NC17/ Arhi SS: A New Life- Complete

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

ur doing a fantastic job with this ss😊

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Moumita Mukherjee

@fangurrl

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#42

you wrote the part beautifully
amazing
i loved it
waiting for the next part
update soon

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

nice update and I am in love with the way you are updating the story

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

It was as beautiful as the event sponsored by ASR and KKGSR. Wonderful dear.

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: divyav
wow !! he wants khushi to work with him... thats so sweet of him !!!. ..
thanks for the pm dear ...loved it

Thanks.

Glad you loved it.

He always want to be around her in the serial too. So, I used that😉

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: chavvi16
cool she has a department for herself that too children
am sure she shall do well
after all she is khushi and she is good at this stuff and arnie aur aman hai na inhe help karne ke liye
this aint the end of this is it
i should hope not
not so soon man i was just getting acquainted with this and its over nahin
okay wow he really did give her such lovely surprise right
aww so this is what he was working late nights for
and now they can work together more
that was beautiful
and then the ending was just what was needed
cheers for pm

Thanks dear for your detailed feedback😊

I am glad you loved it.

Well, the end of this SS is nearing...But I will try to write Sequels and OS now and then.

Yep, This was his surprise. 😃

And for the ending 😳

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: choochootrain
E kid models r sooo.adorable!!!...n wat a surprise arnav gave kushi...sooo proud of him...he knows she will shine...jus sooo happy for kushi...n now she's e head of e new division...n more time to.spend w her husband...

Love ittt!!!!...

Thanks dear. Glad you loved it.

It is so like him, Isnt it?😛

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: mehak06
What a lovely hubby khushi have... n i loved how he came to buaji's place n said tumhare bagair mai kaise so sakta hoo... awww

I loved that too. It was so cuddly cute❤️

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Afya

@Afya

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mdeshpande
👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
that was so like Arnav ! have read ur SS all in one go and really loved the way u show their thought processes, their dialogues n the way story progressed. I esp. loved how u combined K's sensitivities with Delhi gang rape incident and then followed it with the restaurant one. those were aptly worded.

looking frwrd to another lovely updt.

plz pm me.

Thanks dear. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for appreciating my story so beautifully. 😊

Yeah, the rape incident was important, I felt, to bring into the story.

Will PM you when I update next.