BE INTEHAAN PART 8 updated pg 7

GUYSSS WE ARE BACK !!!!!!!! SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE ,YOU ALL KNOW NA WE ARE BUSY PREPARING FOR OUR EXAMS'.THANK YOU ALL FOR LOVELY COMMENTS'''''''.guysss please wait a little for swaron romance and their convo''''..

PART 3

Swayam (to tara): give me the mike jaldi I need to announce something'''..

(in his mind)vo answer karne se pehle hi gayab ho gayi''''but I know vo mana nahi karegi '''..afterall kaunsi ladki mere fashion show ko mana karegi''.vaise vo gyi kahan'..

(only then tara hand over the mike to him'.)

Swayam : Heyy guysss''..njoying the party'..!!! first of all '. thank you all for joining me and being with me in my success ''..(MEANWHILE THE CROWD CHEERS WITH HIM )'..And'and 'and guys'i am delighted to announce that aaj mujhe iss contract ke saath apni agli showstopper bhi mil gayi'.hai '.(and suddenly his eyes spot her???,our sharon yarr)''and here she is

And the spot light was on sharon!!!!!!!!!! She didn't know how to react but from inside she was boiling with anger''..she hadn't expected it'such an embarrassment!!!!!!!!!!!

Other models: who the hell is she ,ise aaj tak to nahi dekha'but yess she is lucky'''very lucky

(swayam after the announcement comes to sharon as he does not know her name''..comes closer)

Swayam : I am sorry your name''..????

Sharon: (in full diva mode) you should be'''''.

Swayam: sorryyy''..

Sharon : exactly!!!!!! and I am not interested in being your showstopper !!!!!got it'''..

(after all this she rushes out of the party''''..kriya and rey after her)

Kriya : sorry swayam''..i'll talk to you later''

Rey : sharon relax'''listen''..

Kriya : I am sorry rey mujhe nahi pata tha swayam directly announce kar de ga ''''''..use bura laga ho ga'.

Rey : its okkk vo shant ho jayegi phir baat karenge''.bye good night take care''

(next day in the morning)

(sharon gets ready with her ironed uniform and pinned up hair''''.totally looking gorgeous!!! Even in her air force uniform'..)

Sharon : (in front of the Airforce jet fighter'.going for a trial'!!!)this is my life , my goal my everything 'meri duniya yahi hai koi'.vo soch bhi kaise sakta hai'me Sharon Raiprakash'.ek show stopper''.. cheee sochte hue bhi ganda lagta hai'!!!

(in the office)

Sharon :AVM raiprakash!! Reporting sir'''.(saluting)

Rey :good morning!!! Ms raiprakash..are you ready for the trial'''yeh trial apke mission ka trailer hai''..

Sharon : yesss sir'..m'ready'.(while she was irritated by the thoughts of the fashion world')

(sharon rushes for the trial'while Rey in his office and swayam outside the air force building and on phone)

Swayam : kriya meri galti kya hai'.usko itna bada break de raha hoon.' please mujhe ik baar baat karne do usse'''..

Kriya : haan maine mana nahi kiya but please not there '''

Swayam : do not worry I will manage'..(cuts the call)

(waits in the mess till sharon comes back')

(Sharon'.comes back from the "jet trial"'.holding helmet under her right arm'hair which were loosely pinned'were now open'she was looking a diva'!!!)

Rey : Wow'u've done it'u were fab'!!!

Sharon: Rey'tumse kitni baar kaha hai'm ur junior'.u'r my boss here..not my buddy'

Rey: Sorry sorry'.AVM Raiprakash'iss par bohot mehna chaihiye'.

Sharon : Yess sir'.I know mai bhi ispe concentrate karna chati hoon'''(and suddenly she notices swayam there )

(Swayam on seeing her like this ,is totally lost in her eyes'''.i can't belive ek AVM ko mai apni showstopper bana raha hoon ''Mujhe pata hai Swayam tu ise mana hi lega')

Swayam : (towards sharon)you know what??tum is uniform me bhi itni stunning lagti ho''..phir mere collection mein toh u'll look out of this world'!!!(Sharon about to say something but Swayam continues)'Haan haan krlo nakhre'lekin aaogi toh yahin parr hi na..!!!

