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NewArshifan

@NewArshifan

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Amazing update!! Agian just perfect..And I hope there is one more last update left...

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Claire0206

@Claire0206

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

This was an amazing update. And I like this Dhruv.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

Oh god i just loved the update 😊 simply superb... the convo between Khushi and Druv was amazing...

do update the nxt part soon

thanks for the PM 😃

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namrata22796

@namrata22796

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just loved the brotherly bond between Arnav & Dhruv...loved it when Arnav felt that he was being protected by his wife...and loved that part where Dhruv tells that he wanted to live his Bhaiyya's dreams!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

Fabulous update!!!👏

LOVE the way u write..im addiccted to this whole series :)

Plz cont soon.

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Arooma

@Bubbles76

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

WOW ..!!! this update is just amazing in describing both Arnav and Dhruv part of the story ... and how khushi manage to bring out the confession from dhruv is just amazaing ... and u write the scene so well that i too can imagine the pain ... and i will be waiting for the next part as well ..

by the way i loved ur VIGNETTES series and i have read all the OSs for like 4 to 6 times in the past week ... and while reading many ideas were coming to my mind so i thought i shud tell you and see wat u think abt them .. may be you can use them is ur furture OSs of this series ... as there are many things which i also wanted to see in the show but alas CV didnt do it ... so i am mentioning them ... i wud appreciate if u can show them in ur series ...i will be super happy ... but ofcourse u know better how to make the story out of them ... so here it goes ...

1 . Nk and Khushi bonding ... their best friendhsip ,, and Arnav being jealous of NK first , now appreciate their friendship.

2. Arnav possessivness towards Khushi, like in show we never get to see Arnav possessivness towards khushi and how he is over protected for her ..

3. As Arnav being the Business tycoon , every one is afraid of him and he can do anything in the professional world like winning a deal or two difficult deals in industrial world.

4. Arnav never get to introduce his wife with the public as in the show while having pheras there were only family no outsider ... so u can show like Arnav having another fashion show and he introduce khushi to the world as his wife in a very special n romantic way ...

5. As khushi always do crazy stuff with arnav and try different things to woo arnav when he is angry ... so this time due to arnav's anger khushi gets hurt and this time arnav do something in khushi's style to make up to her ... (obviosuly u r the expert to make the story or situation)

6. you can show the scene where arnav gets on knees and hold his both ears and say sorry to her, shocking everyone that being ASR he never say sorry and now in front of family he is saying sorry like this or u can show by holing her dupatta like he did in the show.

7. khushi shouting at arnav ... arnav is angry os something and he shouts on khushi and khushi also shouts back , like the way in the show wen she was giving arnav her resignation she shouted at him ... this time too making arnav realize that he is worng in being angry and then seeing khushi angry like this arnav calms down.

thats for now ... there were many ideas as well but i just want to know first wat u think of them ,,,, as i got no writing skill thats why i cant put them in words :( so just suggesting them to you :)

btw i LOVE wat are showing that dhruv is getting shocked seeing change in arnav caz of khushi .. that the main and one only i was dying to see in the show like how every one is getting surprise and shocked seeing change in arnav towards khushi and khushi being the only one can handle Arnav ...

hoping to get a reponse from you ... tc 😊