IPKKND SS: Ruled with love Ch2+3 p5 CONCLUDE

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

i just read it all today.
awesome.
you have described him as so sweet inside yet so typically like ASR superficially, gr8 work.

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

amazing story...

wow arnav loved her frm d beginning...she didn't even read d letter... crazy girl...

loved d ss...

thnx fr d link...😊

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

OMG...I am crying away as I read this. You so understand and explain ASR...and Arnav both and in this story, you have shown him with such sensitivity that I am literally blown away.

Simply beautiful.

Loved the first chapter the most where an enraged ASR deals with the domestic brouhaha between Khushi and Lavanya. I am an ASR groupie and that was just fabulous ...the anger, the rage, the impatience and the tone of the voice jumping at me thru the written words as he stalked over to the two women...and commanded them and then the silky, wrath laden duplicitous manner in which he threatened Khushi...classic.

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tanu3579

@tanu3579

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

wow... just wow.. !!! read khushi being prejudiced n wrong while arnav being all accomodating n understanding fr the first time i guess.. :) :)

simply amazing :)

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Mindblowing SS
Must say u r too good in expressing emotions

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

THAT WAS AMAZING

IT GAVE A BEAUTIFUL MESSAGE WHICH SAYS" NEVER JUDGE THE BOOK BY ITS COVER "

KHUSHI JUDGED ARNAV BY HIS WAY OF COVERING HIMSELF... WHICH HE SHOWED TO THE WORLD ...BUT HOW WRONG SHE WAS ...HE WAS NOT LIKE SUCH NOT AT ALL ...

WELL DONE 👏

THANKS ...FOR WONDERFUL UPDATES ...😃

I'M LOVING ALL OF YOUR STORIES AS OF NOW ...😆

GETTING DOWN TO READ THE NEXT FABULOUS PIECE OF YOURS ...😉

Edited by bs1224 - 12 years ago

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coolbakes_Jalad

@Lifeistooshort

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

ahh i just read this work and it was beautiful! and arnav was so in charecter!! loved it!1 love your style of writing.. thanks for the pm! will read the other works soon too:-)

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Wow, what an awesome story! 👏 I don't know how I've missed this story of yours! I wish it was a tad longer. I really love the storyline and it's very well written. I love your portrayal of ASR. I couldn't help but feel for this man who went into this marriage with so much love. Khushi broke his heart but he was never cruel or vindictive to her. His patience really paid off. How wrong was Khushi to misjudge him thinking he is incapable of love. Thank you for such a wonderful story!!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Thanks Katelyn glad you liked it, its one of my own favs, i've had a few requests for this to be turned into an SS/FF and i'm considering it.

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Katelyn

@Katelyn

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

^ jadrutid, I'm so thrilled that you are reconsidering! Even an SS would be great. Maybe do a bit of flashbacks to explain how ASR and Khushi fell in love with each other. I would love to read more of ASR' pov as well as Khushi's. Show their life before marriage like their working relationship in the office and also when Khushi was working at RM. What happened that made Khushi dislike ASR? Ok, I'm getting too excited! 😆

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