Sharon: Haan mai roz yahin aati hoon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!'

Swayam: Lol'I meant to say mere paas hi'.

Sharon : excuse me''''what do you mean by MERE PASS'''''..

PRECAP: sharon :tum yahan bhi aa gye .maine kaha na dat I 'M-NOT I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-E-D'''''

Swayam : OH!OH!OH! cool babes''.

Sharon : mind your tongue'''''''''''''''''.

how dare he ? usme manners name ki koi cheese nahi hai kya ''''maine kaha ki mujhe nahi banna hai showstopper toh peche kyuon pada hai''''''

kria and sneha(sharon's sister) try hard to convince her

sneha : diii!!! Aisa mauka sab ko thodi milta hai '..mujhe hi recommend kar do na'..

sharon : shut up!!!!!!!!!!!!

WILL KRIYA OR SNEHA MAKE IT UP TO HER ???? OR ANY OTHER PERSON''.

BY PARUL AND VRINDA(PARINDA)DO COMMENT GUYSS...😊😊

Awesome update parinda!!!

Parul and vrinda you guys are just supercool, i loved it, aww swayam can move anyone so sharon kya cheeze hai, well waiting for the next update.

Awesome update
Waiting for next part

Lovely Yaar but maine kaha tha n.a. story Ka ek hi thread banana dhundhne problem hoti hai Levin story is nice

Well it was awesome swayam will cool her I know he is swayam da loverboy 😳

can you give me link to the previous thread pleas

Heyy guys we r back' bohot purana ho gya hai ye statement'but u ppl just focus on "BE INTEHAAN" Part-4 Updated'.. Till date got awesome comments as well as likes n hope the same for this part too!!!

Sharon: Tum yahan bhi aa gye'.Maine kaha na I-M N-O-T I-N-T-E-R-E-S-T-E-D'!!!

Swayam: Oh'Oh'Oh..Cool babes'.

Sharon: Mind ur tongue'!!!

Swayam: Oh m sorry babes'

Sharon: (now try to hold the situation a bit calmly) Parr mai hi kyun??? Itni ladkiyan hai iss country mein, u can choose anyone else'!!!

Swayam: Dekho'tum achchi khaasi dikhti ho n sabse badi baat u'r new'.ek fresh n raw face hai'fashion world will just tremble'

Sharon: (losing her temper): Tumhe kyun nahi samajh aata'm not meant for all this'

Swayam: But'

(meanwhile Kria enters n interrupts Swayam'.)

Kria: Swayam!!! Tum chalo yahan se'.(holding her hand)

Swayam: Parr'.

Kria: Kuch paar-varr nahi'chalo yahan se'!!!

(n Kria takes him out of the Air Force Office')

(Sharon's home where Rey and Kria come to meet her'try to convince her along with her younger sister "Sneha"')

Sharon: Hi'Kaise ho tum dono???

Rey n Kria: Hello'we'r fine'.

Kria: Vo Sharon'

Sharon: No Kria not again'mujhe uski koi baat nahi krni'(meanwhile Sneha enters n greets Rey n Kria)

Sneha: Di'Rey bhaiyya ne bataya dat u've got a break from Swayam Shekhawat'I mean THE SWAYAM SHEKHAWAT'.!!!

Sharon: Sneha stop it!!!

Sneha: Di'harr ladki marrti hai for Swayam Shekhawat'harr ladki apne aap ko uske collection mein dekhna chahti hai'why don't you'

Sharon: Sneh'.a..!!!

Sneha: Achcha- achcha di'.ap mera naam kyu nahi recommend kr dete'.!!!

Sharon: Jokes apart'.

Kria: Ya Sharon'atleast u can ponder over it once'!!!

Rey: Sharon'.I think tumhe kuch naya try karrna chahiye'.Swayam ko haan bol do'

Sharon: Guyyss'tum sabb paagal ho gye ho'me SHARON RAIPRAKASH apni air-force duty ko chhod karr stupid se fashion world mein'.no' no chance'

Rey: But'

Sharon: Rey tum bhi'.Mujhe kisi se koi baat nahi krrni'(n leaves angily n goes to a "still" place where she likes to go whenever she's sad n morose'.!!!)

