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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

wow wished it went like this

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: V323
Sona... I don't know about bat shit crazy, but yes, this is how I wanted it on the show. Your writings have this aura of elegance around them. Calling them things like awesome and amazing seems... wrong. Beautiful, elegant, charming... adjectives of the olde world aura, basically.

When I was reading this, this is the song that came to my head -

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_PkzsMak6P8[/YOUTUBE]

This song is beautiful. One of my favorites. Thank you! So much! <3

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I am in love with this OS...

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Swati

@Swati_

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Awww...Sona...*hugs*
This was absolutely beautiful...i am watching the descriibed scenes again and falling in love with Arnav and Khushi and Barun and Sanaya again...:) :)
I always wondered what would have happened had Arnav not seen Shyam with Khushi..i woukd have loved if the serial had taken this route...
I so so loved this OS...it brought back old memories when IPK had iits golden days...
I am missing my serial..makers never did justice to this

I loved the OS...you did justice to this story or let me say you just made the actual Arnav and Khushi's story more beautiful..

Love you Sona...
Take care...

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disha7

@disha7

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Such a beautiful OS sona!!!

I loved it 😳

even i wish this would have happened...But not once did i dream that khushi's reaction would be like this😆

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

cute.

you are crazy.

this is brilliant.

i loved it

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hai kaash. Hai kaash. Hai kaash.

You are meant to be a writer and a world class one at that. There are two aspects about any story. The idea and the execution. The idea is simple. Arnav recognises, accepts and declares his love for Khushi.

The execution is brilliant. Your prose is poetry. No author on this forum can do that.

Thanks for writing such a sigh inducing, aww worthy one shot

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Asmita

@Asmitasinha

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

tooo gud...
jst loved it...😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
gr8 job...

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Gazal..

@Gazal..

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

I am speechless after reading this OS😳

Its beautiful! I mean, there was not even a single second when I was not smiling. There was not even a single second, when my mind was not overpowered with a regret that , Why I am not Khushi. The pleasure, after reading ur OS is undefinable!

Beautiful! ❤️

Edit : Have bookmarked this OS...'coz I want to feel this pleasure again n again!😳

Love,

Gazal🤗

Edited by Gazal.. - 12 years ago