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Posted: 12 years ago
Vee just caught up the last 2 chapters and boy I am still Rofling !!!!

"What the f u d g e, you son of a b i s c u i t? What the fudge is wrong with you?! You bloody basket!

You grass-hole! Did you just call my face a bloody dustbin?"

This from the 2nd chapter just " Fudging " made my day or now in my case night !!!! I will be sleeping with a huge smile on my face !!! And YES throwing anything on a Chanel even a Vintage one is a crime !!!!

Loved HP shouting " Earthquake " and his reference to Arnav and Khushi not being heavy was hilarious !!!!
Absolutely loved the last two chapters !!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 2
Oh poor khushi!
Face smeared with cake. Had been a sight!
And yes god save poor arnie too!
As to how he would pacify her!
The words u used instead of slangs...It make me ROFL🤣


Chapter 3

Oh my my! I am having a hard time controlling my laugh! not that I am😆
Loved the 'EARTHQUAKE'

And why did payal said no wedding & ran out sobbing?
Curious for that!

Please update pretty soon :)
Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahahahahahaha HP is funnier than thought /./... screaming EARTHQUAKE ... for the world to know which only last for 10 seconds /...
Nice ...
Thx for PM ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am speechless, Vee!!
It was hilarious to read about A&K moving in circles and a very astute HP upon perceiving the chandelier...becoming aware of the onset of the quake tremors...Ah! the duo squished under the table even after the quake ceased...not complaining.
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Posted: 12 years ago
For chapter 2-

I loved Arnav's reasoning about birthdays and why God needed an appointment with him if he needed anything from him. Hehehe...

I liked the different version of the gaalis that Khushi was using for him until she gave up and started abusing him proper.

She was wearing Chanel... you can't ruin it. Bas!

But the question is why did Khushi come all the way to his house to wish him?
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I had forgotten everything about the story except the dedication 😛

So i reread and got to read the inspirations too 😊

The servants of this house are as weird as it's master. Who would connect an apology to an earthquake?

I guess Arnav and Khushi will move on from the cake incident to help out Payal (???)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter Four

Arnav and Khushi made to wriggle out from under the table and in the next moment, they banged their heads. "UGH" Khushi shouted. "Get out of the bloody way!"

Arnav cast one look at the fire breathing Khushi and then, got out of the bloody way.

* * *

"Payal?"

Payal raised a blotchy head right into the eyes of a very concerned Khushi.

"Khushi ' I '"

"Atleast tell me what went wrong, darling?"

Payal sat up straight on her bed and looked into Khushi's eyes. "I ' Khushi, this week, Akash has been increasingly on the edge around me. I've been feeling so unwanted around him. So unwanted, so unloved. I kept thinking this was just work and whatever, but today also happened to be our anniversary, like the day we met. And Akash forgot. I didn't mind, I didn't even tell him off. But then his secretary phoned him, you know Wanda at work? She PHONES him and she tells him it's our anniversary. Akash shoots me this major guilty look and shoots off. And after three hours he comes back and hands me this huge box and apologizes for forgetting and gives m a hugeass lecture about how stressful it is at him at work and all. And then I opened the gift and guess what the gift was? A VLCC make up voucher. A BLOODY VLCC MAKE UP VOUCHER. And then I started thinking that what if THIS was what our marriage resulted into? Akash being busy at work and being reminded about anniversaries by his secretary? What if we just got divorced. No marriage, no nothing"

Khushi stared back at her client and friend and then leaned forward as if she was about to tell Payal a secret. "Payal" she asked in a stage whisper "Are you pregnant?"

Suffice to say, Payal exploded.

Twenty minutes later'

Akash rushed into house and shouted for Payal. "Khushi where is Payal?" he asked urgently and continued without waiting for a reply. "I had been planning to surprise her by acting all cold and distant for a week, and then Wanda ruined my plans and so I had to do something so that she has a proper surprise in the evening and then she turns to me and tells me that she doesn't want to get married!"

Arnav and Khushi looked their confusion. "Akash" Khushi began. "Payal is that way" Arnav interrupted. Akash sprinted away as Khushi and Arnav looked at each other and glared.

Twenty minutes after the "twenty minutes later"'

Akash and Payal emerged out of the room and grinned. "Is the wedding back on?" asked an anxious Khushi. "Yes!" they shouted together. "Give me ten bucks, Khushi" Arnav whispered into her ear as Akash and Payal walked out of the house. "Damn it" muttered an irate Khushi as she turned towards Arnav and slapped ten bucks onto his palms.

As an amused Arnav watched on Khushi stomped away. "I've still not forgiven you!" she shouted as she walked away. Arnav began to laugh and fell back on the sofa

"Khushi!" shouted Arnav as she walked away. "Will you go out for coffee with me?" he asked her, just as she walked up the stairs.

Khushi froze for just a second before turning back to look at Arnav. With an inscrutable look in her eyes, she ran back up the stairs.

___________

The first person to guess the Father of the Bride reference gets a dedication in the next post, and a hint as to where the story is going.

What happened in the original incident was B had walked into the house in tears, telling A how her boyfriend did not know and understand her. All this because B's boyfriend had gifted her a VLCC make up voucher, on her birthday. A didn't understand the fuss and asked B if she was pregnant.

It took me two weeks to get them to talk again.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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VLCC be the bane of life...😆 I think Payal and Akash made up because Akash must have told Payal that the voucher was actually for Wanda..hai na?😉

Playing the betting game huh? Par sirf 10 bucks? yeh ASR bada kanjoos hai!😆

I'm bad at guesses...bina reference ke hint aur dedication milne waala ho toh bolo🤣
Edited by Eccentrica - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mujhe koi VLCC voucher de to mere hatho khoon ho jaega!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I saw that you had updated and the title intrigued me, so I read the whole thing in one go and loved it!
It's a witty, fun, sexy little read, and I love the way you're writing it!

I like Khushi here, sassy and accomplished and no one's doormat.

Payal and Akash are hilarious, and Arnavji is one of a kind!

Can't wait to read the rest, Vee!

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