Sharon(in her thoughts): Kya ho raha hai ye sabb'mumma-papa'm missing u so badly'iss desh mein mujhe aap dikhte hain'iss desh ko apna mom-dad samajh karr'isee ki seva karrna chahti hoon' den why mujhe sabb force karr rahe hain'.(determinedly ) I have to stop all this right now'.I need to talk to him'sabb kuch khatm krr doongi aj'.NO FASHION SHOW AT ALL!!!

(N Sharon moves to Swayam's office/ fashion centre'while she was about to enter in his cabin'she heard something from the glass door')

Swayam(infront of his mom-dad's picture): Maa-papa' apko bohot miss karr raha hoon'aj main apni success ki peak parr hoon'apko pata hai na mujhe meri life ka sabse bada contract mila hai'.Papa mai apka sapna nahi bhoola hoon'apka naam roshan krrke dikhaunga'(weeping) sabb apke liye'..

Sharon(outside his cabin hears everything n thinks): (stunned)Ye bhi meri tarah ek orphan hai'Oh God'.ye bhi meri tarah apne mom-dad ke liye sabb kuch karr raha hai'aur mai isko refuse karr rahi thi'.mujhe iski help karni chahiye'afterall we'r sailing in d same boat only!!!...akhir mujhse behtarr kaun jaanta hai ki "anaath" hona kya hota hai'.(she had tears in her eyes n leaves'.n calls him'!!!)

Swayam's phone rings'!!!

Swayam: Look aj who has called me'.

Sharon: Atleast say "hello"'these are basic etiquettes'.

Swayam: But jab koi 'miracle' ho jaaye toh 'etiquettes' kise yaad rehte hain'.!!!!

Sharon: Miracle???

Swayam: Sharon '.I mean 'Air Vice Marshall Sharon Raiprakash' ne aj khud mujhe call kia'. Aj baarish hogi'mark my words !!!

Sharon: Ho gaya tumhara'ab suno'aj shaam 5 baje!!! Caf-coffee-cafeteria!!! N remember Air Force Officer hoon'punctual hoon!!!(n disconnects in no moment'.)

(Sharon waiting in the caf while it was raining n Swayam reaches ther at 5:03 p.m.)

Sharon: You're three minutes late'

Swayam: Three minutes'bass first tym mai itna tym parr pahuncha hoon'Vaise maine kaha tha na'mark my words'!!!

Sharon: Hm???

Swayam: Dekho baarish ho rahi hai'."MIRACLE"!!!

Sharon: Ab kaam ki baat karein'!!!

Swayam: Shoot'!!!

Sharon: (stammers) Mai'vo mai'I m ready to be your showstopper'..!!!

PRECAP: Kaise react karega Swayam Sharon ke answer parr???? Kya Sharon bata payegi Swayam ko uski "haan" ka reason??? Kya ye "haan" inke beech dosti karwa paayegi ya phir hai koi aur twist'???

Jaanne ke liye padhiye "BE INTEHAAN" Part-5'COMING SOON!!!

Swayam: What??? I just'just can't believe my ears'tum meri show stopper banne ke liye taiyyar ho'.!!!(n gets over-excited'n in his excitement'goes to hug Sharon') Oh m sorry'.but tum sach keh rahi ho na!!!

Sharon: Hm'sach keh rahi hoon but'

Swayam: But kya???

Sharon: But iske baad please mujhse kuch ummeed mat karna'shayad mai nahi kar payungi'.

Swayam: Vaise aj kya hua, tum maan kaise gyi???

Sharon(thinking): Kya karun'.nahi ise kuch nahi batayungi'.(towards Swayam) Vo sabb keh rahe the'aur tumne bhi toh kaha tha'!!! Toh maine socha ki ek baar krke dekhti hoon'!!!

Swayam(a tear roll down off his eyes n he holds Sharon's hand excitingly): Thankew'thankew very very very much!!! Tum jaanti nahi ho tumne mujh parr kitna bada ehsaan kia hai'

Sharon: (slowly takes her hand back): Chalo I should leave now'aur haan mai apna air-force ka kaam bhi saath mein karungi'!!! i will not compromise with it'''

Swayam: As u wish'

(n both leave n the next day Swayam calls Sharon n ask her to come to his "FASHIONARIA" for measurements'while Sharon reaches there'.)

