Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#851

part 12
awesome part dear...
my God the silent , shy Paayal and Aakash...
oh ho Khushi and Arnav have witnessed this...
cont soon dear...

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#852

awesome,fantastic & gripping

p-10----p-12 were wow !!!

pls update soon !!!

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#853

lol!!! u brought THE KOKILA into this picture???😆
hehe and ahem's " ji Mom" are prolly the only words that leave his mouth!
and khushi with Jigar?? the porr guy would hae aheart attack if he married our pathaka lol!
and payal's Harry Potter ji is a day dreamer lol!
loved the update !!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#854

Arnav n Khushi bth are in shock

Payal hahahahaha

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#855

LMAO the reference to Saathiya, scary Kokila and two words Ahem 'Ji Mom' was hilarious

they asked for Khushis hand in marriage too :O Arnav needs to come to the rescue

YAY Payal finally had the guts to do something, Khushi is extra shocked to see the sight of Akaash and Payal kissing, and Arnav turns up too

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PrncssOfHeart

@PrncssOfHeart

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#856

Areyy Devi Maiya nd What The together...hahahahaha...

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#857

Awesome update...

So Khushi and Payal both got fixed with those dikra brothers😆 I wonder what will Arnav do now

I loved that move from Payal and I'm glad she came to tell him what she feels for him

I loved the harry potter reference too...Akash does look a bit like him😆

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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#858

Super update

Ab kya hoga devi mayya laaad governor jo khad ehein

Unhe sona nhi hein kya

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ankii543

@ankii543

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#859

Basanti danced awesomely well on this tune...it was sooo gud...nice turn to the ladkewala thing...omg this payal has guts man...did u really use the modis as the ladkewalas...lol..lovely update...

Thanx for the pm...secretsurprise...:)

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#860

Each of u writers seem to be in a competition to outdo the other in ur respective updates & make this all the more hillarious... 😆 😆 😆 really there wasn't a moment in this update that I didn't love & wasn't laughing about - the Lafkewale were Kokila ji, Ahem & Jigar 😆 ...Ahem's Ji Mom had me in splits...Payal calls Aakash as her Harry Potterji n she wishes to go to their Hogwarts 😆 ...the end was just epic ... Arnav & Khushi witnessing their shy reserved siblings in such a position 😉 ...waiting for the reactions