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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShReya_TaaRey

Oh my god di!! You know, I cried a bit during that ring exchange waala ceremony... Don't know why but i had tears in my eyes!!

loved the flshbacks you showed in between... Loved the fact that Rey is you know, attracted towards Taani but doesn't know it.. i mean, that somewhere hed oes have feelings for her na.. And Taani.. I could actually visualise everything happening in front of me!! Oh! how beautiful she looked!!
And the way you potrayed Gaurav's feelings.. Muaahh!! Loved it!! Feeling so bad for him!!
Loved the update to the deepest core di!! And the precap.. i guess, Gaurav Rey ko woh message bhejega!! Do update soon and pm me!!
All the best for the exam! Just rock it!!


u cried shreya .. i never expected people will get affected even though i wanted that ... i feel happy that it touched your heart , but sorry for bringing tears in ur beautiful eyes
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

Oh wow di.. Flashback was really cute...
And rey calling hmself taani's fianc was great!!!
Kria ka truth kab pata chalega di!!!
Precap me m sure gaurav ne bheja hoga note.. Nd the note is wow...
Jaldi update karna please di!!


thanks toshi😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sorry really really sorry for being late …last week I spend reading all ffs I have kept pending to read so didn't get time to write …please forgive me … I am coming back slowly to my schedule after the whole mess the week before last made.. I will try to be regular … please forgive me ….

Chapter-10

The evening after the engagement the singhania's left for Mumbai. Mr singhania wanted the marriage to be held in Mumbai as he wanted his sons's marriage , to be a no less event … he wanted it to be grant and classy after all it was the marriage of the successor of singhania empire. Mr singhania had a talk about this with taani's chaachu and the rest of her family .. they had no other way other than to accept. They knew it will not suffice their hands to host the event as grant as Mr singhania wanted but Mr singhania had ensured them that he will take up the entire responsibility of the marriage function and that they just have to be there with taani ….

The marriage was scheduled to be 1 week after. Taani made it a point all these days to spent time in rehearsals for the dance event somewhere she had a fear it wont be possible as the marriage dates neared by…but gaurav was so understanding these days , he understood her tension so he would always listen to her suggestion rather than aggrevate her temper like he did previously….but in the end with each passing moment he always had the grief of loosing another minute with her.. he knew , she will be someone elses after 1 week … but he was happy atleast she got the one whom she love ….. days went by in 2 days it was the sangeet …the family got ready for their journey to Mumbai, purvi , rohan and gaurav also accompanied taani's family….

Day before sangeet – Mumbai

Rajshri welcomed taani's family. She had made arrangements for their stay in the singhania mansion itself… chaachu, daadi and taani's mom were happy that their daughter was getting married to such a big and decent family , but chaachi somewhere had that jealousy with in herself… purvi , gaurav , rohan and trisha spent the whole day chit chatting and teasing taani… her eyes were searching for him from the moment they reached the bunglow… there was not even a sign of him, her family and his mom were busy deciding the dresses jewellery and all , others who had gathered were enjoying the cheerful moments…time went by..soon it was dusk , the bunglow echoed with busy talks for the arrangements for next day..her ma and her raji ma[rey's mom as taani calls her so reference previous chapters] were busy making her try the jewellery sets and dresses , all were in a happy mood but she couldn't be so for some reason … many times she tried to enjoy with the others but she couldn't from her heart .. she was waiting for a glimpse of him… she didn't yearned more .. just.. just a glimpse…

Soon it was night everyone had gone to sleep…she lay next to purvi and trisha in the guest room of the singhania mansion … purvi and trisha were fast asleep by now … but she couldn't … her face faced the window at a short distance from the bed from which the cool night breeze blowed in… she kept looking out… failed to sleep she slid down from her bed and moved to the window and stood by it …she crossed her arms over her thin silky nightwear feeling the chilling breeze….her eyes were searching for light in the dark night sky.. but the dark clouds have hid the moon and all stars within its dark blanket….but she didn't accept her defeat she leaned more outwards the window and looked at the sky in a radius her vision permitted her..her mind took her back to a night similar to this

"tannu aa andhar chalte hain.. kitni tand hai yahan" a 13 year old rey pulled taani by her upper arm.. they were standing amidst the huge garden of their haveli in jodhpur…it was so dark because it was late night and the sky was cloudy without the moon or the stars… heavy dark clouds bloomed the sky ,ready to reap into a beautiful shower soon.. it was so cold , the cool night breeze send shivers on the feeble body of the kids but taani was still stubborn …

" nahi ansh mujhe taarey dekhna hai…aur jab tak mein taarey nahi doond pate mein andhar nahi avungi" a cute little taani pouted

" tum itna zid kyu karti ho … dekho tannu aaj barish hogi aur dekho to kitna cloudy sky hai…aaj taarey nahi dikhenge.."

