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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Hey good update! but think you shouldn't make kriya a bone between swaron. I think many other readers will not like it including me. Your writing style is good but please use more of indirect speech cuz most of it is in direct speech.

Thanks for the PM.

Do update soon.

Ps thanks for updating rivals.

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Riya

@rockstarriya_26

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Heyy I read all d updates..they were gr8. Pls continue..n pm me

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tejal kor

@tejukor

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Hey dear...I read ur update in one go n they were awesome n sorry I couldn't able to comment on ur update earlier...bcoz I was not active.toh big sorry for that. N update asap plz...n pm me

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windrain

@windrain

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

thnks for comments guys. I will update next chapter on 25 January

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

great ff...pls continue soon!!
Sharon is really strange...nd Kriya loves Swayam? No pls bring Rey na!! usko sad sad mat rakho...
Nd Swayam is so sweet!

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Gunpreet

@gunnu1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

great ff...pls continue soon!!
Sharon is really strange...nd Kriya loves Swayam? No pls bring Rey na!! usko sad sad mat rakho...
Nd Swayam is so sweet! pls pm me too!!

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Sunil

@Suni1986

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

hey plz update soon
waiting for new update

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Update please 😔

i hope everything fine & you are good.

i hope you are not in any problem.

Take care

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

@windrain: Nyc story!!!!😊

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#70

You updated thank u😃

Awesome update

Sharon is so cute & bubbly i completely loved her character in this FF . she was so much energetic to help Vicky in planting but unfortunately did everything wrong😆

So Swayam finally got some brain & realize that Kria doesn't have the same feeling for him as he has for her.

Sharon was working hard to learn riding or say trying hard to impress Swayam as Sharon confess her feeling let's see how long Swayam will take to realize his feeling for Sharon The Challenge is on😆

Please Update soon

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