

Swayam : Kyun baar baar uska khayaal aa raha hai mujhe'??? Kya ho raha hai ye sabb'??? Main pagal ho gaya hoon'!!! SHARON'!!!

(The next day sharon rings up swayam)

Swayam : hey tum aane wali thi na'

Sharon : Swayam' tumne hi toh kaha tha dat u'll give me a call'

Swayam : Call nahi m picking u up' plan thoda change ho gaya hai ''..main tumhe apne collection store le jar aha hoon '

Sharon : thoda'k just give me half an hour'

Swayam: Ya sure' at ur service madam'.

(swayam and sharon at collection store)

Swayam : so western or traditional''..

Sharon : Ek kaam krte hain' mai showstopper toh hoon hi, designer bhi bann jati hoon'. Fir batayungi western or traditional'k'

Swayam : ya ya..ok fine ''.traditional se shuru karte hain''.afterall Hindustani hoon'''

(Tara brings various dress like lehengas , dupatta , sarees ,''.etc)

Sharon : wow' so beautifull'.aj takk Air-force ki "blue" uniform ke alava kisi aur cheez parr dhyaan hi nahi diya'

Swayam : (smiles)

Sharon : quite impressive'!!! Bohot creative ho'

Swayam : Main toh bass dresses design krta hoon, achchi apne aap lag jaati hain'

Sharon: Very smart' but believe me' maine shayad tumse ye ummeed nahi kit hi'ki tum itna achcha kaam karr jaoge'

Swayam : (innocently in "our" Swayam tone) Sach mein'

Sharon : (nods her head) Hmmm'

Swayam : Sharon'wait..mai abhi aata hoon'

Sharon : kahan jaa rahe ho..???

Swayam : 1 min wait karo''.(brings a box in which a beautiful "royal" dupatta was kept)

(swayam and sharon in front of a mirror)

Swayam : close your eyes' (she closes her eyes and swayam put this dupatta on her head)

Sharon : (opens her eyes'n her mouth wide-open'!!!) Sw'Sw'Swayam' this is adorable'.

Swayam : You know ye meri mom ka "hai"'I mean "tha" ' aur aaj tak maine ise kisi ko nahi dikhaya'par pata nahi kyun tumse share karne ka man hua'.. tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai ki meri collection tumhara intezar kar rahi thi'..ya yeh kahun ki tumhare liye hi bani hain'you look magnificent'

Sharon (in her mind): God'!!! Kyun karr raha hai ye aisa??? Kyun affect karr raha hai ye mujhe itna'

Sharon : Mera kuch bolna toh bohot kamm hai iss sab ke aage' I'I'seriously loved it'!!!

Swayam : (ADORES her for the longest moment he could and then theHH-LL)

Swayam: Tumhe pata hai, maine pehli baar apni kisi show-stopper ko ye dikhaya'infact maine ye aj takk kisi ko nahi dikhaya'!!!

Sharon: M speechless'truly speechless' tumhe ek guidance deti hoon'ye "dupatta" us ladki ko dena who'll be ur wife' jo tumhara saath nibhane ka vaada kare'!!!

Swayam: (Reliving the moment'salutes her) Yes madam' as u wish'

PRECAP: Rey: Sharon'tumhe yaad toh hai na special mission ke bare mein'

Sharon: Ya'

Rey: Kuch problems ki vaje se date finalize nahi ho paa rahi hain' toh hume impulsively hi ye mission krna hoga'.

Sharon: Hmmm'.!!! (in her thoughts) Bass ye mission ki aur fashion show ki dates aapas mein contradict na karein'I'll be finished then'

Kya ye SHAREY convo' ordinary convo'.hai ya iske peeche bhi hai koi deep twist'. Jaanne ke liye padhiye BE INTEHAAN PART-7'!!!

BE INTEHAAN PART-7 On its Way'!!!
BY-PARUL AND VRINDA
Edited by parul.bhardwaj - 12 years ago

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