" nahi.. mujhe dekhna hai!!! Ansh kitna maza ayega jab koi sunder chamkeeli cheez iss andheri raat mein dikhega to" she cupped her cheeks .. imagining the situation

Ansh frowned at the behavior of taani..he looked at her … "eh ladki paagal hai" he said to himself in his mind.. she was smiling looking at the sky saying to herself "pls pls pls clouds k peeche se bahar avo na" .. he frowned at her behavior ' she is speaking to the stars !!huhhh …wierd!!'…but it didn't go unnoticed by him that she was rubbing her palm to heat up herselves in the chilling wind …

he quickly removed his shirt and extended it to her "oye .. chal pehen.."

She looked at him and frowned " kyun..?? mujhe nahi chahye .. tera gandha shirt .. ewww …" she turned her face mockingly

Ansh flared now how dare she??!!! He gave to help her and she mocked him…but then again his heart moved seeing her rubbing her palms to avoid the chillness…. he grabbed her upper hand and pulled her and made her wear it " agar nahi pehnegi na to kal chheenk chheenk ke mera dimag kharab kar degi ..to chup chap pehen le" she frowned at him but had no way other than to wear… he stood by her side looking at her .. she was in no mood to go inside she started walking from one end of the garden to the other looking up in the sky.. ansh was getting really annoyed now and he also was feeling cold now without the shirt … suddenly his eyes caught sight of a firefly flying amidst the bushes nearby … then he remembered her sentence "Ansh kitna maza ayega jab koi sunder chamkeeli cheez iss andheri raat mein dikhega to…" his face lit up finding a solution and he ran to taani and grabbed her hand and pulled her to the bush where the firefly was buzzing … " hayeee kitne pyara hai …" she started screaming cupping her face

" chup…tum itna drama kyu karti ho… chup nahi reh sakti?? " he frowned and barked on her face.. she frowned at his expression"hawww!!" …

he slowly bent towards the bush and cupped the firefly in his palm and closed his palm securely .. he went towards her and and slowly opened his palm to show her …"hayee…" she cupped her face , her eyes twinkling …. Muahhh she gave a peck on his cheek and grabbed his hand and ran into the house…

She started smiling remembering the scene …she stood for a little more near the window and then went towards the bed…but She wasn't feeling sleepy at all .. she looked at the side table to have some water but the jug was empty.. she took the jug and stepped out of the room .. she took a few steps when she bumped on to a hard body .. she was about to give a loud cry when a hard palm shut her mouth tightly just below her nose.. a hand snaked her waist and pulled her harshly forward and her petite figure crashed on the hard chest…she wanted to cry loud , she couldn't see who it was.. she struggled within the hard manly grip….in the same posture she was dragged towards a window… her eye balls had already popped out …the light from the feeble light mast's in the garden came in through the window revealing his face …. Her dialated eyeballs slowly contracted …. She stopped her struggle to get out of his grip…her fingers which were scratching him a minute ago stopped their action… her lips which were struggling under his hard palm to let out a cry had stopped moving.. now she was calm …. Her eyeballs were fixed on his … like in her dream she closed her eyelids softly and then reopened it to see his face again and he gave a naughty smirk seeing what she had done … he released his palm slowly from her mouth, but his other hand was still snaked around her waist … he was smiling at her but she was still expression less lost in him " taani…" he called softly

" mmm" she said from nowhere , she was still in her trance.. he smirked again " taani…" he called as he jerked her pulling her more close to let her come out of her trance " huhh" she looked on either sides ..

"aa..[she was about to call ansh but gulped the word and continued] mera matlab rey.. aap itne raat yahan."

