||AK OS|| The Unknown

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Posted: 12 years ago
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The unknown
Featuring, Angad & Kripa
[Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai]

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So, first things first. This is actually going to be a short scene based off of this concept that I had in mind.. I'm not sure if I'm going to start the FF but Khushi wanted an OS and so i figured, why not write a scene out to see what it becomes?

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This is my life. My godforsaken life, She thought bitterly staring at the bland white ceiling trying to avoid the annoying bright lights. What happened to my life? Shaking her head, she forced herself to sit up on the bed ignoring the pain that shot up her arm as she pushed herself up. Beep. Beep. Beep. She groaned at the constant noise that the defribilator created. First it had made it impossible for her to get some sleep, now it was making it impossible for her to think clearly about everything that had happened. She was sitting in a hospital room injured and she had no idea how or why. Closing her eyes, she just sighed. Where was he? An image of a very handsome man around the age of 24, with dark brown hair and light brown eyes popped in her mind. Sahil. That's what he had introduced himself as. High school drop out, employed at Starbucks, lives with his Uncle. But that wasn't the truth, which she had learned a couple days ago. All she really knew was that, he had lied. He was not who he claimed to be. He was someone else but she never got the chance to speak to him. As soon as she found out about the truth, he had disappeared leaving her a mysterious note in her mailbox.

[Who knewI'd get to know you so well? Who knew I'd want more than friendship? But that's dangerous. Very dangerous. For me, and for you. Goodbye Kripa Sharma. It was nice knowing you.

-Your 'Coffee Man' ]

The door swung open interrupting Kripa's thought process and in stepped the one and only, 'Coffee Man'. She looked at him shocked. Here he was 2 weeks later, strolling into the hospital room wearing a black leather jacket and black jeans instead of the usual half sleeved shirt and ripped jeans. His hair was no longer disheveled and it definitely did not look unwashed. It was perfectly combed back with gel and he had a slight smirk on his face, replacing the friendly, apologetic smile he had always kept on his face since she had met him. Clearing his throat to snap her out of her reverie, he grabbed the uncomfortable hospital chair and pulled it near her bed so he could sit.

"How are you Kripa?" He asked simply crossing his arms across his chest. She opened her mouth to respond but nothing came out. Who the hell is this man? She thought almost horrified.

"First tell me what the hell I should call you." She snapped without meaning to causing him to raise an eyebrow surprised.

"Coffee Man should be alright." He chuckled leaning forward on his knees. She stared into his light brown eyes searching for that same warmth and helplessness that she had related to. The reason she had extended a hand of friendship. But she saw none of that anymore. His eyes showed absolutely no emotion. They seemed almost, empty. Shaking his head at her unresponsiveness, quite shocked at the transformation, he decided to continue talking.
"I'm Angad Khanna. That's what you can call me." She nodded slowly trying to understand every single word he spoke.

"You're so different." She muttered softly. Then she saw it. A flicker of emotion. It was pain. His eyes softened and so did his posture. He leaned back in the chair, head hung almost in shame. "Who are you? What are you? You lied to me didn't you? About everything.." Kripa choked out, wanting to lock herself in the bathroom and just let it all out. All the suppressed emotions she had within her. A gasp escaped from her mouth when he shook his head in 'yes'.

"My Uncle will tell you everything Kripa. Please don't take this the wrong way. I'm not sure what you think of me right now but i'm not wrong. I promise. I never was." He looked up at her and gently caressed her hand with his, sending a jolt of electricity through her. "I never meant to develop such strong feelings for you Kripa. I didn't mean to. If I hadn't, I wouldn't have had to leave. But I have to. I've put everything in so much danger. It's not right. It's not possible." He stated shaking his head pulling his hand away as if it hurt too much to touch her. So, she took the initiative. She grabbed his hand in hers and squeezed.

"Angad." She said, finding it odd to call him something else other than 'Sahil'. "Why is this so complicated? Why are you so secretive?" He shook his head moving her hand so it was back on the bed. Just as he about to speak, something buzzed. He patted his pocket and pulled out his phone. Replacing the old Nokia, he now sat there holding an Iphone. As soon as he put the phone back in his pocket, he was back to being emotionless. He clenched his jaw and stood up.

