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Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
I feel exactly the same ...what you are writing the way your story is going every detail, their conversations, etc are exactly what I would have wanted to see on the show...Are you really ending it in the next update...oh no!The other thing that I would like to see if not in this story but your next one would be conversations where he explains or they talk about things like how and why he reacted in a specific way...like that scene where she finds out abt Shyam during the Havan and bumps into him and how worried he gets for her but when he calls her he pretends it was because there was so much work and does not let her know that he was worried!Or how when he wanted to apologise to her (for his parents barsi) how he kept waiting for her to come to shantivan and how he gets so restless when she does not...Or his reaction to those goons he beats up in Nainital...or how he comes back from the hospital and hugs Lavanya thinking its her etc etc!
Thanks Vandana.😊
Thanks for your suggestions. Very good ones. Shows your passion for IPKKND. Will try to use them another time.😊 in a OS or SS
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