"oh hello … shayad tum eh bhool rahi ho ki e mera ghar hai"he moved his eyebrows

"ha …par … nahi mera matlab hai ki .. aap e dress mein [she looked at his coat ]… aap bahar the??" she asked softly

" kyu" he barked.. his expression changed all of a sudden "ab mujhe har cheez tume batana hoga huhh?? Tum hoti kaun ho e sab poochne k liye huhhh??[she never ever expected such a reaction .. she just asked in a normal way but he was barking at her].. taani see I am telling you in advance …don't try to interfere in my things and if you are asking it because you are my would be wife[ he paused all of a sudden … for a second he skipped a heartbeat… did he himself answer the question he asked a second ago??? he closed his eyes tightening his fist and continued].. I hope you get it … I don't like questioning me …so please …" he said as he moved from her front and walked by … she stood like a statue … emotionless… 'what did I do??...i just asked cause of concern … why did he shout at me for that… kya meine itni badi galati ki ..??' she asked to herself .. without her knowledge a salty drop descended her cheeks … she turned back and walked to the room … placed the empty jug on the table and lay on the bed and covered herself in the blanket. She buried her face within the pillows … she cried a little … but then all of a sudden she got up from the bed pulled the blanket and threw it on the bed and walked out … she walked upto his room ..flaring …she stood outside the door.. she rubbed her palm.. closed her eyes and took a heavy breath .. she opened the door … and walked in…she looked all over … he wasn't there … click…a door opened and she turned her head to the side from which the sound came … he stepped out from the bath room door in his pants .. his upper body was naked … she was motionless for a fraction of a second but in the next fraction she fipped to the other side…he was wiping his face with the towel facing down but hearing the unusual sound of clinging of bangles in his room he flipped to the side she was standing " tum!!!" he said .. she closed her eyes tightly and cluctched the top of her nightwear tightly ….he walked towards her and stood at her front " tum yahan kya kar rahi ho huhh??"

He asked … she clutched the grip on her dress and opened her eyes .. suddenly she remembered the reason why she came here … "I asked you in a normal way … raath ke 2 baje ghar k koi agar coat aur suit mein saamne aate hai then its normal to ask whether you were outside and I just did that …I just asked out of concern… aapke baton mein interfere karne ki koi shauk nahi hai mujhe do you get that…phir bhi aapko agar chillane ka itna shauk hai to kisi aur k pass jakar chillavo .." she said all in 1 minute and walked out … he stood motionless…stunned … he clutched his towel.. gritted his teeth " how dare she" he threw the towel on a chair nearby and sat on the bed in anger rubbing his stubble 'hasn't changed a bit .. she is still the same !!!' he sighed …

She rubbed her eyes and walked upto the bed and sat on it "meine kuch galat to nahi kiya na …" she asked her self .. slowly she lay on the bed … her mind was full of his face … him shouting at her and his face when she shouted back at him… without her knowledge sleep dominated her at some point ..

Next day ..

The whole day was busywith arrangements for sangeet … finally it was time .. she dressed up in a red long anarkali and went out to the hall … soon the music began .. everyone was happy dancing and singing .. purvi and trisha tried to drag her into the dance but she resisted … she wanted to move out from the loud music she was searching for him from the morning but then someone would come and pull her for some work..' where is he .. oes he come that late everyday… but he should have been here today after all its our sangeet ….' She was in her thoughts…finally the sangeet was over and everyone had dispersed.. now it was only the family who sat in the hall with their chit chats for the next day .. purvi , gaurav and rohan was also there .. rohan was cracking jokes with purvi and trisha .. taani had gone to her room… Gaurav went out as he had to make a call… he just cut the call and was about to go in when he saw something….he saw rey getting out of a car … a girl also stepped out she came towards rey and hugged him … his hands were wrapped around the girls waist… gaurav couldn't see clearly.. he leaned a bit from the position .. he saw the girl getting back in the car .. rey waved her and walked in smiling … gaurav was confused .. rey with a girl!!...his eyes followed rey as rey walked in the house .. all the members had now gone to their rooms and the hall was empty .. gaurav's eyes were still following rey… rey walked upstairs … bump …he collided with taani who was coming downstairs …gaurav could see what was happening…rey and taani were looking at each other … taani was still in the same attire …for a moment rey was lost in her … but then all of a sudden his expression changed "kya tume abhi bhi meri phikar ho rahi hai[he asked in a mocking tone] .. do you want to know where I was …huh.." he shouted .. she lifted her arms to point him " listen.." before she could say anything else he grabbed her wrist tightly, squeezing her soft flesh "shhh" she shrieked .. her face expressing pain.. gaurav dint know why but he stepped forward from his position seeing her hurt…but then stopped from further moving forward as it was between taani and rey and he found it weird to interfere

" last night I stood mum listening to what you had to say [rey squeezed her wrist further and she was trying to oppose and gaurav tightened his fist ] but that doesn't mean that you can back answer me all the time …" she leaned forward to say something but he pulled her forward and in the sudden force she couldn't say anything , he continued " nor you have the right to question me … do you get that " he barked at her and left her wrist free and walked upstairs … she clutched her wrist.. it was red now as the bangles were pressed tightly against it .. "shhh" she moaned as she closed her eyes