"I have to go Kripa. Take care of yourself. It was nice knowing you. Goodbye." He said formally stuffing his hands into his pockets, stopping himself from running to her and pulling her into a tight hug. From telling her how much he loved her. A look of panic crossed Kripa's face as she watched him take a step backwards still staring at her. Involuntarily, she rose a hand towards him, vision blurred with unshed tears. Upon that, he froze. He felt rooted to the ground, transfixed on her hand waiting for him to grab it. Oh what the hell. You're leaving anyway Angad, he thought before rushing over to her and pulling her into a hug. He pulled her away to stare at her, to memorize her beautiful face. Her beautiful big brown eyes that seemed to be staring right into your soul. Gently framing her face in his hands, he pressed his forehead with hers and blew out a painful breath. Kripa bit her lip holding back the tears that threatened to escape. She so desperately wanted to tell him to stay but something told her that he couldn't. He couldn't stay. She closed her eyes slowly as she felt his lips brush hers. He pressed a little harder and kissed her quickly before turning around and walking away as fast as he could without looking back.

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So yeah, that's it. 😃 Hope you liked it maasi ji. ☺️

-Jot.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Masi ka toh pata nahi lekin mujhe mast laga! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice Angel...
interesting writeup :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I HAVE to reserve!! TY so much <3

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Look who's back xD

AND just after dinner 🤣 *yah, had a super early dinner today* Had to continue the tradition 😎

Well, about the OS... the concept is FANTASTIC! I simply loved it to the core. Their feelings can be felt with deeply. How even after not knowing each other, they know each other. The 'Coffee Man' was cute yet sad at the same time. Through out, I was wondering what's gonna happen next? Who is he? Will he stay? What does he do? And gazillion other questions.

The very first letter... & the last he wrote... It would have made Kriya happy to know he wanted more than friendship and sad at the same time having him leave with a part of her. I can't decide myself whether to be happy or sad 😛

When he returned to the hospital, her snappy reply <3 The talk they had was heart warming. At least his Uncle knows his real self. It was heart breaking to watch him leave! Ahh, it's always heart breaking to watch anyone leave. He's no special, huh?!

Their hug and the painful emotion of theirs at the very end =( Why did he have to leave? I wonder what could be that dangerous. I'm already getting tons of reasons behind this mystery!

Oh, how I wish you would continue this into an FF <3 Please do if you have the time? I surely will be one to read. The concept seriously is superb and mystery full. My most favorite genre. Think about it. I'm always here to pester you into updating and even starting it to begin with ;)

Oh and did I mention how much I ALWAYS love the titles you give? Save You, A Sweet Dream and now The Unknown <3 So vast yet so precise and short. Beautiful thinkings! It connects just perfectly with your concepts. That being said, I need to know, what happens of this concept? It'd be a wish come true seeing it shaped into an FF. Only after you finish ASD and you get time of course 😃

Liked it? Maasi ji LOVED it beyond a limit. ☺️ Thank you so much Beti ji <33 It really makes me super duper happy shappy. It was a pleasure reading it. I'm glad I asked you to 😃

Love-
-Khushi!
Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ufff, Angad Kripa my all time favs
Will unres soon 😳

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YEH KYA THA 😳
Until the very last line I was hoping he won't leave, but he did :(
KYUN 😭😭
Mere AK ko alag kar diya..😭

Wese, beautifully written Jot <3 😳
Edited by OnlyHope - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So touching.I Love it.Pls Harjot keep writing more OS on AK.I am so obessed with them.Thanks Khushi to encourage Harjot to write a AK OS.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's beautiful
My Beti is amazing when it comes to Angad-Kripa
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Posted: 12 years ago
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though I am only in Arnav Khushi and recently in Madhubala...



yet I will say...this was a refreshing change...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superlike button ... hope it was there


would have hit it for sure...


and yeah thanks a lot for the pm...


if you love reading on Arnav Khushi please let me know...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice OS...

seems like for her he has to stay away from her...

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