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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so loving this story!!!
Love uour writing style...read all the prev OSs...they are all amazing!!!

Looking forward to more😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update! Love the way you have written non verbal understanding between Arshi! I love these Raizadas who are there for each other all the time! Loved it on the whole!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res for part 2


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Dhruv resembles Akash but by nature he follows his Bhaiyya. Interesting. And more over he seems like the 'laadla' of the entire Raizada family.

Sisters and mothers I say, they have this weird habit of checking out the weight and looks of the home-returned kid/family member. It's their form of love and concern but it's sort of amusing! Anjali checking out if Dhruv is damaged or under-nourished, she is a perfect sister to the T..

Her love for her brother shines through her words. The slight anger, the pain of being away from him and yet all she can do is just him and let her heart out. I dont know who is luckier, the three brothers for having such a sister, or the sister for having such loving three brothers?!

Akash is a responsible and dutiful husband! Though he doesn't indulge in the exact details, atleast he tells the truth and has not kept her in dark.

Both Payal and Khushi are such understanding wives. They knew when to press the matter upon and when not to cross the boundaries!

*sighs* The love of a mother! Manorama has definitely missed her son a lot!

Before I move on, I just remembered that in the show she was supposed to have a past, just like Khushi. She was not from an affluent family and Nani used to always remind her about it when ever she used to jibe at Khushi. But the writers never closed that loop :/
I always wonder why she used to behave in such bizzare manner. I mean there must be some reason for her to be like that - snobby, money-minded and all. Though by heart she was a good woman, they always made her inclined to money, power, and fame. But there must be a reason behind it, something that could make her to mask out her true self and be like what she is. If you could explain that nature of hers, I would really love it.

Wonder why the family is so forgiving but Akash and Arnav are not! 'You put us though so much trouble' Does it include only Akash and Arnav or the whole family? If it's the latter why are they not angry at him and just the two brothers are??

And finally we get to see the other side of Akash! The calm and serene one has lost his temper today!

Payal definitely understands her husband, definitely better and I'm glad that Dhruv has realised so. That slight assurance from her is so poignant.

And given to his nature, he forgives his younger brother. After all you cant stay too angry at your loved ones for a long time, isn't it?? And that when that loved one happens to be your baby brother that too all apologising and remorseful!


A certain Mr Arnav can't do without his wife even for a second. All he does is 'Khushi', 'Khushi' and more 'Khushi' LOL!!

And finally Dhruv gets to see his Bhaiyya and the latter gets see his loving brother!

What a myriad of emotions in Arnav! Shock to anger to anguish, it must have been a lot difficult for both of them!

To a character that never even appeared in the show, I love the way how you've characterised him and given him his own identity! It's like this is how it was always supposed to be, I hope you're getting what I mean!

Bring it on Dee :) We're loving the story and we're loving the Brother-Bond!!





Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arnav does love him a lot, a lot!!

While both Akash and Dhruv loved, looked up to and respected their elder brother, Akash was more of a silent absorber, but Dhruv seems to be the one to have literally glued to him! The love of both the brothers cannot be compared, but both their have their own set of identities and their own way of loving their Bhai or Bhaiyya!!

Memories and memories!!

Arnav's and Dhruv's bonding is so heart-warming..I love these brothers..I love their bonding!!

Pata nahi kiski nazar lagi inn bhaiiyon par ki inka rishta iss tarah mod liya hai :(

Both Akash, Di and the entire family knows that if there's one person who could get through the facade of Arnav, it's Khushi and only Khushi. The Di - the one who's almost a mother to him, Nani - his eternal support, Mami and Mama - his gaurding angels, the ones who welcomed him with open arms, Akash- his loving brother who's by his side at all times and at all costs, Dhruv- his other younger brother holding an equal place in his heart, whom he loves a lot and above all, all of them love him a lot!! A lot!!
Khushi is similar to them yet different! She's been the one to understand him totally and hte only one to have finally crossed all the barriers he'd built around himself!! It's not like who's more important but it's the priority and importance of each them to Arnav. Khushi has own, distinct space in his heart. Like the say, you can't just replace the other but you can only make a place for yourself in the other's heart!! And Dhruv's surprise just proves that not even his Di could have managed that which Khushi can!!


