~FORBIDDEN DESIRE (UL II)~#2 Ch05Pg141 01/02 EXT

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#171

awww its a beautiful part...love ur writing dear...awesome❤️

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saarah96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#172

congrats for new thread
and that was amaziing!
ooh so they got engagedd
feel sorry for khushi,,its not her faultt

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#173

Omg they got engaged!!!!!!!!

I know it was a forced engagement out of anger...it is arshi so that is bound to happen

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ashisumit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#174

like it 2 d core,,,,,,,,, u always touch ma heart grt

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kiran deep kaur

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Posted: 12 years ago

#175

haaye appy just love dis ff

bas yaar loved it 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#176

Congrats on new thread. Nice update. Cant wait more 4 next part:-D

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#177

awww that is one brilliant update.

LOved the play of emotions and the way you made them got engaged..abb ayega maza..and the last line..hai mein mar jawa"..I could imagine Barun aka ASR saying those words ...

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#178

*edit*

omg.. i am so happy ke i saw its updated.

hmm.. so this line is catchy-->Only one day being an exception..

when else did she cry such? 🤔..

anyway.. the Flash-back here remends me of only Bonded-2.. the pan-cakes,wOw..

their understanding ws gud from like - bachpan se.. usse pata chal jata tha k he likes her food, and isse pata chal jata tha k she is upset and crying..

she sketched him, and his feelings to know thee same were so amazing!! *lost*..

this line is so much speaking being so small-->He never know his eyes were so mesmerizing until he saw him on those piece of paper.

and wat the----- i knew it k gusse mei ASR will engage her with himself..

waah. mazaa aa gaya.

i loved ASR.. thnk 4 d wndrfull updte..

waiting to read more.. will comment as i read..😊

p.s. - am a gujarati! would love to type in guju, but would prefer English.. for obvious reasons--> aapko pata hei nahi chala, oh meri tai tai phiss... 😆

take care, good day..😃

Edited by trivedishraddha - 12 years ago