ArHi SS: Static Shocks - COMPLETED p.28 19/6

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msmarple

@msmarple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

Funny Story😃

The real life A & B must be really interesting people:)

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avantika_2012

@avantika_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

Sorry for the lack of comments lately. Was on a long vacation :)

Chapter 4:

So much fuss over a bloody VLCC voucher. 🤣 And Khushi ends up thinking that Payal was pregnant! 🤣

Only 10 buck at stake? Even I have a higher standard! 😆 I guess when it comes to ArHi, it's more about the satisfaction of winning than the stakes, right?

Coffee date? I like it. Will it happen? I hope it does! 😉

Chapter 5:

"Erm, no actually you can't, Amy. Erm, I mean ... I was just celebrating the fact that my wife is housing my kid, and I'd really appreciate some alone time" 🤣

That might have wiped off everyone's smirks but it had me rolling with laughter. Too good, Arnav!

That proposal...I've never heard something like that. Hehehe! But they did get back together. Niceee! 😃

This was a cute story. I wish you had time to continue with it for a longer period of time. Great work, though! :)

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Brilliant SS... 👏 Im almost jealous of 'A' and 'B'... They have one of those stories which you can tell your grandchildren when you are 70...😆

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Dear Vee,
This is one of the most versatile (read:only versatile) story I've read so far. And needless to say I'm in love with your work. Truly, madly, deeply in love with it Vandana. So Vee stands for Vandana, eh.
I would love to hear more about A and B. Sounds like a familiar story, verry familiar. LOL :3 Continue this masterpiece, and 10 bucks, you sure Arnav mean 10 RUPEES? And not 10 Dollars or Euros or Pounds or something.. 10 Won would be the cheapest best - me thinks.

xoxo
Ara

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

Superb story.👏

Laugh out loud reading the update in which arnav throws cake to Khushi.🤣

Enjoyed reading it 😆

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arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Shucks! Where was I all this while? You are an amazingly talented lady, as others much have already told you way before!

I read Glass, and my! my! That killed me with its sheer suspense. And this one? This one had me laughing my lights off! It's really amusing to see that this story was inspired by real life events! And you, experimenting with various genres and emerging victorious in each one of them is just amazingly. *Touchwood*

And no, this story doesn't require an epilogue. It had a perfect ending, or should I say, a perfect beginning?! 😉

A brilliant piece I say! 👏