Even in his roaring temper, he heard out her call and waited for her. Love does truly change a person, doesn't it?? The Arnav Singh Raizada who can never think straight in his anger waited for his wife and walked away holding her hand. And the praise goes to Mrs ASR herself!!

She could see his anguish, she could understand his hurt and anger, she could sense his need to vent out, to get comforted, and she gives him everything silently, asking nothing in return, nothing to cross her boundaries or hurt him!! There was this previous OS in which Arnav gives comfort and solace to Khushi without her even having to voice it out and now here we have her giving him the same comfort and solace without him even having to voice it out. They have so much of understanding in between them, so much of love..This gives me a doubt..Do couples like them really exist or it's just another wishful thinking of ours?? *sighs*

She opts the mid-way..She's understanding enough to encroach as well as stay within the limits and give space to him!!


Khushi knows how much it must have Manorama as a mother to be away from her child and to see the resent and anger between the two brothers and in her own ways tries to comfort her! She is a loving soul indeed! A loving wife, a loving Bhabhi, a caring DIL!! She makes excuse in such a way that she defends her husband as well as makes sure that others are not hurt!


And here we having Arnav call out 'Khushi' again..He can't just do without her, can he?!!


Things have changed a lot, Dhruv beta!! Front front see, bhat bhat happens!!


"My Laad Governor"- Haaye!! Possessiveness much!!

Still reeling in anger, as usual his other words are so glazed yet Khushi knows how to tackle it. He understands her need to comfort him, to be with him. "That be with me, always" shows how much he needs her, how much he needs her care, love, warmth and support.

Even though the flash of pain was for a mere second, Khushi noticed it. And a true brother he is, Dhruv could sense his Bhaiyya's gaze on him!!

"only to be stunned by his Bhaiyya turning at the door to come striding back and give her a tight hug, murmuring something that had her smile at him tremulously. One last lingering kiss on the forehead. Arnav walked out, not sparing even a glance at the rest of the family.

As for Khushi, she was still trembling from her husband's hoarse whisper, "Thank you, Khushi...at times, life reminds me how I would have been, how I would have lived, if I hadn't had you with me. I love you..." - I loved loved this!! I love this a lot!! Just can't explain in words the beauty these sentences potray!! You are the best Dee, the best!! It couldn't have been put in a better way!!



DSR is definitely a lot enticing!! I'm in love with his character already! Three or more parts to it, we'll always be eager to read it :)



P.S I hope the comments are loong? ;)







Edited by -Siaa- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey girl- Lovely update as usual... Dhruv is awed by the change in Arnav isnt it? I like how you have kept the secret of the fallout lingering in our minds still but the impatience is not felt- as the way the characters interactions are handled - is too good!
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Posted: 12 years ago
U know what u have presented the mannerisms of Arnav aptly. The way Arnav may react to such a situation is written convincingly.
Love the way Kushi handled the situation.. Now Dhruv will get a chance to know his elder Bhabi..

Waiting for next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aweesome update!!! U know i hv always wanted a character to observe the changes in ASR after khushi entered his life...n dhruv is just the perfect guy to show us that!!! So DSR is surprised to see his bhaiyyas subdued anger!!! N his very public display of affection!!! Wonder what he thinks of his firecracker of a bhabhi dealing with him kkgsr style!!! I want to see khushi dominating asr once...infront of dhruv...n wud love to see his reaction...n plsss this is a request ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous update she will make him run with her antics at the same time she will be mature when its needed
loved the update a lot
waiting eagerly to know wat happened between the two
pls continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it as usual.
Dhruv might be wondering what is Khushi actually who has brought such change in his bhaiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! Loving this vignette series!!!

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