IPKKND SS: Ruled with love Ch2+3 p5 CONCLUDE - Page 11

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Glad you liked that element - my attempt being for the reader to initially judge ASR's character because i feel that is probably a good dipiction of real life. - judging a book by its cover and all that.

I'm a big beliver of the human tendency to hide, gaurd the most important of feelings wether that is a weakness or strenght i guess that depends on the person and the situation. From what i have come across in life i think the fact that one struggles to express themself in a way they would ideally want to is quite intriguing and that is explored through ASR's character here.

I've had many a requests to turn this into an SS or full ff even but i part of me i think wants it to remain like this ..and a part of me well..torn between the two.

Thanks again..comments are always lovely to read and powers a writers enthusiasum to keep on writing.

Originally posted by: Srilathalolla

I agree with you I know people who hide their feelings and people come to conclusions and most of the time they are very much wrong .

I dont want it to be a SS or a FF but if you ask me I would say just one more chapter where Khushi and Arnav open to each other would have been really wonderful to read. Till now we have read only about Khushi's POV so as a reader I want to read about Arnav's POV too then it would have been a closure to this story and again I would say it is your baby and I think you are the better judge.

Originally posted by: jagrutid

i don't know what i want, all i know is that this one is very close to my heart and i'm afraid of ruining it by adding to it.

Originally posted by: rkapoor1382

Tht was a nice story

Originally posted by: Chanyaforever

Waow! Dear Jagruti, this one is really mindblowing! Took my breath away.. you describe the characters so beautifully. I have no words for that! You show their love in a pure way, a love which is hidden behind misunderstanding each other. Arnav loved Khushi but he still let her be to find her way to love him! And this letter.. his confession for her before their marriage! All her concerns vanished after reading his letter.. I really feel like I am watching the show! Really great work! Thank you. Now it will be hard for me to tell you which of your stories might be the best for me..

Originally posted by: ILoveFF

wow... such a beautiful one... i dont have words

Originally posted by: Smrikta992

Lovd it..
Amazd hw beautiful it is..