ArHi FF - Glitter - LINK TO STORY PAGE 85 - Page 20

loved your story, read all the parts in one go

Oh wow what a story you have here!!!!! I love love love this killer attitude Khushi who is beautiful, confident, party's like crazy and as akash said was born with a beer bottle in hand. Arnav seems to be a seasoned player since he could guess the waitress's size with just one glance. now he has set his eyes on khushi to take her father down. Will have to wait to see where they are headed. Hmmm akash seems nice just that he seem to have many bad days considering how irritation at the world in general. Though he is not happy to spend one evening with khushi he is getting attracted to her. Anjali's story is sad while Payal is happiest among them all. Now with khushi's accident will have to see what changes are brought in their lives. I just hope she does not have a memory loss. Loved whatever I have read till now. Nice work.

hi i just read all chapter and this ff really awesome
but still confe about kushi :)

Interesting start. Like this confident sexy and powerful Khushi

Wow V.. This is breath taking. I am for one absolutely loving khushi's personality and have decided to like her.
In the first chapter, when u just introduced her, I wasn't sure if she is what u depicting her to be. A spoilt brat. Although there were chances she could have been but doubt many bimbos get bored. It's someone with brains n thots working that get bored in a place full of bodies pumping in loud music. Then why is she there?

Then I wondered if the father is the typical, I do not have the time on earth for my daughter n was this her attention seeking method. You proved me ( I think) wrong on the next few chaps. Her interaction with her dad in chap 4 was healthy enough. But then so was her personality in it. She came across as a sharp mind with a sharper mouth. Sleek. Knows her body n has no issues using it to an extent.

All your characters r very interesting. Payal n her steely strength, aakash n his attention to detail including his boss's daughter, Anjali- a woman with hope and ofcourse ASR.. The black spider.. Haii... Brilliant!

Loving this story V. Wishing u luck in exams.. They do suck but well..:)

Oooh that was an interesting chapter and introduction of new characters . Seriosuly Anjali's character is a totally polar opposite to the show . And Devyani is a Madam ;) But feel these two characters are going to be important to the story .

amazing update
luvd it

will for sure scrap u my link
ill be highly thankful if u send me d link

Read all the chapters in one go.This story is superb with wonderful dialogues.

Khushi met with an accident?!Hope she will be fine.

And what happened with Anjali was really,really sad.

Looking forward to the next update.