ArHi FF: Can You Forget The Past... #10 Last Ch 53

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#591

Shraddha dii, I don't know from where should I start... 😊

This fiction was one of the best I have red so far... 👏

All the emotions you have described here were beyond magnanimous... ⭐️

With each passing line, my love and interest for this particular FF of yours had increased zillion folds... ❤️

The mail Arnav sent to Khushi on her Amma's b'day, really left me in tears... 😭

I was living each and every emotion you portrayed in this creation of yours...

Arnav's longing, repentance, unconditional and possessive love was something no girl would get enough of... 😊

If I get a choice of a life full of happiness and the one with so much sufferings yet so much love and longing, I would love to chose the later one... 😳

Thank you so so much for this Master Piece... I genuinely owe you a HUG... 🤗

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Aakanksha

@ina_saahil

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Loved the entire story, right from the concept, the characters, the storyline to the narration. Loved every bit of it.
Keep up the good work..

Lots Of Love.. 😊 😊

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#593

this is the second time i am reading this beautiful story couldnt comment before . i wasaglued to the story from the beginning to the end how both of them underwent a transformation esp arnav and how kushi removed his guilt and made him a love able person

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usha

@ushankitvc

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#594

its a very beautiful story...loved it a lot

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gprs

@gprs

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#595

Such a beautiful and lovely story..I enjoyed it very much..thank you dear for this story..

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#596

Can you forget the past? Can I forget the past?

Would I have been able to forget if a man had molested me? If he would have been a monster to me from the first day of my job for no reason? If he would have manipulated the situation to force me to work with him after everything? If he would have forced me to marry him? If he would have threatened me with the life and well-being of my family? If he would have possessively decided who I could be friends with, how I would travel to work, etc?

I probably wouldnt have. Some other lady might have. This Khushi did. To each her own.

However, what I liked most about your story was you made Arnav suffer equally. If Khushi had nightmares then so did Arnav. If Khushi couldnt move on from that incident then so couldnt Arnav. If Khushi was broken emotionally then so was Arnav. If Khushi forgave Arnav then only Arnav forgave himself.

Thank you for not giving me a Khushi who readily forgave Arnav. Thank you for making Arnav suffer and go through hell as well before they moved on in love 👍🏼

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finnie

@cute_monaya_fan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#597

Lovely. Re read the story

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#598

I want to read this beautiful story once again
Will do it soon
Where r u shradds

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sally_b95

@sally_b95

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#599

wow i really must appreciate you for such an awesome story..
I think it's one of the best Arshi Story i came across

I love the way you potrayed Arnav equally suffer like Khushi did... they're just made for each other.
😳
So sad it ended already but it was a cute ending as well 👏👏