ArHi FF: Can You Forget The Past... #10 Last Ch 53

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#581

what a story concept character everything...lovd to read it...read all the parts together...superb...

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the notebook

@the_notebook

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#582

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL STORY OH MY GOSH

your writing is simply beautiful..

your characters feel so absolutely real. this arnav, till the end, had the essence of the one everyone loves the most. how they overcame the past, their marriage, love, intimacy, everything was pitch perfect!

amazingly stunning ff. hats off:) hope u post more stories! u are a gifted storyteller!<3 thanks for writing this fabulous piece. xo

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Superb story dear loved it.. Couldn't stop myself from reading it until it's done..U r an excellent writer

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Rashu

@sanZ_Rash

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

👏

Congrats...👏👏👏

It was really a wonderful update as always..

Loved the story very much..

couldnt show up in the forum for a long tym..

first thing i have done coming here is reading the rest of this story from where I last stopped..

Thanx for the PM..😊😊

it made me easy to find out the story.⭐️..

The tension between arnav and khushi,the emotions, the depth of their love ,oh my gosh, u have written wonderfully..

Even i could feel that..

Once again congratulations and thank you for the wonderful story...

👏👏👏

And i too have to the catch up your other stories.. PC was really wonderful..

From your PM, i came to know that u have written the sequel..

Wow..👏👏👏

Am sure it will be wonderful .. You are really amazing..👏

PC was superb.. i really loved the character of khushi and arnav..

well written..

clearly different from CYFTP..

Oh yaar!! how could u write such wonderful and differnt stories with same characters, without loosing our original arnav and khushi..

u are wonderful.. Kudos to u..

👏

As as said, i couldnt peep in for a long time and my inbox was full..i couldnt receive other PMs..

So i dnt knw whether u have written any other wonderful stories or not..

If u dont mind,can u PM me..please..please..

I would love to read from you more...

thank you😊

Edited by Msrashu - 10 years ago

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prachi360

@prachi360

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

i just loved the story..

one of my favorites..😊

i just love the intensity of arhi's love..😳

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ARS24

@ARS24

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

my fav

reading for umpteeth tym 🤪

am so crazy for cyftp

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#587

As far as I remember I read the story last year but forgot to comment. At first, I thought it was Khushi who was unable to forget the past but it turned out to be Arnav who can't forget that fateful nigt where he attempted to rape Khushi under the effect of Shyam's lies. After rescuing Shyam's attack, in the same night Khushi had to save herself from Arnav's misbehaviour. I didn't like the fact that Arnav blackmailed Khushi to marry him. But at the end, his care helped her to love him again. It was impossible for both of them to forget that night but at least, they chose to move on in life, together.

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#588

This story was so beautiful.

Seriously enjoyed it, felt so many emotions from start to finish.

Found this story from the ipkknd ficverse where it was recommended in the Winter Reading List. So glad I found it because I just couldn't stop reading it when I started.

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Swaran13

@Swaran13

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#589

great wrk😊

Edited by Swaran13 - 9 years ago

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#590

Hey daer, I read this story long time back, but didn't get the oppurtunity to post any comment . I am really sorry for that.

So, when again, I found this story, I decide that I should now comment.

The story is extremely beautiful where you have portrayed the transformation of two protagonist extremely well. The way you turned Arnav from a monster to a lovable person, the way you make Khushi heal, everything was so so so beautiful. Commenting on all 53 chapters at the same time is very tough , I guess. But sincerely would hope that you would forgive me for not giving a detailed comment.

I really really really liked your story a lot.