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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
bookmarking...!! will comment later...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
im happy to see the progress in dhruv and arnav's relation😊
amazing😊
sorry cannot write a big comment😆
but plz update soon👏
Edited by bhatnagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ah...what a chapter! And the last scene was heartwarming and your writing has made me attuned to Dhruv's feelings as well...and now I hope that soon he will get a chance to talk things out with Arnav.

The part where Dhruv is shocked at how much Khushi has come to mean to him reflected the essential characteristics of Khushi...becoming close to everyone.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay, I've done it before the dead-line, senora *grins widely*


I know I'll never be tired of saying " I love ASR/Arnav " or " I love'em " and why would I?! When there is so much of love that surrounds them and engulfs even a third person, why wouldn't I?! And Dee, the credit goes to you. Time and again you've described their love in such a way that one will never get tired of loving them and might be a tiny part of us even craves for that special feeling!

The person to whom he'd not even uttered a single word all these years, to that person he is suddenly giving orders, literally barking. The anger forgotten, the spat forgotten, the fury forgotten , everything else apart from his precious wife who's now lying unconscious fades into oblivion. He himself must not have realised that he's speaking to Dhruv. It's his heart that's screaming, that's talking, and all that matters now to him is his angel in his arms, who he'd owed to protect and cherish, whom he loves more than anyone else!

I knew it! Khushi is clumsiness personified and I love the way Arnav says " woh khaali hawa mein bhi trip ho sakti hai " LOL!!

It really surprises me how can a person love someone to such an extent though they might know each fro just a matter of few years but that someone becomes the center of their universe! It always surprises me! Khushi doesn't call "Amma" or even "Babuji" all she mumbles is "Arnavji" - her husband, the holder of her heart! And Arnav true to his nature started of with "Shhh" And the way he bosses around her and orders her to not talk, its very endearing. !

Poor guy, he is reeling under the aftermath of the shocks given to him yet he tries to bottle it all and tries to soothe her..Need I say why everyone loves Arnav?! Not to forget Khushi! She knows her husband like the back of her palm. She understands it must have shaken him to the core to see her in such a situation and even more now when he's trying to cover it!

Dhruv is not used to it, not used to seeing his Bhaiyya like this! No wonder he seems to be so flabbergasted at the way the two are conversing.

" "Unbelievable woman!", as he reached down to tweak his wife's nose and plant a soft kiss on it, apparently having forgotten that they had an audience. " Okay, I love this sentence! First it used to be forehead kiss now apparently looks like humre Arnav bituwa has found a new place - the laal naak. I love it. How will they even remember the third person when they have eyes only for each other :P

Even the doctor knows that Khushi is prone to trip and fall! LOL!

Dhruv is upto many shocking revelations! But he must be proud and happy to see his brother so in loved and cared for!
I seriously need to find some synonyms for 'LOVE" I keep on using it again and again. Anyways I love the way both Arnav and Khushi pull each other's leg and even the Doctor takes a pot-shot at it!

Dhruv finally has those strings tugging his heart as he realises that he's not even recognised as a part of the family, the family he was once the centre of! Their's pain, a li'l bit of anger, might be a but of guilt too, all in one tugging his heart and make him wonder why is it so?! And when a person is a witness to such unconditional love, affection, Dhruv is naturally feeling left out, un-content but that's not all as that love has engulfed him too slowly. He might have known her for mere few hours yet he has concern for her. That's what love is all about ain't it?! That's what a family is all about and that's what a relation is all about! Few hours before, she was the one who caressed him with care, love, gentleness and warmth and who can not feel that? Obviously it's encompassed him and how can he not have concern for her?!

"Shut up, Khushi, kahan chal sakti ho, you just had a tumble..." - Aww, shut up, I love it!

"Haun, hum bole the naah, tel tha wahan..." Poor Khushi as usual is trying unsuccessfully to defend herself :D

"And whose fault was that?... "Yeh kaisi baat hui?..." Laad Governor ka gussa aur sanka devi ki sanak..

"God, I'm married to a total klutz..." I agree, I agrees babuwa!!

"Aap Hindi mein baat keejiye, Laad Governor kaheenke!...""Shut up, Khushi, I'm putting you in bed, and that's final!..." How cute is their bickering..!

