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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update helu...
Lvld to see arjun lv n concern toward choti...!!
lit bit emostionalll part..!!
like to read how rosh concole arjun...!!
grate update dr
conti soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved arjuns concern for choti
the way roshni was consoling arjun was amazing
arjun working with the etf great
hope arjun nd the etf finds choti soon
precap sounds scary
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Good update!

Worried for Choti! 😕
ArNi were supportive as always! 😊

Update soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
hope they find them soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
Nice to see the team back in action!
and Arjun working with ETF to find Choti..
i hope all is well!

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey everybody!!
our next part!!

CHAPTER 9:

zindagi me galti sabse hoti hai..
wo insan hi kya jo galti na kare..

koi galti karta hai...

aur koi galtiyon se kuch seekhkar

unhe dubara na dohrane ka pran leta hai..

ETF office:

Shree: sir wo tattoo ke bare mien patha chala hai. wo Lakhan naam ke ek local gunda ke haath ke nishaani hai. aur iss Lakhan ke bare me patha lagane keliya meine Chotu ko bheja hai.

Sam: good. Par Arjun kya tumhe lagtha hai ke Choti aur Sanju ek hi jagah pe hai. wo dono, do alag alag jagah pe bhi hosakthe hai na?

Arj: ho sakthe hai. par ab hamare paas aur koi options bhi tho nahi. Lekin mere samaj me ye nahi aaraha hai ke Sanju ke koi ransom call kyu nahi aya hai?

Ri: kahi wo koi racket me tho nahi fassi??

Arj: patha nahi. Riya patha lagao ke Mr. Khana ke koi dushman hai ke nahi.

Ri: patha lagaya hai Sir. Unke do business rivals hai, Mr. Khurana aur Mr. Singh. Wo theen ek hi bade contract ke piche hai.

Sam: Shree, in do logonke phones tap karo. Shayad koi clue mile.

Chotu: (coming in) sir, Lakhan ne kuch do din pehle hi kisiko kidnap karne ka paisa liya hai. aur zyada kuch nahi mile. Lekin informers ko alert kiya hai ke unka adda ke patha lagaye.

Shree: sir phones tap horaha hai.

Sam and Arjun didn't have an option other than waiting. Sam noticed him to be worried. "Arjun come with me" he walks out wit Arjun, while others watch.

Shr: kaafi stressed hai dono. Shayad ye Choti bohot special hogi.

Ri: ha, gaadi mien Sir apne Wife se baath karthe hue suna hai. waha shayad unke parents ko patha nahi hi.

Ch: hope everything gets well soon.

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Sam: (in his cabin) don't worry Arjun kuch nahi hoga usse.

Arj: patha nahi, agar wo kissi racket me fasi hai tho...??

Sam: don't think like that, aur waise bhi...(Ri comes in: "Mr. Singh ke phone me call araha hai")

All rush in.

Man: kya saab? Kaam hua hai ke nahi?

Singh: tumse kisne kaha phone karne ko?

Man: saab ithne samay hua hai!! kya hum koi paise demand karu??

Si: kya paise? Wo tho hum tumhe derahe hai na? ek baar wo contract mere haath lagne do. Uske baad jithna paisa chaho, wo tum uss Khana mang sakthe ho. Thab thak usse aise problem me hi rehna do, ke contract pe dhyan na aye.

Man: aur wo dusri ladki ka kya??

All are listening now seriously.

Si: miene kab kaha tha usse uthane keliye? Wo tumhare problem hai!!

Si: acha!! wo ladki ne hame uss bachi ko dundthe hue dekhliya tha. Tho hamare paas options bhi nahi the. Isislye uthaliya. Ab na uska ghar ke bare mein patha hai. bas dono ko sulakar rakha hai.

Arjun was clenching onto his pen. Sam kept a hand on his shoulder to control him.

Si: jaise maine kaha wo tumhare problem hai, tum hi dekhlo. Ab rakh.

Line goes off.

Sam: Shree, location trace hua?

Sh: yes sir, ek phonebooth se hai.

He gives the address. Chotu verifies it with his men. Lakhan's adda is 30 minute away from this booth. All go in to find the girls.

Lakhan's adda:

The team along with Arjun reach the place. It was not so big building. Few minutes back Anji was awake. She felt dizzy due to Chloroform that was given to her.she saw Sanju sleeping next to her. The room was locked from outside and she was scared. She tried to call Sanju but she didn't get up.

The team reached the place and surrounded the region. They were about to get in when one of the men noticed them and started the firing. They were firing back too. The team got inside the building. There was firing from here and there.

Lakhan had noticed the team getting in and now they knew they didn't have much choise. One of the men grabbed Sanju and Lakhan had Choti at the gun point. They moved to the firing zone.

Lak: hey... stop it. warna...

Th team was shocked. Sanju was unconscious and one man's shoulder and Choti was at the gun point.

"bhai..." she whispered looking at Arjun. Lakhan noticed it.

Lak: are wah... bhai bhi yahi hai?? great. Hey gun chod do... warna ye tho gayi.

The team had to drop the guns, but Chotu and a team of men where moving in from behind. the sudden firing distracted the men and the team used it. they came forward. In some action Sanju was saved from the men, but Lakhan started to move away with Choti. Arjun ran behind them. In the mid way, some men attacked him. There were hands on fight and casualities were on both side.

Arjun was having a hard time to keep up to them. they were out numbering him.Sam and team were not in a position to come forward. Suddenly someone stab him from behind and he falls losing his strength.

But somewhere ahead he hears Choti's voice which makes him getting forward for her. At a moment, Lakhan and Arjun is standing face to face and pointing guns at each other. Arjun had lost a lot of blood and was weak.

Arj: chod do usse Lakhan. Himmat hai tho samne aa...

La: kya karu saab?? Yaha se nikalne keliya mujhe iski zaroorath hai. aur mien isse nahi chod saktha.

Arj: chod warna...

La: warna kya?? Goli mien bhi chala saktha hu officer!! Try karke tho dekh...

Arjun and Lakhan points gun at each other. Somewhere ahead, Sam and team hear a loud gun shot. They let men handle the situation and go ahead.

They were shocked to see both Lakhan and Arjun falling back. Both were shot at the chest... Lakhan was dead... they were awaken by a heart breaking cry of Choti "BHAI..."

She ran towards her brother.

zindagi ek khuli kitab hai..
jiske do panne
bhagwan ne pehle hi likh diye hai..
ek zindagi...
dusra maut...
baki ki kahani apke khud ki zubani


PRECAP:

Roshni meets Riya...


CHAPTER 10: PAGE 35

Edited by kunchu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
unres

yippieee...me first!!!
wow...loved the update!!
Finally, the team tracked down the culprit!!!
Oh my god...Arjun is shot...😭
me feeling very bad!
Hope to see him well soon!
Finally choti and Sanju are safe...!!!😃

So Roshni meets Riya...wow...
interesting...
waiting for the next part...!!!😆

Edited by nikki08 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved arjuns concern for choti
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Posted: 12 years ago

Cool Part...finally Choti nd Sanju r safe but Arjun... Hope he vl be fine soon... verses were too gud... update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Good Update!

When Arjun suspected that it may be a human trafficking racket...1st episode ki yaad aa gayi! 😊

But no, it was all about business rivalry...bechari bewajah phass gayi! 😛

Arjun will be okay...thats obv! : P

Interesting precap...what do you have in mind huh? 😕

Update soon!!

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