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sumond

@sumond

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

I read this story in one go... it is one of the best i have ever read on this forum. You deserve to meet Gul and make her read this story. Take a proud bow cause you are the best.

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

I loved this SS!

I stayed up all night yesterday reading this. And I cried. I really did.

Some excerpts of the lines that I liked:

This struck to me the most out of all:

"None of this would have happened if only I had asked her for the truth.

If only I had taken the time to investigate Shyam' s claims.

If only I had listened to my heart for once.."

Wonderful, this! Very important points which we fans of the show kept thinking and re-thinking over them and wishing that such a realization would come..one fine day..but no, we didn't

"She came into my life like a hurricane, and I have been swept along ever since.."

Hurricane - The best metaphor to describe Khushi 😃

Loved the epilogue.

Aww..they have a baby girl..who has her mother's eyes! So cute! I can already imagine a happy ArHi 😳

Beautifully written Juhi! :)

P.S: I had planned to write a looong comment, but I think I was to absorbed in the story that I couldn't compile a long one 😛

Edited by SaRunLicious - 12 years ago

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amimus

@amimus

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

I absolutely loved this SS. Seeing things from Arnav's perspective was so wonderful.

I felt each and every emotions they went through . But I am very happy that in the end all is oK

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kamtokdin

@kamtokdin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

Truly touching. Love this arnav, his journey n realization. I agree a laad governor is more exciting, precious and infinitely better than a rajkumaar.

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seshatree

@seshatree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Such a beautifully written sin story loved it...

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Khuarv

@Khuarv

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Wow, just beautifully written. The intensity of arnav's and
khushi's feelings were heart wrenching and aptly expressed
thru ur writing. I am happy that i came across this SS.

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Blondiexzy

@Blondiexzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

that was masterpiece beautiful written it was something that happen reality and you also make to happy ending to it I read all the part in one go.it was emotional and sad to feel what Khushi went through and also Arnav

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libbyferns

@libbyferns

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Wow! Beautifully written. Glad you wrote the story from Arnav's point of view.

You are a very talented writer. Please continue with your good work.

Thank You.😊

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arshifan91

@arshifan91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Hi juhi

I read this SS in one go . I shld really admit tat this s d one of the most fantastic SS i have ever read on this forum👏 . U r really an awesomatic writer😊😃. I really luv d arnav & khushi in ur SS. U hav beautifully shown d stronger khushi & a vulnerable arnav. This SS made me cry as well as smile .

U hav written in a way as if i can really see in front of me as to wat s happening.

I read ur secrets SS too , that was another epic !!!!!

I really feel tat u r a very talented writer who can write both serious and comical stories and make d readers glue 2 ur stories.

Looking forward 4 more stories from u ⭐️

Aishu

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Lakshmi

@Chipmunks.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#300

such a beautiful story. Really touched my heart. The emotions were too real, it felt like i cud feel their pain, happyness, everything. The epilouge was so cute. Keep writing like this