FF : Spending nights with Mr. Raizada(Note : P151)

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FF : Spending nights with Mr. Raizada


Prologue:

"La, try to understand. It was an urgent meeting. My whole career would have ruined if I hadn't attended this meeting.", Arnav said in distress.


"Your career is most important for you! What about our marriage? I already told you Arnav , that we are going to have grand celebration for this day! ", La shouted back.


"But, La...this was just a day when we went for our first date. Its not that important. ", Arnav argued back.

"Ooh yaa! After sometime, when our Anniversary is going to come, then you may say..That day is also not important! ", La said...almost in tears.

"La, please don't get me wrong. Please I beg you! See, I have already got our tickets ready for our Anniversary.", he said.


"Good then. Go alone! Because I am NOT going anywhere..!! Did you get that! ", La slammed room's door, with full force.


Arnav stood there silently. He was given promotion today...and bonus. He thought he would surprise La with a beautiful dress, which costed almost his bonus... He didn't care...all he wanted was La's happiness.


He stood there for some more minutes, then went out. It was a Love Marriage. Dating for 2 months, then, marriage. Everything was going fine. La was happy, but Arnav was more happier than her. But, something went wrong...after 3 months of their marriage, La changed. She was not the same girl, whom he fell in love with...or its him who has changed, as said by La. He did everything to make her happy. Sometimes, even ignored his parents. His Parents, who did everything for him!


She didn't slam door, just today. It was almost everyday. Most of the time, Arnav didn't have his dinner...slept outside room. But today, he was totally broken. He began doubting his love for her. He kept walking...as if his feet knew where to go.., until he reached his favourite place, Rose Garden...only place where he could cry as much as he want.



He entered the garden absent mindedly, and idly sat on a bench...lost in thoughts, doubting his love... Did he really...


*sob* *sob*


His thoughts were interrupted with sudden sobs. Generally, garden is empty.. Of course, who would come at this time, except him. He looked for the source of cry. He looked here n there...but couldn't find anyone. Suddenly, he felt that sound was nearby. As he was looking here n there...he was startled, when he saw that source of cries was sitting just next to him. A lady, cladded in red, beautiful saree was sitting with her legs close to her chest, face dug in her palm..hands were full of red chudas {wedding-red bangles}


Why should he care? Her sorrows, her problem, he thought and again got lost in his thoughts. Her cries continued...in fact grew louder. Gosh! His sorrows were not enough, when God sent an unknown, newly married lady to increase his sorrows!, he thought.


"Ermm...Excuse me, Mrs. Newly married lady", Poked Arnav.





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Some marriages are not always successful...whether its love or arranged. How hard you try to adjust, balance...still everything goes wrong. Probably, God has some other plans for you! Welcome, to a brand new story of two strangers. Strangers, whose problem made them one... one? Fasten your seat belts , and enjoy this journey of Arnav and Khushi...who met one night, burdened with same problem. Will it bring them closer? Or separate them, before they become one? Is this meeting just a co-incident, or were they destined to meet?








Edit : Readers, I just read the story of Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna { Sorry, I never saw this movie😳} . Its just a coincidence that my prologue matched its concept. But, I promise you, this story won't go KANK way :-) There are some more characters to be introduced :-) Some more secrets to be revealed...Enjoy!














Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago


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Gazal.. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Readers!


I am back with a brand new FF. New journey, new story..where there is sorrows, confusion, fun, love, ditching and most important romance. Updates will be according to my exam dates😆. Hope u will enjoy this journey! I know, many are going to kill as I still have one of SS still left incomplete😳...will start that SS , after my Finals are over :-)


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I like this story.. Please continue soon
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I loved the prologue. I hope you update soon ..can't wait to read further :)
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Lovely concept! Looking forward to reading more! 😊
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Amazing concept:)
just Loved it..
Continue soon nd thnx for pm
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interesting story..continu soon..😊
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Continue soon dear ! Coz I'm in Love with the Prolog ! and can't wait for the Awesome story to start !
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Wow, sounds like a interesting concept! :)
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Beautiful, amazing, superb
I read your OS and became your Fan. You write really very well and are talented. Than you for the PM and keep the good work.
I am not a Yash raj movies fan or romantic movies type but have seen the starting of Kabhi Alvidaa Na Kehna and reading the ending of the prologue that movie came in my mind.
But keep updating regulary and pm-ing me 😊

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