IPKKND SS:Sins Thread 2 *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

i can't believe that i read it out whole update in one go once again...just loved it...😆😆😆

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A.Hajnal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

^and I can't believe that I have read all the up-dates in some hours...😆

loved this FF of yours, you have done a Great job...👏

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Katelyn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Just read your amazing SS! I'm just completely impressed how you weaved such a beautiful tale! You've handle the sensitive subject matter with care and grace! I really loved the ending! Thank you for a wonderful journey! Hats off to you!! 👏👏👏

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Shree Nanda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

awww... its beautiful

the end was actually a new beginning

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Siya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

That was an amazing story. I really liked the way of your writting. And you have written so beautifully. But i am really happy that this is a completed story.. Otherwise i will be gone mad by thinking what happens next... Really... your cliffhangers... i dont want to talk about it... Finally i salute you dear for writtng such a fantastic story... Now i am gonna read all your work...

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Comment For Part One

--edited--

Ok, since I didn't reserve a comment for the prologue I'll just leave both here!

I found it so hard to believe the Arnav was writing down all this, all his sins. I mean, Arnav is the one who keeps everything within, doesn't let people see what he feels, doesn't express anything!

And then this journal! I mean Arnav also supposedly had horrible handwriting! :P Then I assume Khushi or someone is bound to read this journal eventually!

--edited again--

I take back what I said before! The way you've shown us Arnav through the words he writes in the journal it is completely believable.

The way you described the sexual assault scene between Shyam and Khushi created such a vivid and frightening image in my head. I could almost feel his sickening touches and her helpless pleas...

For reasons known to me this SS is going to be very special for me... I can connect with this...

I can't wait to see what happens further!

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Part Dos

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The guilty and seld hatred that Arnav is drowning in because of horrific events that recently occurred was practically tangible!

NK was just magnificent! He finally lived up to his potential! I loved seeing this NK :)

Khushi's current state of mind and being puts me to tears! Such a lively, bubbly girl has been reduced to... nothing...

I can't believe monsters such as Shyam even exist in this world... They cause nothing but misery of that person and those around them!

The phone call by Shyam is not going to be taken nicely by Arnav...

I don't like the way Arnav is avoiding Khushi! I mean if he had made a mistake he needs to repent!

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Those police officers... Society sickens me! I mean, always the girl fault, right? Men can't have been wrong. Argh! Shameful!Those police officers... Society sickens me! I mean, always the girl fault, right? Men can't have been wrong. Argh! Shameful!

After thinking over the polices comments and Khushi's reaction I feel as if she'll mar herself...meaning what makes her such a lure for these men!After thinking over the polices comments and Khushi's reaction I feel as if she'll mar herself...meaning what makes her such a lure for these men!

Last comment for today! Need to sleep now! Will read more later :)

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Finally, epilogue!

Will be reading and editing all these comments this weekend :)

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aarrsshhii

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Wow! Tht was one beautiful story... loved it totlly... n d epilogue ws smply mind blowing.. u etched their pain so well i ws litrlly crying.. nd ended wd so mch of joy tht am still in awe... u cast ur spells jst perfect!