" kya hua" she opened her eyes hearing the question .. she was stunned to see gaurav stading in front of her .. all of a sudden she hid her hand behind her and smiled "kuch nahi "

"sach" he asked looking directly into her eyes …

"ha.. ha .. mein tume kyun jhoot bolungi.. acha bolona gaurav ..did you talk to teacher ji and what did she say about the event , and did you inform her we are done with our practices and are ready.. and …" she was asking all in one go as she held his hand and made him walk along with her

" tum mujse kuch chupa rahi ho taani??" he asked …

" nahi to .. acha ab tum javo aur so javo … mujhe bhi sona hai ..subah jaldi utna hai mujhe, kal meri shaadi jo hai " she said smiling.. he smiled but his mind was still confused .. before taani got into her room he said " acha sun.."

" ha.." she turned to face him

"I just talked to teacherji and she told the date is finalized and is on 7th of april"

She smiled but then all of a sudden popped her eyeballs and screamed " kya!!!... 7th that means next week??"

"ya … kyun.. we have finished our practices then whats the tension??" gaurav asked confused

"errr!!.. meri shaadi hai kal and the event falls 7 days just after my marriage" she said popping her eye balls

" ha to???" he asked

"gaurav mujhe rey ko bhi batana hai .."she screamed again

"tum kal se uske k saat hi rehne ja rahi ho na.. to ek event k bare mein baat karne k liye 1 week kafi nahi hai kya??" he asked leaving her blinking in a weird expression…gaurav waved to her

"oh hello now go and sleep …mujhe bhi sona hai ..javooo" he pushed her inside her room and he walked by…

He was walking towards his room when he saw rey talking on phone standing in the corridor .. his eyes flared … but he was confused … he wrote something on a piece of paper and called a servant and asked him to give it to rey and then walked away to his room

Rey was about to get into his room when A servant in the mansion came to rey " saab ji ,e chitti us admi ne diya hai..aapko dene k liye".. he handed a piece of paper to rey.. rey frowned …as he leaned to see the man who gave it.. but he could only see the man's back …he opened the paper

"she is pure like fire……. ,

serene like water……,

patient like earth……..,

strong like the wind……,

and has no fake cover like the sky … "

don't ever dare to hurt her !!!!...else you will have to pay for it Mr Reyaansh Singhania… mark my words!!!!

Rey folded the paper in his palm.. as he looked at the person getting in a room …gaurav paused and turned to glare at rey… they glared at each other and then gaurav got in to his room…" what the hell !! he speaks about taani to ME??" he crushed the paper in his palm ..he was about to walk to gaurav but his phone flashed kria's name .. he threw the paper away and got in his room talking in the phone….

Next day morning

Rey walked upto his dad "dad I hope the papers are ready as we have agreed"

Mr singhania looked upto his son "yes Reyaansh[he sighed] you will get it soon after the marriage .."

"thanks dad" he said and left not waiting to hear anything more from his father…

The day was busy as it was the marriage day … soon it was time for marriage

Sharon and swayam had come… they were talking with rey …suddenly sharons eyes caught kria walking in…she was always against rey's relation with kria as somewhere she didn't like kria and doubted her " now why is she here swayam.." Sharon spit out to swayam as she saw rey moving upto kria .. swayam looked on either sides noticing a lot of people by their sides he said " chodo Sharon ..rey might have called her ..and whats your problem now .. you never wanted rey to get married to kria and now your wish is being satisfied so lets better not talk about her and spoil the situation..see taani is coming " swayam pointed to taani descending downstairs , purvi and trisha on her either sides .. Sharon smiled and walked upto taani…

Kria: " your would be wife looks beautiful huh" she whispered in reys ear ..

"kria .. you know it already…I agreed to this marriage just because you said .. and I have no interest in her"…he said to her …she smiled to him…soon someone came and called rey to the mandap…

She sat draped in a beautiful red lehenga … she was facing the holy fire … she didn't know what she felt at the moment … happiness?? A feeling of scare?? But why??... it was all a mixture of all feelings… She hadn't seen his face today …she sat clutching her fingers on one arm with her other palm…soon the pandit asked them to have their saat phera's..and after that rey had to wear her the mangal sutra…he took it in his hand and turned to her .. that was the 1st time today they were facing each other … she looked next to any goddess in that transparent veil.. he couldn't help himself from staring at her … she couldn't stand his stare , her angelic face shone in a red blush .. he leaned to her and wore her the mangal sutra…he then took a pinch of sindoor and put it the partition of her hair … she was now marked as his… forever…………………………………..

