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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

awesome
i dont have words to express
every single thing dipcted in this chapter was awesome
the fact tht arnav trained her speaks of how much strong n supportive their bond is.
the way in which u described dhrv feelings is awesome.

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

loved dhrus and khushis convo.

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Arshi_fanad

@Arshi_fanad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#353

Oh yeah! The exact one I had been waiting for.

I'd never expected the things Dhruv'd held onto his heart. Oh! U wrote beyond my highest expectations. Thnk u. Thnk u for that.

I'm dumbstruck and I know it will not sink in until I read the whole update over and over again!! Now, off to read-and let-it-sink-in.

Thnk u

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

Your updates are always a delight , so no surprises there . Loved it my dear.

I love your Arnav and Khushi , they are just so much in love and everything that they do or say reflects this feeling and complete understanding that each has of the other. Glad that Dhruv could find comfort in Khushi ...

Thnx for the pm.

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

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Posted: 12 years ago

#355

That was a such a touching update! Absolutely loved it!! And thanks for telling about NK. Glad he hasn't disappeared into thin air! I must compliment you on the effort you must have put into writing this! Truly marvellous. I was awestruck with your Arnav and the way he's portrayed.

P.S.- I hope your sinus is better. If not get well soon. :)

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samba12

@samba12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Lovely update...yet again.

Enjoyed the sensitivity with which you portray Dhruv's dilemma.

The two brothers are so much alike - no wonder it is such a strong confrontation.

And it takes a brave person to get in the middle and try to sort it out - Khushi is probably the only one with the guts and the strength to do this.

No doubt it is the love that drives her to do this - love for her Arnavji and for his brother. But it takes more than just love. And Khushi has that ability to understand the feelings of others - probably the only other person in that madhouse who has something of this ability would be Naniji.

Looking forward to the encounter between the brothers - you've built up the suspense beautifully.

Again thanks for these vignettes that allow us to explore with you the nuances in the relationships of these fascinating characters.

Abrazos,

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

With each update, I am more and more amazed at your story-telling powers. the story is so believable , yet so gripping. the conflict was very beautifully portrayed. Something like that can so easily happen to anyone. and the readers end up totally understanding each person's point of view. and we are left sympathizing with both the brothers. You really are a very good story teller.
and all the characters, all the dialogues are so much like what they were in the show, that it truly feels like a continuation.

Glad you are feeling better now. Stay in good health and keep writing such beautiful stories. Eagerly waiting for Monday!