Vignettes -12. From ... , with love - Page 69

Aaahhh...! At last a happy ending..! Oh my god..! What a read..! You express emotions beautifully!! :)
loved the story!

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You spin such a beautiful tale of the Raizada family dear. I was sucked into the joys and sorrows of their lives ⭐️

All your dreams coming true but for another person. It is a such a painful thought. Arnav is not a jealous or an insecure person but I can understand Dhruv's predicament. He didn't want to cause Arnav any hurt. His intentions were noble. His actions weren't. He ended up hurting his brother and his family beyond his imagination... The reason for the rift and walking around eggshells was serious enough. It warranted all the angst you built up 👏

What would have happened if Khushi had never fallen in Arnav's arms and thereby not been his wife? Would Dhruv and Arnav have continued to be strangers to each other? Khushi is a strong young woman. All those expectations from everyone in the family to mend the broken bridges between the brothers would have slumped my shoulders. Khushi has truly deserved all the love the Raizadas shower on her...😳

I loved the transition from Dhurv's judgement over ArHi's relationship to his wonderment about the same 😆

Oh the love and connect and understanding and all that you showed between ArHi! Main toh mar gayi several times over

Thank god you gave Payal substance. Please take a hug for that 🤗

And yes, thank you for not forgetting Dhruv like the makers did 😆and the reason for his prolonged absence was bang on 👍🏼

I can't put expression into words. I am bad with words. However, I start crying softly when I am happy or sad. I love you for writing this FF. I can't thank you enough! I actually went into a flow of thoughts. It was like watching IPKKND again after 2 years. Amazing ! Mind blowing! Loved it! I had tears streaming down overwhelmed with joy! Thanks a lot! Never leave writing. You give your readers an unexplainable happiness!

I know I was never an active commenter of your works.. But I manage to read at least one of your OS's, FF's or SS's once a week! You are magical :D I know it sounds cheesy :p But mainly this SS! I love it.. When I fell sad I read it when I am happy I read it.. it's like I am addicted to it or something lol.. Every single time I read Idon't know this warmth suffuses me and it just makes me feel so good! So thank you for such beautiful work :D *hugs*

"Looking over at her Arnavji who was fast asleep, his face half buried under her hair, she wondered for the umpteenth time why she even bothered to plait her hair before going to bed. He would undo it at some point in the night so that he could sleep with his face buried in it.
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Had me grinning from ear to ear! Yep can totally imagine him doing that, wonder if he had some childhood traits that manifest in his adult happiness?
Druv humm ok seems slightly afraid of his older brother. I really wish that the script writers had remembered Druv and not brought nk in ... that is nk ie druv would be play little brother to Akaash same everything else, and I might add he would have been suited to 18 yr old khushi a bit more, making Arnav more green eyed monster. It seems only IPK Fans remember him. Lol.

loving your writing on a par to loveofbaruns pyaar ka rang series! Both absolutly brilliant.

WOW I've read up to chapter 5. There's a paragraph is each of these stories that holds my thoughts , having to read it again whilst my brain says yes thats the way they are to each other, their feelings and love coming out. I am totally gobsmacked!

Like you I have been an avid reader of Arhi since I watched the first episode in the middle of last year on the reruns. I have watched the show on the internet 3 times since then ! And started making up stories of how the show should have ended, how the characters should have developed. I even got to writing my own story but realising it is such a huge commitment I chickened out. But what I had in mind was NOTHING compared to these OSs. You have done this story proud, bringing in the very essence of family love which was missing in the series. Honestly I wish the scrpt writers would stop with the high drama love stories filled with will they wont they? Greed envy etc, and find this type of story where the actors and the characters are allowed to develop into full blown people and not caracatures of the funny or angry beings because they lose the will to write a proper story.

I LOVE THIS STORY. MADE ME VERY HAPPY 😃

Totally amazing, I love how DM decided that Khushis plan wasnt working fast enough so made Arnav come home from work early due to a cold, him not eating anything going comatose, whilst khushi was in bed as she had slipped on some oil. And who but druv came yo the rescue! I would love to have seen this Druv, slightly shorter and darker version of his bhai, but with the mannerisms of his bhyiaa.

LOVED arnavs response tnat he got his dreams one of which was his wife. LOVED how the two of them understand each other, yet are still promising each other that they will make it work, by being completely open with each other, being there together hamesha.

Keeep writing cos your stories are fab ,

You have written this story so beautifully that words fall short. I never thought that a bhabhi devar story could be so interesting. Awesome job. 👏 This story was a treat. 😊

oh i am absolutely in love with this ss...u my friend r a fantastic writer...way to gooo

Wow. I was like wow when i read this ss.