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Posted: 12 years ago
Aparna,
That was awesome.Now waiting for ASR and Dhruv to make up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
AMAZING! Just amazing! I'm still sniffling. This chapter was quite something. Her answer to his call, "we are coming to you" - well that says it all.
Kushi's intelligent approach to the problem between the brothers. Dhruv not being able to help but fall in love with her, just like the rest of Arnav's family. (How can they but help it? She's a real gem. The rarest kind. Her husband recognizes this despite his anger. Deep down he probably wants to mend the rift, so selfish as it may be, he will probably let her do what she wants. Not that he would be able to stop her!!!) Dhruv's confession to his bhabhi. And the clincher, her response to him. Is it any wonder they are all in love with her? Her purity radiates through the darkness and brings light, how can they not be addicted? I am dying to know what happens now. How is Kushi going to bring these two together? Now that both the tornadoes are putty in her small, soft, beautiful hands!!!!!! Little do they know the hurricane she is!!! Cannot, just cannot wait for the next part. By far, the best vignette! Thanks for the PM. 😃
Edited by kbtr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Emotional update. It was nice. Hope all comes to normal soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
***


This one has me literally in tears :'( What a myriad of emotions!


Finally Dhruv realizes that his bhabhi's silence is more unnerving than her words!


Arnav is a man with a golden heart. Truly! In a society where people brag about themselves even if the give one ounce of water to the other, he never does that. He has the ASR-ish attitude but he never brags about himself! His concern and care for those children, a facet of ASR that most have not seen, but for those who know him, the respect and love for him will grow in manifolds!


Khushi is a enigma. Her innocence, her pure heart is what that draws everyone to her like a moth to a flame! And the latest member of the Raizada clan has realized it. Her pure, unadulterated love and her ability to be one among them has the children drawn to her.


Don't I always say this- Arnav and Khushi though have different attitudes and outlooks, but their inner feelings are always the same! It's like a common goal but they have different ways to reach it. A perfectly imperfect , a linearly star-crossed couple! They are indeed lucky to have each other.


He's training Khushi so that his busy schedule does not affect those children. I'm in awe of him..Behind the mask of ASR, he's a caring brother, a doting son/grandson, a loving husband and most of all he's like a father figure to all those children out there, taking care of them and trying to bring light in to their lives! When a person has so much good in him , all his flaws are outweighed! Mr Arnav Singh Raizada, I sincerely wish there were more people like you in our society who though earn in millions have a heart of compassion and humanity! I rally do wish!


" I just hope she has the sense to leave early. Itni jaldi andhera ho jaati hain ab... " He's so protective of her..though his words seem like a taunt, it's laced with concern!


The bulb finally glows as ASR realises the reason behind his wife's demure nature in the morning!

" "It's okay, Di...I'll talk to you later. Don't worry, main aapke Khushiji ko daantoonga nahin. By the way, what did she do to all of you? It's as if I'm the son-in-law and she's the daughter of the house. Sabko bus usski hi fikar hain!"
Relieved at his return from the land of fire, she grinned, "Aur hum sab jaante hain ki iss baat se sabse zyada khushi tumhe hain. Hain naah?"" This is epic! I love this one..


His wolfish smile might be a terror to his competitors but for the ladies swooning over him *blushes*, it's a true delight!


"It felt nice, to be the one who was being protected. " This one sentence is so hear-warming! That pride in his voice when he says it! For a change, she is the protector who can go to any length to protect her loved ones. It's a warm, fuzzy feeling when you realise that you dont have to be always the shoulder that gives support but you have a shoulder to lean upon! Arnav and Khushi are equally lucky to have the other as their humsafar!


The similarities between her husband and his brother is not lost for Khushi. She's understood their nature, that for them silence is provocative of all.

Like I said, Khushi's innocent heart has an uncanny ability to not hold grudges and forgive everyone. If she could forgive Shyam, what is Dhruv infront of him. His sincere, guilt laden words just melted the raging anger of hers!

When two ASR's collide, it's definitely consuming and we know how much damage it has caused. Ego clashing, anger clashing, raging tempos of each of them, it must have been the worst situation and sadly they were the very two people who were the most affected by it's aftermath!


And with her question, she finally hits the nail! The question he would have avoided at all costs, was straight-away asked with no beating around the bush!! Trust Khushi to be so direct!

The more I get to know about Arnav, the more is the respect for him! He sacrifices his dreams, his aspirations because his loved ones, his family were his priority and his dreams were nothing in front of them 😭
Had I had any doubt regarding Dhruv, everything seems to have vanished now. He truly is the brother of Arnav! Both love their family so much and both love each other a lot. His honest confession, his guilt that he got a life that should have been rightfully his Bhaiyya's and even more guilt upon the fact that all that was possible only because his brother had his very own dreams sacrificed?! 😭

Neither of them are not fault yet all they feel now is pain, the last words still ringing and echoing in their minds! These brothers have everything in extreme - be it love or anger! It can be rightly said that one can't sympathize just any one of them coz they are brothers and they are one! They have equal love and equal sorrow! If Arnav is in pain, so is Dhruv and if Dhruv is in pain, so is Arnav! I hope they sort out their differences soon! It's heart-wrenching to see the brothers in so much agony!


Dhruv break's down finally..that pent up feelings come out in the form of gushing tears and his very own Bhabhi gives him support and solace...so tender, so heart-whelming..


""Aa rahe hain, Arnavji...bus thodi der aur intezaar keejiye. Hum aap hi ke paas toh aa rahe hain..." " This simple sentence says so much! Finally the brother is returning home and now I await the re-union of the brothers!!


Dee, credit goes to you, for envisioning these characters and potraying them in such a way that one can't help but fall in love with all of them! Not one, not two but every single one!

This one's for you Dee - 🤗













Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was an awesome update. I never had enjoyed an Arnav less chapter this much. In this chapter there were no Arshi scenes but the Kushi Dhruv scene and the dialogues you used in this SS is superb.

Update next chapter soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update yaar...very sensitive..n very lovingly...the prateeksha scenes were potrayed...n Khushi the teacher was awesome..awww the fact that she was trained Arnav ❤️ ! And all of that leading to Dhruv's breakdown!! Wow so ASR wanted to be botanist!! Dhruv wanted to be a botanist..too because of his brother's love for plants!! Hope Khushi clears the MU between the brothers!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Simply amazing !! I literally teared up reading this. How complex can love get !!
Thanks for the beautiful update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i jus loved it, the way u have written it totally brought that scene in front of me.
Khushi spending time in prateeksha esp with the kids n how she handled the kid made my eyes wet. Even though deep down we know that they are all not real person, my love for Arnav, khushi n Dhruv increased today after reading this part.

Wish i could also help some people in life, in some way like these do via prateeksha, some day i will..

Wonderful update, 👏👏. Thanks for the PM and also for accepting me as ur buddy😊. Hope ur getting better *Hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
A very well reasonable explanation of Dhruv's opting out of course.
You did full justice to the story!
waiting for Khushi's dhamaakedaar plan to unite the brothers!
Hats off to you for a beautiful story!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
completely addicted to your story ,eagerly awaiting your update

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