Jaldi aaiyye Arnavji! Thread Three - Page 72

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pakpearl thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav in saree...NO !!! 😲...

Smita,will they ever return 2 Delhi ??
n fly 2 Paris??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Smita you're on a roll roll arent you?!? I am loving it...cant wait for more updates!! it was fab...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pakpearl

Arnav in saree...NO !!! 😲...


Smita,will they ever return 2 Delhi ??
n fly 2 Paris??

Relax!! Arnav was only teasing her.
Yup,2 updates later they'll b in Delhi. And after a few more updates they'll b in Paris.
Not liking the current updates?
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic update
thanks for the pm
can't wait to know if arnav will really wear the saree
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Posted: 12 years ago
hottest update
wow new suspense
eagerly waiting for another v
thanks a lot for surprise update
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Posted: 12 years ago
AHEM ...

Okay as usual i must say lovely update =) =) with hot scenes =P

And the most awesome part is

" Khushi: I really want to see u in that Kashmiri saree which di has sent for me. Wear it naa.. plz..
Arnav: Okay,as u wish!...
Khushi(shocked): What?!
Arnav: Ya! I'll wrap it around my trousers! Where is that saree?
Khushi: Arnavji I was.. just kidding!
Arnav: But I'm damn serious!
He gets up & starts hunting for the saree in Khushi's bag.
Khushi: Areh I said naa I was kidding?! What r u doing? Leave my bag! U've gone mad!
She runs into the bathroom with the bag while Arnav laughs,recalling her shocked expressions.

Seriously this is mind blowing =D =D i can visualize the whole conversation =D =D (ROFL)
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Posted: 12 years ago
commented but not dat in brief 😕sorry dear 😳😆
Edited by Destinyhope0305 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hush !!! Finally read ur update

Reviews of part 62-

1. OMG I got so angry wen arnav abrubtly left khushi I just wanted to hit him but wen he came back to see if his khushi is ok ,my anger vanished off

2. Den the return of TUM THEEK HO

Ufff☺️

again u made to skip my heart beat by dis sentence "Aap.. theek hain?"Awww dat is so caring of ARSHI

3.What da !!! "Sugerfree" kulfi , aisa kaise ho sakta hai

But If khushi did dis den it was so sweet of her awww

4.The song sequence was really nice dear

Nice decription '..was really very easy to imagine the scenes WOW !!!

I can understand khushi's pain wen arnav aint around her 'it's the same pain which I feel wen I miss ARSHI scenes once in a while

N she was away frm him for 40 bloody days


Reviews of part 63-

1. Again I got so angry wen arnav put a pillows pillar between dem I was like NAHIN YEH NAHI HO SAKTA

2. "What the !!!!Mere saajan hain uss paar, main iss paar, beechh me taqiyon ki deewaar!"

WHAT THE WHAT THE WHAT THE

I reallly imagined khushi here singing wow dear 😳😳

3.Hw sweet she cant sleep without him touching her .n more sweet is dat wen he offered his hands to her awww


4.WHAT THE KHUSHi !!!! R u mad he imprisoned u within the cage of his limbs n u r complaining !!!! Wake up woman For god's sake he is ASR n he loves u n only u 😭

(If I were in her place forget abt limbs I wud have given him handcuffs to tie me up ufff☺️)



5. N here u go again !!!!

The massage scene AWWW☺️


6.The inserting finger scene was so unexpected but khushi's reaction was expected

She strictly refused it !!

Hw cud she

Arnav's heart shattered in pieces 😭😭😭

THE GREAT ASR inside her AWWW

i loved hw u handled this scene very well dear👏 'ASR not getting angry at all wen his need wasn't fulfilled ..

This shows hw much he respects her

7.AWWW ☺️☺️☺️ once again u fulfilled my wish of khushi wearing arnav's shirt dear

She looks so cute like a smalll kid😳


THANK U THANK U THANK U MUAAAH



8. yaun sambandh '.I guess she read Kamasutra ,before having *Ahem ahem*

Romantic scenes nicey carved dear 👏 ...I cant express coz i m blushing hard now ufff ☺️




P.S-i m so sorry dear for the late reply ...was indulged but here i m again commenting on one of my favorite authors works

Edited by Destinyhope0305 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omggg...that was Hottt and funny ...☺️☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Smita..

Relax!! Arnav was only teasing her.
Yup,2 updates later they'll b in Delhi. And after a few more updates they'll b in Paris.
Not liking the current updates?

I never said it,honey...but he's nothing else to do...so khushi is in trouble😆

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