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Its better but it can b best if it little bigger...i will love read big updates...plz do pm me next

lovely update

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv

lovely update dear..please give little bigger updates and one think which will help you add some decription like when swayam reached to find sharon when vicky told her that she said swayam will come to pick me upp.. u gave a direct scene.. which is always confusing tu jab ek scene se dosrai scene pe jao tu atleast write like.. "swayam was shocked what vickay said and he instantly left his home to find sharon" or something like this.. but still it was a nice update! 😃

sorry for my mistake tanya di next time i will follow your advice

oh dear it's such a lovely ff and i missed reading it kahan chupa tha ye yaar.sharon is so cute & naughty in ur ff.awesome ff and each update is superb fantastic

res dd Done

nice update
swayam care for sharon
nd there friend think they r good couple
mu start
love d update

wonderful update as always.so everybody thinks that swayam & sharon are couple except both of them.may be they will realize it very soon.hey you are the same writer who is writing rival hai na so plz update that too.thanks 4 pm