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HansaN

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Awesome story dear loved it

Pls accept my buddy request

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rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Amazing !! Such a lovely chapter !!

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Blondiexzy
this is an amazing story show love, caring and understanding please do continue soon is Khushi pregnant from the hint the tiredness and eating habit I hope so.
do pm me please
thanks

Thanks dear for ur kind words. Glad you enjoyed the update. 😊

Will PM when I update next.

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
an amazing gift by arnav to khushi😳 khushi head of kids section😃 Lovely update👏

Thank you. Glad u liked his gift😊

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Afya
Vandana, I am glad you are enjoying the story...
and I am quite glad I have met your expectations😉
I wrote what I would have liked to see in the show. Sheesh Mahal was an important part of Arhi history...It began there...So, I wanted her to feel resurrected there.😊

Thanks dear for your kind words. Thanks for the encouragement every time.😛

About not stopping writing...Time is the issue. Will try to write whenever I get time as long as all of you enjoy reading it. I personally think I am only an ordinary writer. But as long as you guys like it, I will write.😊

I feel exactly the same ...what you are writing the way your story is going every detail, their conversations, etc are exactly what I would have wanted to see on the show...

Are you really ending it in the next update...oh no!

The other thing that I would like to see if not in this story but your next one would be conversations where he explains or they talk about things like how and why he reacted in a specific way...like that scene where she finds out abt Shyam during the Havan and bumps into him and how worried he gets for her but when he calls her he pretends it was because there was so much work and does not let her know that he was worried!

Or how when he wanted to apologise to her (for his parents barsi) how he kept waiting for her to come to shantivan and how he gets so restless when she does not...

Or his reaction to those goons he beats up in Nainital...or how he comes back from the hospital and hugs Lavanya thinking its her etc etc!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Afya
Vandana, I am glad you are enjoying the story...
and I am quite glad I have met your expectations😉
I wrote what I would have liked to see in the show. Sheesh Mahal was an important part of Arhi history...It began there...So, I wanted her to feel resurrected there.😊

Thanks dear for your kind words. Thanks for the encouragement every time.😛

About not stopping writing...Time is the issue. Will try to write whenever I get time as long as all of you enjoy reading it. I personally think I am only an ordinary writer. But as long as you guys like it, I will write.😊

I feel exactly the same ...what you are writing the way your story is going every detail, their conversations, etc are exactly what I would have wanted to see on the show...

Are you really ending it in the next update...oh no!

Or how when he wanted to apologise to her (for his parents barsi) how he kept waiting for her to come to shantivan and how he gets so restless when she does not...

Or his reaction to those goons he beats up in Nainital...or how he comes back from the hospital and hugs Lavanya thinking its her etc etc!

So enjoying it...