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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Aww that was so cute and romantic ...
Finally someone wrote about our mad couple after sooo long ...
Yes I think we all wondered ... What if Shyam did not do what he did ...
What would Arnav have done ...
This was perfect ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
beautifully written...!!!!šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Just one word : B E A U T I F U L !!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
beautiful... couldn't have been better
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
I love this OS. It's so good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
You should go bat shit crazy much more often!! That was stupendous. To say I loved it just doesn't cut it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice os.

thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
This was f**king amazing. The way you described every colour, every sound, every movement and every feeling is BRILLIANT. These scenes of Payesh marriage are moving in my head and I can actually recollect everything and add a lot more from your imagination if shyam fisco had not been incorporated in the show. Whenever I rewatch those scenes I am bound realize that Khushi's bangles are flame orange and gold and not red which I previously assumed. KHushi's kiss would appear more like a caress. The lingering of Arnav's kiss would be much more pronounced than previously. Khushi's blush would be stark and I would hear Arnav's throbbing heart and would feel the excitement and thrill going within his whole being. In short, whenever I would see those scenes again, they would remind me of this os.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Loved it Sona..
I have always wanted this minus Shyam fiasco..
Arnav coming to the point that he loves Khushi and that slow smile rising on his lips is creating an amazing sight in my head..
Khushi laughed at him after he declared his love!! Only Khushi can do that... But then holding hands feels so completed and satisfying.. Amazing..
Please continue with your withdrawal symptoms.. I want more like these.. Please its a request..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Wow. I am experiencing withdrawal symptoms too. I wish it had been like this on the show.

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