Swayam: Oh..u'r here..come in'

Sharon: Hm'

Swayam: (towards Tara): Tara'give me the inches-tape!!! N pen down the measurements'!!!

Tara: Ya sirr' m ready '.!!!

Swayam: Sharon u just stand here'show me ur arms'(n takes measurements'.)Sharon..put ur hands up'.(n takes the measurement of her back while a sizzling wave was moving in Sharon's body') (then Swayam bends down to take her thigh measurements'Sharon was again sizzled by his activities')

Sharon: Ho gya'.

Swayam: Bass chest measurements baaki hai'.(n takes her chest measurements by getting utmost close to her'.n she'she was mesmerized by his actions')maine tumhaare measurements le liye hain'. Outfits ready ho jayenge n mujhe puchna tha ki kya tumhe ramp-walk aati hai'

Sharon: Ramp-walk nahi march-past aati hai'

(Swayam laughs a bit loud' n Sharon thinking that he was the same Swayam who she had seen the day before in his cabin'.)

Swayam: Don't worry 'I'll teach you'.!!!

Sharon: ya' ab kya mai jaayun???

Swayam: hm' n one more thing'fashion show ki date jaise hi final hoti hai I'll inform you'.

Sharon: Ya'bye'!!!

(The next day' Swayam calls Sharon'n asks her about the rehearsals'n fix an evening time')

(In the evening Sharon reaches the FASHIONARIA'!)

Sharon(knocks Swayam's cabin): Can I come in'???

Swayam: Ya sure'!!!Aao na'

Sharon: Toh'.ab'

Swayam: Ya'.achcha tumne kabhi ramp walk dekhi hai'

Sharon: T.V. parr by-chance dekhi hui hai'

Swayam: Toh karr ke dikhao'

(Sharon hesitates a lot n then agrees n does a poor ramp-walk')

Swayam: God'ye ramp-walk hai'achcha ek kaam karo'tumhe march-past aati hai na'vo karke dikhao'

(Sharon starts her march-past''.)

Swayam: Yess Sharon'ab dekho jahaan tumhare haath straight hain'vahaan tumhe haath apni waist parr rakhna hai'

Sharon: How'???

(Swayam goes to her'takes her hand n keeps it on her waist n for a second keeps his hand there only'.)

Sharon: Swayam'(meanwhile Swayam takes his hand off)

Swayam: m sorry'achcha now walk'n yess next thing is the movement of your legs.

(n like this he helps her in "ramp-walk")
Swayam: Tara'. Ab le aao'

Sharon: Kya???

(TARA brings a number of pair of heel-footwears'.)

Tara: Sirr here are they'.

Sharon(looks at the footwear n gets tensed): Swayam no'.

Swayam: But Sharon'

Sharon: No Swayam'heels no'!!!mai nahi karr sakti'

Swayam: Tum karr sakti ho Sharon'

Sharon: Agar mai girr gyi toh???

Swayam: (innocently)Toh mai hoon na bachaane ke liye'(n unknowing what was happening both look in each other's eyes)

Sharon: Hmmm'.

(As soon as Sharon starts her rampwalk, her leg slips but Swayam holds her in atight grip n firr kya HH-LL''''.they both were looking into each others eyes''''and tara seeing them and smiling'''..)

Tara : wow !!kya chemistry hai'''..

(both of them come back of their senses''..and yahi 5-7 baar vo ramp walk karti hai phir girti hai '''..and hai na swayam bachne ke liye)

Sharon : I am telling you''.. abhi bhi time hai change your decision'''.

Swayam : its ok sabka first time hota hai'''..

(swayam and sharon having coffee at his cabin)

Swayam : please mujhe reason batao ''finally tum angry young girl mere fashion show ke liye kasie maan gayi''''

Sharon : Harr cheez ka koi reason hona zaroori hai'.

PRECAP : swayam : Tumhe pata hai kya????

Sharon : kya????

Swayam: U'r UNPREDICTABLE'.

(swayam while showing his collection puts a beautiful "duppata" on her head)

Sharon (in her thoughts) : first impression is always not the last impression''

Swayam : tumhe dekh kar lag raha hai ki meri collection tumhara intezar kar rahi thi''..ya yeh kahun ki tumhara liye hi bani hai''''you look magnificent'''.