"Par hum..." As usual LG cut's her off before she finishes her sentence..*.Imagining Khushi having the typical 'O' * or * might be a smack on his chest *


"Both sick and in bed" *blushes profusely* Arnavji..ahem..ahem..

The concern they have for each other is over-whelming.." At peace in each other's arms, they lay there, quiet, their tired bodies finally taking over, pulling them deep into a dreamless slumber " Sometimes simple sentences are so poignant, so in depth, and gives you that feeling of content and warmth! And this is definitely one of them!


" Standing there in quiet contemplation, he stared out into the landscaped garden, feeling at home for the first time since his return." Oh you were referring to this Dee! Oh yes looks like I've literally taken the words out of your mouth but I guess that's what the story does to you, to me..digs out everything deep in heart..Dhruv has finally felt he's reached home! His heart must have been doing somersaults when he'd realised that his Bhaiyya still loves him and for him that's home, a home that includes his dear brother!


I've always wanted to see Khushi and Arnav snuggled up in bed but they always lay facing atleast a few inches apart! Can't expect more from television but my mind can conjure up and imagine right? No censorship! Yahoo!! I always love this scene where she serenely listens to the rhythmic beats of his heart! And even more loving is the way his eyes flutters open and seeks hers with love and warmth..*No points for guessing I'm going to say it again* I love'em!! Period.

Arnav's anger is back but don't worry Khushi Jee, time will take it's course and what shall happen shall happen even if you trip and your plan fails.

When Dhruv said, he knows his brother like no one else, it's true. Within a fraction of second he's able to recollect the ailment his brother has! I feel so sorry for them.I do really hope they sort out the differences soon and are back together..It's saddening to see them so close and attached yet so apart!!

How attuned Arnav and Khushi are! He knows without batting an eye-lid, Khushi will be able to recognise that he's had some trouble! They are definitely the couple! And possessiveness much, Mr ASR?? "Pati hoon uska" Waah Waah!!


How innocent Khushi is and how pure is her heart! She glee's like a child when he gets his toffee hearing that her husband himself had spoken to his brother and sent him up to fetch her..I love this streak of her's.

Poor Dhruv! His heart is over-flowing with happiness! Poor one, he has missed his brother a lot..and to have being slowly accepted back is making him be on cloud nine..!


The R family is definitely in for a shock! I would love to see how things progress from here..Will Arnav deny everything or will a part in his heart start accepting the fact that he wants his brother back! I'm looking forward to it as eager as ever :))


P.S This is the first longest I've written in this forum and second in IF! I really hope I made sense in this huge post 😆













Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow!!! so much changed in such a small time!!
lol i m glad as well that these two small accidents took place...
now waiting for everyhting to settle back down! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

haye!!! I am falling in love more and more with this story day by day

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A big Fat Virtual Hug Coming your way Appurs for this wonderful awesome update. 🤗
An update where Khushi became unconscious, Arnav's sugar level dropped miserably and I loved it... Ohh dear I sound a bit of Sadist😛. But I loved the banter between Arnav & Khushi and the later their sweet conversation in their bedroom.
The fatherly Doctor Khurana was a nice addition and how telling his reaction was about NK.
The way you have articulated the scene between Arnav & Dhruv was brilliant. I especially liked the below line
" After making a token effort to push his brother away, which failed owing to his weakened state, Arnav sat silently in his embrace, the fire in his heart slowly getting quenched, the ice coursing in his veins beginning to thaw. "
Beautifully written.
As for Khushi turning into a Football Fanatic thanks to Arnav... I can so relate to it... I really like game myself and all thanks to my football fanatic Husband 😆.
The last scene was perfect... I could almost visualize Khushi sitting on the couch, feet tucked under her, secure under a draped arm of ASR around her shoulder, completely atuned to the Game and His hearbeats.
Dhruv watching happily, his Bhaiya and Bhabi in their cacoon of love and care.. ... Perfect Indeed. 👏
And, Thank You so much for asking ...that was really sweet. I am feeling a bit better. And this update just helped spreading the much needed warmth within 😊.
- Khushi.
Edited by jakhushi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dat was lovely :)
glad sum mu got solved and khushis plan dint go in vain
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful !!! loved it... 😊

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