Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it Right#2-note, pg143

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

edited (chapter 8) ---

You truly gave justice to this update! I am sure this was a hard update since you're tying the broken pieces of Khushi and Arnav's reaction, but there was not an ounce of boredom!!! It was full of energy and quick remarks. I loved your use of words. The sarcasm, OH MAAA GOODNESSS!!!! Bam-bam, to the point! I could see its and bits of the show, and nostalgia took over... I felt like this update was full of mischief with extra zing! Starting with Khushi's over planning brain and with her 'don't think before speaking' policy to Arnav's over thinking brain and calculative moves... this was a wooonderfulll update!!!!loved, loved, loved it!!! :)

now you got me waiting for the next update! I wonder what arnav is planning???!! hmmm...

Edited by aycma98 - 12 years ago

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blablabla_mo7

@blablabla_mo7

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Hehehe that was good... NK was hilarious with his lota. Arnav and Khushi's madness

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

🤣Nk sayi g lotas!!!!! That got me

Khushi is sure crazy and I can see Arnav is getting a little jelly

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Amazing collab guys.. Great to see that everytime its a new wrter for each chapter but the enthusiasm n flow of story is always on track... great udpate... Miss NK too much... lotas ROFL 😊

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neha

@arshiipkkndluv

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

nk is awesome..lota!! 😆 ...nice update..

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blackdice1001

@blackdice1001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

burst out laughing when she called him a shrew 😆

ahaha i love arnav threatening NK, always a treat to see the business tycoon irritated. lota's 😆

and now a note on the door? arnav can't stay away from her can he?

great job InvisibleSmile 😃

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Payal's so dramatic :D ... No wonder, coz after all, she's Khushi Kumari Gupta's sister... I liked the easy banter between Arnav and Anjali... And, not to forget, the ever hilarious NK... And now, waiting for the world war (or world peace) to kick-start... ;)

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 12 years ago