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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Update ... Loved ittt !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Khushii*

I HAVE to reserve!! TY so much <3


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Look who's back xD

AND just after dinner 🤣 *yah, had a super early dinner today* Had to continue the tradition 😎 Woot! Awesome. 😃

Well, about the OS... the concept is FANTASTIC! I simply loved it to the core. Their feelings can be felt with deeply. How even after not knowing each other, they know each other. The 'Coffee Man' was cute yet sad at the same time. Through out, I was wondering what's gonna happen next? Who is he? Will he stay? What does he do? And gazillion other questions. haha, aww. I'm happy you liked it. 😆 I couldn't come up with anything else so i went with 'coffee man'. 😆

The very first letter... & the last he wrote... It would have made Kriya happy to know he wanted more than friendship and sad at the same time having him leave with a part of her. I can't decide myself whether to be happy or sad 😛

When he returned to the hospital, her snappy reply <3 The talk they had was heart warming. At least his Uncle knows his real self. It was heart breaking to watch him leave! Ahh, it's always heart breaking to watch anyone leave. He's no special, huh?! You loved her snappy reply? 😆 It is heartbreaking but meh. =/ it had to happen. =P

Their hug and the painful emotion of theirs at the very end =( Why did he have to leave? I wonder what could be that dangerous. I'm already getting tons of reasons behind this mystery! There's a reason. 😃

Oh, how I wish you would continue this into an FF <3 Please do if you have the time? I surely will be one to read. The concept seriously is superb and mystery full. My most favorite genre. Think about it. I'm always here to pester you into updating and even starting it to begin with ;) HAHA. I really wanna start this FF but not before finishing ASD. </3

Oh and did I mention how much I ALWAYS love the titles you give? Save You, A Sweet Dream and now The Unknown <3 So vast yet so precise and short. Beautiful thinkings! It connects just perfectly with your concepts. That being said, I need to know, what happens of this concept? It'd be a wish come true seeing it shaped into an FF. Only after you finish ASD and you get time of course 😃 Haha, yeah? I usually just make them up at last moment because i couldn't come up with anything. 😆

Liked it? Maasi ji LOVED it beyond a limit. ☺️ Thank you so much Beti ji <33 It really makes me super duper happy shappy. It was a pleasure reading it. I'm glad I asked you to 😃 YAYYY. I succeeded. *dances*

Love-
-Khushi!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: OnlyHope

Ufff, Angad Kripa my all time favs
Will unres soon 😳

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YEH KYA THA 😳
Until the very last line I was hoping he won't leave, but he did :(
KYUN 😭😭
Mere AK ko alag kar diya..😭

Wese, beautifully written Jot <3 😳


I had no idea you liked AK. 😲 Seriously. 😆

HAHAHAHA. Yo, that's the concept of an FF i wanna write. 😳 🤣 Thank youu <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aroramaina

So touching.I Love it.Pls Harjot keep writing more OS on AK.I am so obessed with them.Thanks Khushi to encourage Harjot to write a AK OS.


Thank youu. <3 haha, i know you are. XD
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@KS_Shreya: Aww, thank you. 😃

@tanya: thanks dude.

@saitan: thanks for reading. =]

@Preet: MOMMM. Thank JUUU. 😃

@Fleur_de_lis: Thank youuu. <3 Unfortunately, i don't read ARHI stuff. Only AK. 😳 But i meant to ask you..are you French?

@kweet: thank you so much.

@Tyro: Yup, he does.. and for himself. 😆 thanks for reading.

@Mallu: thanks.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Angel-Jot.: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry like button isnt working for me.
Must say i loved it.
I never try anything other then arhi but i loved this

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