Precap:

"Dekh beta .. aaj tumari shaadi ki pehli raath hai .. voh tumara intezar kar raha hoga … tum apne kamrae mein javo…" Rajsri said to her son Reyaansh

"Look mom .. I have told you before this marriage , and I repeat it again..mein sirf aur sirf Kriya se pyar karta hu…"rey said turning his face away from his mom

" lekin beta.."

" look mom ….lekin vekin kuch nahi… mom try and understand… me and kriya .. WE ARE IN A RELATIONSHIP… WE LOVE EACH OTHER .. we decided to spend our life together … shukar hai ki usko iss shaadi se kuch problem nahi .. warna …. Mom meine aapse kaha tha na? that I wont be able to commit myself in this marriage ….phir bhi aapne mere shaadi usss [ he frowned more gritting his teeth] uss Taani se karvaya…. Mein aur taani …. Koi match hi nahi hai mom….[he screamed punching his hand on the wall and then lowered his voice and said].. mom… Dance is my passion….i see my carrer in dance and kriya … kriya aur mein ek hi sapna dekhta hu … dance…. We understand each other…. Mom try and understand…[he rubbed his forehead in frustration] and now you want me to spend my night with her …. No way!!!!!!!….." he marched …. His face burning with anger….. he opened the door of his room with a bang…

She sat on the bed …draped up in jewelry… her head drooped down and face covered with a red designed chunri…. She looked next to an angel… she kept stretching the lace of her duppatta between her fingers …. Her body frozen….. her mind filled with dreams and fear…. Dreams and fear of an ordinary girl about her suhaag raath …..

K so that was it … I cut shortened the ceremonies like I said in the last chapter coz this story actually begins with marriage ..

1 more thing guys , I don't know whether I have made any mistakes with the functions I wrote coz I haven't seen even a single north inidan marriage in real life.. all I have seen is in serials and I almost confused my selves.. don't know whether saath phera's comes first or the mangal sutra … I wrote it from my faint memory from serials..marriages down south are a lot different so please forgive me if I went wrong and please tell me whats right so that I wont make mistakes with my other ffs…

So now its time for me to go and its time for your work … please do hit like and comment they are my sole inspiration…. You all know na I treasure your comments so please do that… please don't make me disappointed …

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Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved! Yet to read di! Will read ASAP!
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Posted: 12 years ago
me second...

rey is so dumbu in this ff...wen will he finds abt kria...😡

taani started feeling somewhere something is wrong...

will love our doll taani ?😭

gaurav y cant say the scene u saw to taani????? 😡

the contract marriage happened finally...

precap is the teaser right ? saying abt the contract n his love😡
Edited by Nichuss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh dear love it I love how the marriage n all the function went in one go
Can't wait 4 the next update so excited to read the next chapter
Can't hate rey but didn't like him in this chapter
Poor taani ;( what will happen to her when she find out about the truth ;(
Anyways awesome update dear but plzz update soon can't wait :)
Edited by tbp4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES
OMG !!!!!!
INDU DI IT WAS PERFECT...😛
BUT I M HURT TOO SEE TAANI HURT...
LOVED EACH AND EVERY BIT OF IT BUT THE PERSON WHO WON ME OVER WAS GAURAV AND HIS POETRY...👏
I M JUST SPECHLESS DI IM STAMMERING FOR WORDS AND BELIEVE ME ALL THIS IS DIRECTLY FROM MY HEART.
Edited by shivi77 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear.
but rey is too rude with taani
hope kria's truth will reveal soon
gauarav is too cute.
how much he loves taani can do anything for her..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu grt yaar
Luvd it
Amazn
Waitin for update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow this was just awesome. I am so excited. With every chapter I love this ff more and more and its still my favorite.
Firstly about the flashback. I am so loving it. Their relation is so damn adorable. Rey's attitude yet that care and Taani. They are just made for each other.
And the aggressive both moments. Those were awesome. Taani thank god takes the right stand always and it was hawt.
Plus the marriage. I am so loving when Rey can't stop staring at her and Gaurav already doubting KR is great. Loved the message he gave to Rey.
And now the real fun begins and I am so excited that I can't wait. Just update soon di. Please real soon

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